Hello,everyone,I from Class One,Grade Seven.(改错)We're all love our parents very much.(改错)Whose that man with a pair of sunglasses?(改错) We don't have an art room,so we have two music rooms.(改错)The American girl would like to have long

Hello,everyone,I from Class One,Grade Seven.(改错)We're all love our parents very much.(改错)Whose that man with a pair of sunglasses?(改错) We don't have an art room,so we have two music rooms.(改错)The American girl would like to have long
Hello,everyone,I from Class One,Grade Seven.(改错)We're all love our parents very much.(改错)Whose that man with a pair of sunglasses?(改错) We don't have an art room,so we have two music rooms.(改错)The American girl would like to have long black hairs.(改错) 写出解题思路.
直接把正确的句子写下来，解题思路也要。

Hello,everyone,I from Class One,Grade Seven.(改错)We're all love our parents very much.(改错)Whose that man with a pair of sunglasses?(改错) We don't have an art room,so we have two music rooms.(改错)The American girl would like to have long
1.I后面加am (be from来自,丢了be动词）
2.We're改为We （句中的动词love作谓语,去掉are)
3.Whose改为Who's （whose表示“谁的”,who‘s表示“谁是”）
4.so改为but （so表示因果,but表示转折）
5.hairs改为hair (hair是个不可数名词）

I am from 缺系动词
去掉're 一般现在时
whose改成who's 谁，不是谁的
so改成but，逻辑错误，表转折
hairs改成hair，头发不可数。
Hello,everyone,I am from Class One,Grade Seven.
We all love our parents very much.
Who'...

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I am from 缺系动词
去掉're 一般现在时
whose改成who's 谁，不是谁的
so改成but，逻辑错误，表转折
hairs改成hair，头发不可数。
Hello,everyone,I am from Class One,Grade Seven.
We all love our parents very much.
Who's that man with a pair of sunglasses? We don't have an art room,but we have two music rooms.
The American girl would like to have long black hair.

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Hello,everyone,I (am) from Class One,Grade Seven.
We('re,去掉）all love our parents very much.
Whose（改为Who is) that man with a pair of sunglasses.
We don't have an art room,so (改为but）we have two music rooms.
The American girl would like to have long black hairs.(hairs 改为hair）

第一句， I‘m from Class one, 少谓语
第二句， we all love our.. , love 为此句谓语，一般现在时 are 不能和动词同时出现
第三句， who is that man, whose 后面只能加名次
第四句， but we have two music, 两句有转折是转折的意思 不是递近，
第五句，hair, ...

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第一句， I‘m from Class one, 少谓语
第二句， we all love our.. , love 为此句谓语，一般现在时 are 不能和动词同时出现
第三句， who is that man, whose 后面只能加名次
第四句， but we have two music, 两句有转折是转折的意思 不是递近，
第五句，hair, 头发不可数，不用复数

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