帮我检查一下语法错误吧 There are several human rights are at issue in the situation,article 3 says that people have the right to live,and to live in freedom and safety.Article 5 says that nobody has the right to torture you.And article 7 s

帮我检查一下语法错误吧 There are several human rights are at issue in the situation,article 3 says that people have the right to live,and to live in freedom and safety.Article 5 says that nobody has the right to torture you.And article 7 s
帮我检查一下语法错误吧
There are several human rights are at issue in the situation,article 3 says that people have the right to live,and to live in freedom and safety.Article 5 says that nobody has the right to torture you.And article 7 says the law is the same for everyone; it should be applied in the same way to all.For article 3,gay men in Iraq didn’t have this right; they lived in fear,and faced the chance that could be killed everyday.For the article 5,gay men didn’t have this right either,police and followers of a religion tortured them and even some family member tortured them.Fro article 7,the law wasn’t same for everyone; they didn’t get same treat as everyone else just because their religion doesn’t allow the homosexual to live.I think maybe the nation will get the benefit from that,because the aim of what they have done is for keep a man be a “man”.Stop them be more feminize.But I don’t think the society will get the benefit from that.

帮我检查一下语法错误吧 There are several human rights are at issue in the situation,article 3 says that people have the right to live,and to live in freedom and safety.Article 5 says that nobody has the right to torture you.And article 7 s
修改过了.句子结构没错,时态比较混乱.
There are several human rights issues in the situation.Article 3 says that people have the right to live,and to live in freedom and safety.Article 5 says that nobody has the right to torture another person.And article 7 says the law is the same for everyone; it should be applied in the same way to all.For article 3,gay men in Iraq do not have this right; they live in fear and face the threat of being killed everyday.For article 5,gay men do not have this right either.Police and religious followers would torture them and for some,even family member torture them.For article 7,the law is not same for everyone; they do not get the same treatment as everyone else just because their religion doesn't allow the homosexual to live.I think maybe the nation will benefit from this,because the aim of what they are doing is to make a man be a "man" and stop them from being feminine.But I don't think the society will benefit from this.