Here is my Short essay,Please tell me what is the wrong about it.Thank you~我有一个梦想在我10岁时,就认识了美国鼎鼎大名的皮货商人皮塞罗,他告诉我人活着就一定要有自己的梦想.他一边笑着,一边让我眺望

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