保护环境是我们义不容辞的责任请你根据以下图画提示英语作文
篇一:英语作文专项训练
英语作文专项训练
1. 一杯水举一分钟很轻松,举一小时手臂要酸痛,举一天你就会……面对长时间的压力(pressure);是走出户外,呼吸新鲜空气?还是捧读书卷,感悟文字书香?是促膝交流,体会友谊温暖?还是……请你围绕面对学习压力如何放松自己这一话题,展开思路谈谈你的感想。 要求:,
1.请根据所提供的信息材料和话题(不要逐句翻译),写出结构严谨、条理清晰、语言丰富优美、语法准确、可读性强的短文。 2.至少80词。
3.不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。
4.题目自拟。
2. 最近你和父母就你要参加校篮球队一事交换了意见,各自阐述了观点。 现在请你参照表内所提供的信息,写一篇英语短文。
注意:1、开头部分已写好,你只需接着写。
2、所写内容必须包括表格中他们的想法和你的至少三个想法。
3、词数:70个左右。
Should I be allowed to join the school basketball team?
3. 你们学校最近就“一个好朋友的标准”做了一次问卷调查,调查结果如下图(阴影部分)。
请你以“What a good friend should be like”为题,用英语为你们学校的校报写一篇短文,报道此次调查结果并谈谈自己的看法。 ………………
注意:1. 词数:80-100(开头已给出的内容不计入总词数); 2. 内容必须包括上图中的要点,可适当发挥; 3. 文章条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺; 4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。What a good friend should be like
Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. Zhou Hui和Ge Bin是“一帮一”活动中结成的一对学习伙伴。 Zhou Hui在Ge Bin的帮助下有了明显的进步。请根据下表信息写一篇60字左右的短文。(开头已写出,不计入总词数)
5 请你根据下列提供的相关信息,以“My Sister”为题,写一篇短文。
内容要点:我姐姐是一名中学英语教师。中等身材,戴一副眼镜。工作努力,经常帮助需要帮助的人。热爱关心学生。能歌善舞,喜欢打乒乓球。今年将作为志愿者去四川一所中学教英语。我爱姐姐。
要求: 1.短文内容信息要完整。2. 60—80 词, 可适当发挥。3.文中不能出现姐姐的真实姓名 6.(2009年扬州市)
假如你是Meimei,你的英语老师Miss Jiang对你的英语学习给予了很大帮助,和你是好朋
友。现在,她去四川支教已经一年。请根据以下信息,用英语给Miss Jiang写一封信。
要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2)必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右(信的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名和校名等。 Dear Miss Jiang,
How time flies! It has been a year since you went to teach in Sichuan. How are you getting on? Best wishes!
Yours
sincerely,
Meimei
7 以“A person I will never forget”为题,写一篇英语短文。 要求如下:
1. 短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等; 2. 短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名; 3. 词数80左右。
A person I will never forget
8 下面是疾控中心(CDC)关于预防甲型流感(A/H1N1)的几幅宣传画,请你根据这些图画写出一些防控甲型流感的建议。
要求:1、每幅图写一条表述完整的建议,不受图画顺序的限制。图中文字供参考。 2、根据你个人观点,补充一至两条建议。 3、词数70至90。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Here are some suggestionsto helpyou stay away from A/H1N1
9. 为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅,你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well? ”为主题的英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文。(以上背景内容无需表述)
短文要点如下:
1.学生应该守时,守信,不撒谎,不说脏话; 2.礼貌待人,热心助人;
3.遵守交通规则;不在公共场所喧哗,不乱扔垃圾; 4.请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法。 要求:
1.不要逐词翻译。
2.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。
3.词数60-80左右。短文首句已给出,不计入词数。 参考词汇:dirty adj. obey v. promise n.
10. 难忘的初中生活就要结束了。假如你是韩梅,即将迎来全新的高中生活。为了尽快适应新的环境,你打算在英语俱乐部的QQ群里留言,谈一谈自己在高中学习、生活和与人相处等方面可能遇到的问题,并向大家寻求帮助。 1词数:80词左右; 注意:○
2 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称; ○
3 留言开头已经给出,不计入总词数。 ○
篇二:高中英语考点精析精练 看图作文类(书面表达)
看图作文类
本类考题解答锦囊
近几年来,看图作文在高考书面表达中占有相当大的比例。如2000年的全国卷、20典型例题季高考卷、20典型例题卷、20典型例题、20典型例题季高考卷、20典型例题考卷、20典型例题,20典型例题考卷及20典型例题卷等都是看图作文。由于这类题型的特点是:形象、直观、内容具体,且在图画的前面一般还有文字说明,因此考生一般都有话可写且不会走题。但在写作时应注意的是:
1.仔细阅读图画及文字说明,首先应确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文或说明文为主。
记叙文:要抓住记叙文的六要素:时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(w~)和过程(how)。即:五个“W”和一个“H”。根据图画提示把这六个问题写清楚了,至少可得及格分数。如2000年的全国高考题,时间:2000年2月8日清晨;地点:公园外的公园路上;A物;“我”、一个老头;事件;这个老头被一辆黄色小车撞倒,“我”把他送到了附近的医院;原因:司机害怕承担责任而逃走,过程:“我”当时正沿着公园路散步。
说明文:一般先要把图画联系起来,弄清楚图画的目的、意图;然后进行抽象概括,找出一个说明对象,接着根据图画从时间、过程、步骤等方面加以解释、说明;最后进行总结,得出结论。对事物进行说明时,一定要做到条理清楚,明了易懂。如20典型例题考英语试题,作者首先告诉对方已经为他找到了房间,接着介绍房间的情况,最后征求对方的意见。 2.确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写,一般采用第一人称;如果是以讲故事的形式来写,则一般采用第三人称来写比较方便。但不管用哪种人称,全文都必须一致。
3.确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁,确定文章所要用的时态。切记全文时态的一致性。
4.发挥联想要合理、适度。这类文章的说明一般都要求考生作适当的联想和发挥,以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。但联想和发挥一定要根据图画做到合情合理,不能过多地胡乱联想和发挥。如20典型例题考题,如果告诉对方:我几乎把城市找遍了,终于为你找到了一套房子。这样联想显然是可以的。然而,倘若你写成:我到东城区去找,那边的房子太贵;于是,我又到西城区去找,而那里正在建设之中,条件不太好;接着,我又到南城区去找,发现那里离新建的华文学校又太远了??像这样的联想和发挥就太夸张了。
5.虚实结合,详略得当。对于图画中的内容,该详细叙述、描写的,就必须要详细、具体;可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。也就是平常老师所讲的有时要泼墨如水,而有时又要惜墨如金。如图画中所有的时间、数字或言论需一词不漏地写清楚,而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。 Ⅰ 高考最新热门题 1(典型例题
假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生,暑假打算去乡村度假。请根据下面两幅图提供的信息,写一篇短文。简要说明城市生活的不足,重点说明你去乡村度假的原因。
注意:
1.短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息,并做适当发挥,使短文内容连贯、完整;
2.词数:100左右。
命题目的与解题技巧:本题考查图表作文。
【解析】 此书面表达有图画兼文字提示,因此考生在动笔前先要审阅提示。如:文章的体裁为说明文,说明要去乡村度假的原因。 人称:第一人称。
时态:以将来时为主。陈述城乡环境差别时可用一般现在时。
关联词:although,still,so,what’s more,besides,also,above a11等。 写作要点:
1.“我”要去乡下度假的打算。
2.城市化所存在的问题(拥挤、嗓音、空气污染)。 3.乡下的环境(空气、山、水、树木、鸟儿等)。
【答案】
One possible version:
I will spend this summer holiday in the countryside. Although the city is modern and convenient, there are still some problems,such as air pollution, crowdedness and noise. In the countryside I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life. There, the air is fresh and the water is clean, trees are green and birds are singing. I can also go boating, fishing and swimming in the lake. What's more, I can climb the hills. All this will be interesting and good for my health. Above all, I can learn more about nature. So I want to go to the countryside for a change. I'm looking forward to the coming of my summer holiday. 2.(典型例题
假设你是图①中的男孩。请根据以下图画提供情节线索,以SharingH。usework为题,用英文叙述你帮妈妈做家务的经过及感想。
注意:
1.书面表达必须包括图画所表现的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使其连贯、完整;
2.词数:100词左右.
题目的与解题技巧:本题考查看图写一个故事。
【解析】本文记叙“我”帮妈妈做家务的经过,叙述的是已经做过的事,因此用过去时。要点:1.见妈妈同时做几件事情,觉得妈妈太累,决定帮妈妈做一点家务活;2.在帮妈妈洗衣服时,“我”的朋友来叫我去踢球,“我”拒绝了;3.等把衣服洗完时,“我”累得满头大汗;4.妈妈见“我”把衣服洗好了,夸“我”是个好孩子,“我”感到非常高兴。
【答案】
One possible version:
One day when I was about to play football, I saw Mother was taking a lot of dirty clothes to wash and a bucket to carry water. I thought Mother was very tired, so I decided to help her wash clothes. While I was doing the washing , Li Ming came and asked me to play football with him. I refused him and told him that I would help Mother finish the housework first. When I got the housework done,I was so tired that I was sweating all over. When Mother came back home, she found I had washed all the dirty clothes and said that I was a good child . I felt very happy. 3.(典型例题卷)
20典型例题日,你的美国朋友给你写了一封信,祝贺北京申奥成功。收到信后,你给他写了一封回信,介绍了你们是如何庆祝申奥成功的。回信应包括下列图画所示内容,并邀请他在2008年来中
注意:
1.词数100左右; 2.信的开头和结尾已写好。
参考词汇:竞标成功win the bid for
出墙报put up a wall newspaerDear Bill,
Very glad to receive your letter of Julyl3... Sincerely yours,
Zhang Hua 答案:Dear Bill,
Very glad to receive your letter of July 13. Thank you for your congratulations. I was very excited when I heard that Beiing won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Games. Immediately I called Wei Guo and Li Hong to my house. After a brief discussion we decided to put up a wall newspaper for our class. We hurried to our classroom and
began to work: Wei Guo wrote a poem. Li Hong copied some news from the newspapers. I drew an Olympic flag. The
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next Monday, our classmates were both surprised and overjoyed when they saw the wall newspaper. I hope you can come to China to watch the Olympic Games in 2008. Then I'll be very happy to be your guide. Sincerely yours, Zhang Hua 4.(典型例题
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:
1.词数:100左右。2.参考词汇:房租rent(n.) Dear Bob, _____________________
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__________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案:Dear Bob,
I'm ,so glad to learn that you're coming in September. I've found a place for you. It's a small flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No. 11 can take you
straight to the school. In fact, it is only one stop. Do you think
you'd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know. Yours, Li Hua 5.(典型例题卷)
(1)某英文报“健康生活”栏目正在讨论有关健康食品、体育锻炼与少年儿童肥胖的问题。下面六幅图画是李明 一年中的变化,请根据李明的情况写一篇短文。注意:
1.词数不少于60。2.短文的开头已给出。提示词语:
junk food好吃但不利于健康的食品snacks各种零食
A healthy diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity(肥胖)among childern.Take Li Ming for example. ___
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答案:A healthy diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity(肥胖) among children. Take Li Ming for example.
Li Ming used to be a healthy boy. But over a year ago, he got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks. Besides, he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV, and did little exercise. As a
result,
Li Ming used to be a healthy boy,but_________________________________ ________________
he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs.
So Li Ming decided to change the unhealthy life style. He began to have a balanced, healthy diet. He also took part in various sports activities such as swimming, skating, running and playing basketball. Months later, Li Ming became as fit as before. 6.(典型例题
你和李明参加了一次野外生存训练。以下面5幅图画表现了野外训练的过程,请根据图示写一篇英文日记。 注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.日记的开头与结尾已为你写好。
参考词汇:
指南针:compassn n. 手电筒:flashlightn n. 急救包:first—aidkit 宿营地:campsiten n. SaturdayCloudy
LI Ming and l took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday,and it has been one Of the most unforgetable experiences since high schoo1.
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The two Of us spent the night in the forest.
We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solveproblems.hwasquiteanexperienceforusboth,which I'll never forget for the rest Ofmy life.
答案: Saturday, May 4,20典型例题cloudy
Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.
Early in the morning, we set out. Li Ming was carrying a compass and a tent in his backpack and in mine there was a flashlight, a map, a knife, a first-aid kit, some matches, candles , food, and clothes. On the way to the campsite, we climbed a hill, and then we swam across a river, pushing the backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river.
As we got into a forest, we lost our way. Luckily, we found the right direction with the compass. By the time we arrived at the campsite, it had already been dark. Li Ming then put up the tent, and I made a fire and started cooking.
The two of us spent the night in the forest.
We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems. It was quite an experience for us both, which I'll never forget for the rest of my life. Ⅱ 题点经典类型题 1.(典型例题卷)
简要描述上面图片,并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。命题目的与解题技巧:本题考查对温画的理解。
【解析】这是一个识图题,体裁为说明文。说明自己的观点看法。 2.本文要求用第一人称。 3.时态:一般现在时。 4.写作要点:
①业余时间,学生补习太多,没有自己的时间。
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②表达自己的观点:学生应有自己的时间。 ③理由。 【答案】
One possible version: We Want to Have Our Own Time
As we all know , today students have more and more homework , they use their spare time to do the homework and to take lessons. Then , students have no time for themselves. In my opinion. I think, students Should have more time to develop themselves.
First, students should have some time to relax and play. This doesn't mean that they will waste time. We can also study and learn from the play. After doing the homework for a long time , it is necessary to have some time to relax. "No play and no games makes Jack a dull boy. We don't want to be dull boys. We want to be good students in many ways.
Second, we can have our own time in order to make our body strong enough, this can be helpful in our further study.
After all, I want to say, students should have their own time to develop themselves. writing 2.(典型例题)
请根据下面这幅漫画及提示,以“乐极生悲”(Extreme Joy Begets Sorrow)为题目,写—篇100个词左右的小故事。 故事的开头已为你写出:
Mike was Mr and Mrs Smith'sonly son... 答案:Extreme Joy Begets Sorrow
Mike was Mr and Mrs Smith's only son. They loved him very much. One day Mr Smith bought Mike a new bicycle. The moment he had the bike, Mike rode it around and around. How happy he was! Mr and Mrs Smith stood nearby watching happily. Now Mike managed to ride with his hands off. He shouted," Look at me!' How proud he felt!
While he was looking at his parents cheerfully, Mike spee ded
up the bike. Oh, no! Off the bike fell the overjoyed boy. He got badly hurt. Mr and Mrs Smith went into deep sorrow. It was the right saying "Extreme joy begets sorrow". The accident teaches that we must think of danger in time of joy. 3.(典型例题)
你是Tom,五年后再次来到这个城市,发现它变化很大(如图所示),你给朋友Rose发电子邮件,告诉她这里的变化。 注意:1.字数:约100字。
2.注:立交桥overpass;私家车privatecar 答案: Dear Rose,
Now I'd like to tell you something about the city. Great changes have taken place in it. First, more high buildings have appeared, which are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have been set up. Besides, a lot of families have got cars of their own. The people's life here has become rich and colorful. People from other countries come here They can enjoy them selves travelling on holidays.
To my delight, I can taste delicious food of different coun tries. I live a happy life today. Welcome to the city again.
yours truly, Tom
篇三:英语作文
一、低碳与环保
低碳与环保
构思点拨
图片中一个小男孩,早已进入甜蜜的梦乡,电视却依然在播放,这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视,还责备他为什么总是忘记关电视。显然,直观看来,这幅图是在告诉我们要节约用电。但是,我们如果从更宏观,更深层次的角度去思考,这幅图正是在告诉我们一个流行的生活理念:低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡导一种低碳环保的生活方式。因此本文的内容和结构可如下:
第一段:描述图画;第二段:列举现象,分析影响;第三段:建议措施,展望未来。思维拓展
环保话题,例如节约能源、拼车、交通问题等图片都可以与低碳生活的理念相联系,从低碳的角度入手展开写作。
高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon
dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4. 71 kilogram each month。
To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。
佳作妙译
如上图生动地展示,一个小男孩正在沙发上舒适地睡觉,电视还开着。这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视,责怪小男孩又忘了关电视。
这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见。很多人习惯于做什么事情都开着电视,实际上并不看。这种习惯会导致电力和能源的浪费,这会导致碳排放。这偏离了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指,减少碳,尤其是二氧化碳的排放,以保护环境,实现可持续发展。根据统计数据,如果我们每天把开电视的时间减少一小时,则每个月可以减少4. 17千克的碳排放量。
作为对地球负责任的管理者,我们必须在公众中推广并普及低碳的生活方式,从日常生活中的每个细节开始。我们必须要改变为了获得短期的快速经济发展,牺牲长期的环境健康的做法,转向发展绿色经济、循环经济以及低碳经济。所有这些有效的措施可以帮助我们实现社会发展与自然有序发展之间的和谐。
名师点评
① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡,也可以表达为 A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”这类副词的加入,使得描述更生动活泼,而不是单调的主谓宾。
② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。
该句主干结构是:A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。这个句型的含义是:一件事情正在发生(正在睡觉),突然发生了另一件事(妈妈来关电视)。
“with the television on”: with 引导的伴随结构,即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on. 也可以写成伴随状语A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。
“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”,这句是妈妈关电视的伴随动作,一边关电视,一边责怪孩子忘记关电视。
图画描述这句,写得越精彩越好,这句是先入为主的句子,也是阅卷老师重点看的句子。③ are used to doing: 习惯于做某事,使用短语表达,地道准确。
④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:这是2005年真题阅读中的原句,的文章里面的句型,引用的标准到位。
一般而言,环保类话题,都可以用这句话,引出第三段的个人评论。
历年真题是一座巨大的宝库,我们一定要充分利用,举一反三。
二、网络的利与弊
到底听谁的?
思路点拨
本图中,一个女孩正在因一个问题感到困惑,“10牛的水是否产生10牛的浮力?”。于是她上网求助于网友,网友的答案更是五花八门,说对说错的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可见,这幅图反应了这样一个现实:网络文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以这样设计:
第一段:描述图画;第二段:网络的利+举例,网络的弊+举例;第三段:提出建议措施——取其精华,去其糟粕。
思路拓展
所有利弊型的文章,均可按照本范文提供的思路进行论述。例如,城市化的利与弊。大学扩招的利与弊等。
高分范文
Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online. Answers from different
netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①. It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。
The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience. For example, we can get knowledge abou(转 载于:wWw.zW2.cn 爱作文 网)t nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on. On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③. For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating. Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time. On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided. Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。
佳作妙译
如图所示,图片中一个女孩正在网上问一个问题,来自于网友的答案差异太大了,以至于女孩很困惑到底该听谁的。很明显,人们面临困境的时候上网提问的现象已经成为一种时尚。
这幅图所隐含的意义可以阐释如下。一方面,因特网为我们提供了很大便利。例如,通过百度等搜索引擎键入一些命令、点击几下鼠标,我们就可以获得几乎各个领域的知识。另一方面,由于因特网上有海量的信息,很难区分好的信息和坏的信息。例如青少年可能会把错误的信息误认为是正确的,其结果是非常具有毁灭性的。网上的一些不健康信息也可能会给人们带来负面影响。
总之,一方面,充分利用因特网来提高效率,节约时间,这很重要。另一方面,应该采取有效的措施教育人们去排除网上不合适的甚至错误的数据,以免被误导。只有这样,网络才能更好地为我们的生活、学习和工作服务。
名师点评
① so… that 句型:如此……以至于……。
② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 这是2004年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。
③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 这是2003年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。可见,充分了解真题阅读,对于提高写作的帮助作用也很大。
④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work:倒装句。
倒装句的写法(部分倒装):
原句:The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。
only放在句首,把情态动词can和主语交换一下位置就写成了倒装句。
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三、醉酒驾车与安全意识、社会责任
醉酒驾车与安全意识、社会责任
思路点拨
图画中一个已经喝得烂醉如泥的司机,车顶上还驮着一瓶巨大的啤酒,汽车却依然在路上飞驰。虽然这幅图有点夸张,但是它却反映了一个触目惊心的安全问题:醉酒驾车。写作时可以按照以下的脉络展开论述:
第一段:描述图画;第二段:分两个分论点进行论述:提高安全意识、提高社会责任感;
第三段:建议措施、强调后果。思维拓展
实际上,本文的内容和行文思路,不仅仅适用于醉酒驾车,还适用于所有关于安全事故和社会责任的图片话题。
例如,火灾、漏油事故、施工事故、违反交规等等一系列与安全或社会责任感相关的话题,都可以参考此文。
只需要把第一段中间那句图画描述替换掉即可。
参考下图片:
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高分范文
What a scary and sensational scene it is! In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car. What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。
The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of
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