[11/18] |correct the mistakes in the composition|请挑出这些句子的语法错误/注意仔细看看句中的每个介词是不是有错/还有语句不流畅之处{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}/并改正/.[1]I found a new

[11/18] |correct the mistakes in the composition|请挑出这些句子的语法错误/注意仔细看看句中的每个介词是不是有错/还有语句不流畅之处{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}/并改正/.[1]I found a new
[11/18] |correct the mistakes in the composition|
请挑出这些句子的语法错误/
注意仔细看看句中的每个介词是不是有错/
还有语句不流畅之处{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}/
并改正/
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[1]I found a new life's pleasure today.
[2]Writing light novel make me very excited.
[3]Though my literary style isn't so graceful.
[4]I think writing can change my living state that is now short of imagination.
[5]Writing has its own charm that I have never found before.
[6]I once thought only painting would be my life.
[7]I don't look forward to writing such a profound story,but just want to make every reader take easy.
[8]It's a love story.
[9]I think love shouldn't be a heavy thing.
[10]I want it to be warm,but not hot.
[11]So I wrote the story into a light comedy.
[12]Thus I never thought much of soap-dramas.
[13]I only wrote a few leading roles in my play.
[14]The story is about a girl in ancient china who skip the time and fall in present-day.
[15]Some piffle in the story made me ashamed,I couldn't believe such the silly sentences were wrote by me,but I love them.
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英语太烂,现在坚持每天写作文,请各位大大帮忙改改错|||前几天的在这里:

[11/18] |correct the mistakes in the composition|请挑出这些句子的语法错误/注意仔细看看句中的每个介词是不是有错/还有语句不流畅之处{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的}/并改正/.[1]I found a new
[1]I found a new life's pleasure today.
- I found a new pleasure of life today.
[2]Writing light novel make me very excited.
- writing light novels make me very excited.
or - it makes me very excited to write light novels.
[3]Though my literary style isn't so graceful.
- although my literacy style isn't so graceful..(句子不完 整,需要接着说 but .)
[4]I think writing can change my living state that is now short of imagination.
- I think writing can improve my living condition which is currently lack of imagination.
[5]Writing has its own charm that I have never found before.
没错
[6]I once thought only painting would be my life.
- I once thought that only painting would dominate my life.
[7]I don't look forward to writing such a profound story,but just want to make every reader take easy.
- I don't look forward to writing such a profound story,but i just want that every reader takes it easy.
[8]It's a love story.
没错
[9]I think love shouldn't be a heavy thing.
- I think love shouldn't be a burden.
[10]I want it to be warm,but not hot.
- i want it to be warm-hearted,but not boiling hot.
[11]So I wrote the story into a light comedy.
没错
[12]Thus I never thought much of soap-dramas.
Thus i never thought much of a soap-drama.
[13]I only wrote a few leading roles in my play.
I only wrote a few main characters in my play.
[14]The story is about a girl in ancient china who skip the time and fall in present-day.
The story is about a girl in ancient China who skipped time and fell into the present.
[15]Some piffle in the story made me ashamed,I couldn't believe such the silly sentences were wrote by me,but I love them.
Some piffles in the story made me embarrassed.I couldn't believe that such silly sentences were wrote by me,but I just love them.
虽然语法应该没错了,但因为没有中文版本所以不太清楚你想要表达的意思,所以有些句子的意思可能表达不是很清楚或者和你原本想要表达的会有一定差距.