Yesterday,when I visited my cousin,I find he went to the bathroom very often.He didn't look like alright."What is wrong about you?"I asked him."I think I had too many milk this morning,"he said.I asked him how.He said,"My mother went to a supermaket

Yesterday,when I visited my cousin,I find he went to the bathroom very often.He didn't look like alright."What is wrong about you?"I asked him."I think I had too many milk this morning,"he said.I asked him how.He said,"My mother went to a supermaket
Yesterday,when I visited my cousin,I find he went to the bathroom very often.He didn't look like alright."What is wrong about you?"I asked him."I think I had too many milk this morning,"he said.I asked him how.He said,"My mother went to a supermaket yesterday afternoon.When she saw some milk on sale,she bought three big bottle.We had to finish all milk this morning because it was no longer fresh."I knew what she meant.My aunt wanted to save some money through buy the cheap milk.I real don't think she should have done that.

Yesterday,when I visited my cousin,I find he went to the bathroom very often.He didn't look like alright."What is wrong about you?"I asked him."I think I had too many milk this morning,"he said.I asked him how.He said,"My mother went to a supermaket
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Ysterday, when I visted my cousin, I (found) he went to the bathrom very often. He didn't look (去掉like) alright. "What's wrong with you?” I asked him. "I think I had too (much) milk this morning," he ...

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Ysterday, when I visted my cousin, I (found) he went to the bathrom very often. He didn't look (去掉like) alright. "What's wrong with you?” I asked him. "I think I had too (much) milk this morning," he said. I asked him (why). He said, "My mother went to (the) supermarket yesterday afternoon. When she saw some milk on sale, she bought three big (bottles). We had to finish all (加入the) milk this moring because it was no longer fresh." I knew what (he) meant. My aunt wanted to save money through (buying) the cheap milk. I (really) don't think she shoud have done that.

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