My advice about whether you come back after you graduate in abroad is that you should work in China.怎么改?我怎么感觉怪怪的.对了如果你有更好的表达也可以附下.写作文凑字所以应该废话些。还有骚 包些。

My advice about whether you come back after you graduate in abroad is that you should work in China.怎么改?我怎么感觉怪怪的.对了如果你有更好的表达也可以附下.写作文凑字所以应该废话些。还有骚 包些。
My advice about whether you come back after you graduate in abroad is that you should work in China.
怎么改?
我怎么感觉怪怪的.对了如果你有更好的表达也可以附下.
写作文
凑字
所以应该废话些。
还有骚 包些。

My advice about whether you come back after you graduate in abroad is that you should work in China.怎么改?我怎么感觉怪怪的.对了如果你有更好的表达也可以附下.写作文凑字所以应该废话些。还有骚 包些。
你对语法掌握得不错,问题在于不会用简洁的表达.英语其实和汉语一样,绕来绕去、从句套从句的说法一般情况下是不用的.
另一个问题是,不要按汉语原句的结构来表达英语,要练习直接用英语来表达一个意思.
建议改为：
I advise you to come back after your study abroad.

My advice on whether you come back after graduating on abroad is that you should work in China.

My advice is that you should work in China after you have graduated from abroad