这句英语怎么改下好Some childrenwatch TV Programs for a long time every day,but some of them have many habits,such as footballand basketball,and they will exercise after watching TV.感觉这么说不好.前面说hobits 是足球篮球 后面

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这句英语怎么改下好Some childrenwatch TV Programs for a long time every day,but some of them have many habits,such as footballand basketball,and they will exercise after watching TV.感觉这么说不好.前面说hobits 是足球篮球 后面
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这句英语怎么改下好Some childrenwatch TV Programs for a long time every day,but some of them have many habits,such as footballand basketball,and they will exercise after watching TV.感觉这么说不好.前面说hobits 是足球篮球 后面
这句英语怎么改下好
Some childrenwatch TV Programs for a long time every day,but some of them have many habits,such as footballand basketball,and they will exercise after watching TV.
感觉这么说不好.前面说hobits 是足球篮球 后面又是exercise 有点不对应

这句英语怎么改下好Some childrenwatch TV Programs for a long time every day,but some of them have many habits,such as footballand basketball,and they will exercise after watching TV.感觉这么说不好.前面说hobits 是足球篮球 后面
你好,修改如下:Some children watch TV programs for a long time every day, but others will choose to exercise such as playing football and basketball after watching TV.
满意请速速采纳,谢谢合作!

我建议修改,请参考:some children watch TV for a long time every day, but some have
many habits that they will excercise after watching TV, such as football and basketball.

把exercise 改为 do exercise,这样exercise 就由动词锻炼变为了名词锻炼,足球、篮球都算锻炼的一种。。可能会好些= =