Nowadays,international communication become frequently.As is vividly revealed in the picture,we learn that a beautiful foreign girl is wearing traditional Chinese cloths with her sweet smile.She looks special because of the western trait and oriental

Nowadays,international communication become frequently.As is vividly revealed in the picture,we learn that a beautiful foreign girl is wearing traditional Chinese cloths with her sweet smile.She looks special because of the western trait and oriental
Nowadays,international communication become frequently.As is vividly revealed in the picture,we learn that a beautiful foreign girl is wearing traditional Chinese cloths with her sweet smile.She looks special because of the western trait and oriental cloths.
The symbolic meaning of this photo is to show us that utmost importance should be attached to culture global.I assume there are several possible factors can be interpreted this phenomenon.The first is that traditional Chinese culture is recognized by more and more foreigners.The major reason is due to our speeding development of communicate measures.They make the world change into a global village.Perhaps,the primary cause is we have a splendid,long history and worldwide fame national culture.
With this situation,as far as I am concerned,all we should lay more emphasis on is what we can do and how we can virtually increasing culture exchange.In my opinion,national culture as a precious spiritual treasure should be preserved and cherished.But more importantly,a traditional culture should be worldwide accepted,respected,appreciated and shared.Only in this way can we make our world dimensional,colorful and vigorous.
尤其是语法方面!

Nowadays,international communication become frequently.As is vividly revealed in the picture,we learn that a beautiful foreign girl is wearing traditional Chinese cloths with her sweet smile.She looks special because of the western trait and oriental
Nowadays,international communication has become a method used quite frequently in the world.As the picture clearly shows us,a beautiful foreign girl is wearing traditional Chinese clothes while smiling a dazzling smile.She appears strange because her western traits seem to conflict with the oriental clothes she wears.The symbolic meaning of this photo is that an utmost importance should be attached to the global culture.In my opinion,there are several possible factors that sprang up as a result of this phenomenon.The first of which is that traditional Chinese culture is being recognized by more and more foreigners; this is due in large part to the Chinese's rapid development of communication measures,which aims to change the world into a global village.Second,China's ancient history claims acknowledgment from the rest of the world.
As far as I'm concerned,I believe that we should place more emphasis on what we can do now to increase the culture exchange between China and the rest of the world.In my opinion,national culture is a precious treasure that deserve to be cherished and preserved.More importantly,a traditional culture ought to be accepted,respected,appreciated,and shared worldwide,as only then,can we make our world more multicultural,interesting,and lively.
作文有点问题,我帮你把一些句子改了一下,语法错误改掉了.
然后有些地方我加了一些句子.现在整个作文读起来好多了!
对了.楼主作文里有很多形容词用的不对.
比如,英文里不可以说 "our world dimensional,colorful,and vigorous."
Vigorous 一般是指某某人或某某事情,不能用来描述这个世界.
同样,dimensional 和 colorful 也不是用来描述世界/地球的.
还有,"speeding development" 这里最好用 rapid 代替 speeding.
加油!