谁能帮我修改下面的一段英语短文,(1)I was digging in the garden for a lost gold ring.Searching everywhere,but nothing had been found except an unvalue old coin instead.(2)The owner of the shop who wanted to know how his assistants polite

谁能帮我修改下面的一段英语短文,(1)I was digging in the garden for a lost gold ring.Searching everywhere,but nothing had been found except an unvalue old coin instead.(2)The owner of the shop who wanted to know how his assistants polite
谁能帮我修改下面的一段英语短文,
(1)I was digging in the garden for a lost gold ring.Searching everywhere,but nothing had been found except an unvalue old coin instead.
(2)The owner of the shop who wanted to know how his assistants polite wask,after dressing up an old cloth and went into the shop.Hardly the owner asked for sth then the assistant said "GO OUT,Beggar."Of course,in the end,this man was fired.

谁能帮我修改下面的一段英语短文,(1)I was digging in the garden for a lost gold ring.Searching everywhere,but nothing had been found except an unvalue old coin instead.(2)The owner of the shop who wanted to know how his assistants polite
I was searching in the garden for a lost gold ring.Searching everywhere,but I had been found nothing except an unvaluable old coin instead

把第一句的digging改成searching，第二句的sth不要用缩写形势，其他的就没什么了

I was digging in the garden for a lost gold ring .Having searched everywhere,yet nothing had been foud except an unvaluable old coin instead.
The owner of the shop who wanted to know how polite hi...

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I was digging in the garden for a lost gold ring .Having searched everywhere,yet nothing had been foud except an unvaluable old coin instead.
The owner of the shop who wanted to know how polite his staff(我觉得staff比assistant要贴切）were,after dressing up old rags, went into the shop.Even before the owner asked for sth ,the waiter said "GET(比GO要地道） OUT,Beggar."Of course,in the end,this man was fired.

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(1)I was digging in the garden for a lost gold ring.Searching everywhere,nothing had been found except an unvalue old coin instead.
(2)The owner of the shop wanted to know how his assistants poli...

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(1)I was digging in the garden for a lost gold ring.Searching everywhere,nothing had been found except an unvalue old coin instead.
(2)The owner of the shop wanted to know how his assistants polite were,after dressing up old cloth he went into the shop.After the owner asked for sth the assistant said "GO OUT,Beggar."Of course,in the end,this man was fired.

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