这句话英语语法对吗……When after bleak and lonely years in an Englishpublic school,he retured to India,he suddenly felt a strong desire wo write………………虽然两个逗号之间是插入语,但是插入语里主谓齐全啊,后面

这句话英语语法对吗……When after bleak and lonely years in an Englishpublic school,he retured to India,he suddenly felt a strong desire wo write………………虽然两个逗号之间是插入语,但是插入语里主谓齐全啊,后面 When do you have an English test?这句话对吗？ when will you be away?这句话对吗? when did tom lose his new pen这句话对吗 When will you comeback这句话对吗?分析下 When is your birthday?回答：October.这句话对吗 When did your parents go on vacation这句话对吗 WHEN have you been to BEIJING?这句话对吗 when are you going to go there?这句话对吗? When I came back it is raining 这句话对吗? when did they visit the great wall?这句话对吗 i watch TV when eatting.这句话表达对吗 When is the Teacher's day 这句话对吗? 英语语法today's hard work leads to splendid life这句话对吗? 英语语法纠正这句话语法对吗?His dance is really good 英语语法：When he was finished.这句话有无多重含义?有无歧义?为什么不用When he finished. .when i was ten.when i was ten years old 这两句话都对吗 When are you going in vacation?这句话对吗是不是When are you going for vacation?