does what madam said come ture?(中译英, 大家帮我看看哪有错?)Thursday November .18th 2010 cloudyI decided to visit a fortune-teller called, Madam Bellinsky at a village fair. When I went into her tent, she let me sit down. After I h

does what madam said come ture?(中译英, 大家帮我看看哪有错?)Thursday November .18th 2010 cloudyI decided to visit a fortune-teller called, Madam Bellinsky at a village fair. When I went into her tent, she let me sit down. After I h
does what madam said come ture?(中译英, 大家帮我看看哪有错?)
Thursday November .18th 2010 cloudy
I decided to visit a fortune-teller called, Madam Bellinsky at a village fair. When I went into her tent, she let me sit down. After I had given her some dollars, she started looking into a crystal ball and said: “a relation of yours will come to visit you; she will arrive late in this afternoon and prepare to live for a few days. You will be surprised to go out of the tent. A woman you know well will rush towards you and she says will say something to you. And lead you to leave here. That is all.”
I had hardly forgotten what madam Bellinsky said to me when I gone out of the tent because my wife rushed towards me. “Where do you go?” she asked with impatience. “Your sister will come here in less than an hour. We have to go to the station to meet her. It’s late, now.” when she went always, I followed her to go out of the fair.

does what madam said come ture?(中译英, 大家帮我看看哪有错?)Thursday November .18th 2010 cloudyI decided to visit a fortune-teller called, Madam Bellinsky at a village fair. When I went into her tent, she let me sit down. After I h
第二行 After I gave .一般过去时应该就行吧.
第四行 in 去掉.live 改为 stay 吧
第五行 says 去掉
倒数第四行 Where have you been?
倒数第二行 always?打错了貌似； 改为I followed her out of the fair.

2010年十一月.18日星期四多云
我决定去在一个乡村集市上一算命先生称，集市。当我走进她的帐篷去了，她让我坐下。当我给了她一些美元，她开始寻找一个水晶球，说：“您的一个亲戚来看望你，她会迟到今天下午，准备住上几天。你会惊奇地走出走出帐篷。女人你躲到哪儿去对你和她说你会说些什么。并带领你离开这里。这就是一切。“
我刚忘了别林斯夫人对我说，当我离开了帐篷，因为我的妻子向我冲去。 “你...

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2010年十一月.18日星期四多云
我决定去在一个乡村集市上一算命先生称，集市。当我走进她的帐篷去了，她让我坐下。当我给了她一些美元，她开始寻找一个水晶球，说：“您的一个亲戚来看望你，她会迟到今天下午，准备住上几天。你会惊奇地走出走出帐篷。女人你躲到哪儿去对你和她说你会说些什么。并带领你离开这里。这就是一切。“
我刚忘了别林斯夫人对我说，当我离开了帐篷，因为我的妻子向我冲去。 “你去哪儿？”她焦急地问。 “你姐姐会来这里不到一个小时的时间。我们必须去车站接她。这晚，现在。“时，她就常，我跟着她走出了集市。
用翻译软件翻译的，哈哈。熊猫培训网提供

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when I gone out 换成 i went out
其他正确
这一刻 让我想起我童年时候学英语的时候了 谢谢你

I decided to visit a fortune-teller called, Madam Bellinsky, at a village fair. When I went into her tent, she let me sit down. After I had given her some dollars, she started looking into a crystal b...

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I decided to visit a fortune-teller called, Madam Bellinsky, at a village fair. When I went into her tent, she let me sit down. After I had given her some dollars, she started looking into a crystal ball and said: “a RELATIVE of yours will come to visit you; she will arrive late this afternoon and prepare to live for a few days. You will be surprised to go out of the tent. A woman you know well will rush towards you and she says SHE will say something to you. And lead you to leave here. That is all.”
I had hardly forgotten what madam Bellinsky said to me when I WENT out of the tent because my wife rushed towards me. “Where DID you go?” she asked with impatience. “Your sister will come here in less than an hour. We have to go to the station to meet her. It’s late, now.”When she went AWAY, I followed her to go out of the fair.

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