I think it's necessary to sum up the experience of learning English.Here,I want to talk about three problems about it.First,reading a lot should be looked at the key of leaning English.Second,it is also very important to learn some articles in heart.

I think it's necessary to sum up the experience of learning English.Here,I want to talk about three problems about it.First,reading a lot should be looked at the key of leaning English.Second,it is also very important to learn some articles in heart.
I think it's necessary to sum up the experience of learning English.Here,I want to talk about three problems about it.
First,reading a lot should be looked at the key of leaning English.Second,it is also very important to learn some articles in heart.On the one hand,rote learning is really has no advantage.On the other hand,it will benefit us by reciting some good articles.We will feel much easier when we express our thoughts in English if we have a lot of good articles in our heads.At last,it's the most important that using the knowlege we have learned in our lives.
We could improve our English by reading more,writing more,listening more and speaking more.

I think it's necessary to sum up the experience of learning English.Here,I want to talk about three problems about it.First,reading a lot should be looked at the key of leaning English.Second,it is also very important to learn some articles in heart.
1.‘reading a lot should be looked at the key...’应该是‘reading a lot is the key...’或者‘reading a lot should be treated as the key...’
2.‘On the one hand, rote learning is really has no advantage’应该是‘On one hand, rote learning really has no advantage’或者‘On the one hand, rote learning really does not help much’
3.‘if we have a lot of good articles in our heads’应该是‘if we remember a lot of good articles’
4.‘it's the most important that using the knowlege we have learned in our lives’应该是‘it's the most important to use the knowlege we have learned in our daily lives’
5. ‘We could improve our English by reading more, writing more,listening more and speaking more’一般是‘We could improve our English through more reading, more writing, more listening and more speaking’

On the one hand 错
应该是on one hand....on the other hand...
rote learning is really has no advantage 错了
应该是rote learning really has no advantage
其他的都还好

说白了,没有多大语法错误,但总体感觉就是别扭,直译的中国式英语
楼主不要介意,建议多背些短小但经典的英文原著,越多越好,相信你写出来的英文就会不一样的地道,流畅
比如最后的:"At last,it's the most important that using the knowlege we have learned in our lives.'
可以改成:"Last bu...

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说白了,没有多大语法错误,但总体感觉就是别扭,直译的中国式英语
楼主不要介意,建议多背些短小但经典的英文原著,越多越好,相信你写出来的英文就会不一样的地道,流畅
比如最后的:"At last,it's the most important that using the knowlege we have learned in our lives.'
可以改成:"Last but not least ,we should use the knowlege learned in our lives'

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reading a lot should be looked ,可能错了。

reading a lot should be looked at the key of leaning English---
reading a lot should be the key to learn english
in heart -----by heart
if we have a lot of good articles in our heads’---...

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reading a lot should be looked at the key of leaning English---
reading a lot should be the key to learn english
in heart -----by heart
if we have a lot of good articles in our heads’---if we remember a lot of good articles in our mind
in our lives’----in our daily life,这里不能用lives
We could improve our English by reading more, writing more,listening more and speaking more---We could improve our English by do more reading,writing.....
reading more ,more reading在中文化了点

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