Read the following,point out the mistakes and make necessary corrections.1 Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure; and he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.2 When I woke up I saw him asleep in

Read the following,point out the mistakes and make necessary corrections.1 Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure; and he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.2 When I woke up I saw him asleep in
Read the following,point out the mistakes and make necessary corrections.
1 Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure; and he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.
2 When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed,I did not heard him when he came back.Because I had been sleeping soundly.
3 Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers and that was why he got higher pay than others.
4 No students could answer that question,even Xiao Yao,who was usually quick in answering questions,was silent.
5 Lin looks like Li,however,they are not related to.
6 The old man hunched forward.His head tilted at an angle.His eyes half closed,looked very sleepy.
7 The work was well planned,everybody worked with great enthusiasm,thus,they over fulfilled their quota.
8 Mark Twain,a well-known American writer,whose experience as a pilot in a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.
还有几道类似的题，After each of the sentences containing a misplaced modifier,write M in the blank at the right,then rewrite the sentence correctly.If the sentence is correct,write C instead of M.
1.Henry intends to if the weather is pleasant,go golfing on one of the Thousand Islands.
2.Betty frequently drinks wine with dinner.
3.We heard the debate on waste disposal sites at our community college.
4.By the end of the week,I had almost earned a hundred dollars in tips.
5.Our insurance agent told us on Tuesday to decide if we wanted to update our insurance policy.

Read the following,point out the mistakes and make necessary corrections.1 Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure; and he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.2 When I woke up I saw him asleep in
1 Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure such as he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.(such as)
2 When I woke up I saw him sleeping in bed,I did not heard him when he came back.Because I had been sleeping soundly.(sleeping)
3 Liu did his work a little better than his fellow workers and that was why he got higher pay than others.(no always with past tense)
4 No students could answer that question,even Xiao Yao,who had been usually quick in answering questions,was silent.(had been before)
5 Lin looks like Li,however,they are not related.(no to)
6 The old man hunched forward.His head tilted at an angle.His eyes half closed.He looked very sleepy.(parallel sentences:He looked)
7 The work was well planned and everybody worked with great enthusiasm,thus they over fulfilled their quota.(and,no "," after thus)
8 Mark Twain's experience as a pilot in a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous American writer.(well-known writer and famous writer in one sentence is too much)
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After each of the sentences containing a misplaced modifier,write M in the blank at the right,then rewrite the sentence correctly.If the sentence is correct,write C instead of M.
1.Henry intends to if the weather is pleasant,go golfing on one of the Thousand Islands.
M:Henry intends to go golfing on one of the Thousand Islands if the weather is pleasant.
2.Betty frequently drinks wine with dinner.
M:Betty drinks wine with dinner frequently.(at frequent interval)
3.We heard the debate on waste disposal sites at our community college.
M:We heard the debate on waste disposal sites at our college community.(Unless it is Community College)
4.By the end of the week,I had almost earned a hundred dollars in tips.
M:By the end of the week,I have almost earned a hundred dollars in tips.(have)
5.Our insurance agent told us on Tuesday to decide if we wanted to update our insurance policy.M:Our insurance agent asked us on Tuesday to decide if we wanted to update our insurance policy.(asked if)

在学校那会，这个应该算我的强项：
1.working改worked
2.asleep改成sleeping
3.always 删除
4.who 改成whom
5.to删除
6.at 改with
7.planned 改成prepared
8.a 删除

补充题目回答：
1.pleasant 改成 nice

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在学校那会，这个应该算我的强项：
1.working改worked
2.asleep改成sleeping
3.always 删除
4.who 改成whom
5.to删除
6.at 改with
7.planned 改成prepared
8.a 删除

补充题目回答：
1.pleasant 改成 nice
2.with 改成at
3.at 改成 in
4.had 改成have
5.if 改成 weather
希望我的回答能给你帮助，望采纳，谢谢！

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1 working改为that worked
2 asleep改为sleeping
3 pay改为paid
4 quick改为fast
5 删除to
6 looked改为looking
7 没看出来
8 句子结构有问题，应该改为 The well-known American writer Mark Twain's exper...

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1 working改为that worked
2 asleep改为sleeping
3 pay改为paid
4 quick改为fast
5 删除to
6 looked改为looking
7 没看出来
8 句子结构有问题，应该改为 The well-known American writer Mark Twain's experience as a pilot in a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer

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第一题时态错：he was a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.
第二题，asleep是形容词，不能作谓语,改为was falling asleep
第三题，pay改为paid
第四题，quick in 改为quick at
第五题，related to 后面接宾语，each other

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第一题时态错：he was a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.
第二题，asleep是形容词，不能作谓语,改为was falling asleep
第三题，pay改为paid
第四题，quick in 改为quick at
第五题，related to 后面接宾语，each other
第六题,looked在这里不能作伴随状语，就用looking
第七题，我不太肯定，我觉得thus应该改为therefore.
第八题，如果说是定语从句的话，那主句就没有谓语，所以把whose改为his
第七题我肯定了，thus是不能单独用的，所以要改为therefore
补充题的意思是每个句子中有个放错位置的修饰词，很多回答问题的都没理解问题就在乱答。
1. 改为 If the weather is pleasant, Henry intends to go golfing on one of the Thousand Islands.
2.改为 Betty drinks wine with dinner frequently.
3.
正确 We heard the debate on waste disposal sites at our community college.
4.正确
By the end of the week, I had almost earned a hundred dollars in tips.
5.正确，on Tuesday 可以放在这里。
Our insurance agent told us on Tuesday to decide if we wanted to update our insurance policy.

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1.Our host,who used to be a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic,entertained us with many interesting adventure stories.
2.When I woke up,I noticed that he was sleeping in bed.I had...

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1.Our host,who used to be a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic,entertained us with many interesting adventure stories.
2.When I woke up,I noticed that he was sleeping in bed.I had no idea when he had come back since I was just in a deep sleep at that moment.
3.Liu always did his work better than his co-workers,that's why he always got a better payment.
4.No student could answer that question,even Xiao Yao,a quick thinker in question answering.
5.Lin looks like Li,however,they are not relatives.
6.The old man hunched forward with his head tilted at an angle,eyes half closed,and face filled with spleepiness.
7.The work was well planned plus everybody worked with great enthusiasm,no wonder they over fulfilled their quota.
8.Mark Twain,a well-known American writer,whose experience as a pilot in a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that made him a famous writer.
1. M
Henry intends to go golfing on one of the Thousand Islands if the weather is pleasant.
2. M
Betty drinks wine with dinner frequently.
3. M
We heard the debate on waste disposal sites at our college community.
4. M
By the end of the week, I have almost earned a hundred dollars in tips.
5. C
Our insurance agent told us on Tuesday to decided if we wanted to update our insurance policy.

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1 Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure; and he had been a member of one exploration team working in the Arctic.
2 When I woke up I saw him was sleeping in bed, I did ...

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1 Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure; and he had been a member of one exploration team working in the Arctic.
2 When I woke up I saw him was sleeping in bed, I did not heard him when he came back. Because I had been sleeping soundly.
3 Liu always doing his work a little better than his fellow workers and that was why he got higher pay than others.
4 No student could answer that question, even Xiao Yao, who was usually quick in answering questions, was silent.
5 Lin looks like Li, however, they are not related to each other.
6 The old man hunched forward. His head tilted with an angle. His eyes half closed, looked very sleepy.
7 The work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm,therefore.
, they over fulfilled with their quota.
8 Mark Twain, a well-known American writer, who experience as a pilot in a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.

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