Sorry,I have something go out yeterday,so My colleague Lily help me replied your email!Regarding the red dots,you are really do not worry about it,it is really very normal,we shipment to other client many times before,no client complain this!We check

Sorry,I have something go out yeterday,so My colleague Lily help me replied your email!Regarding the red dots,you are really do not worry about it,it is really very normal,we shipment to other client many times before,no client complain this!We check
Sorry,I have something go out yeterday,so My colleague Lily help me replied your email!
Regarding the red dots,you are really do not worry about it,it is really very normal,we shipment to other client many times before,no client complain this!
We checked with the factory again,they told me the ETA for UPS and DHL all is 10/23,but the ensuring of DHL is better than UPS,so at the final,we choosed DHL.
I will give you the tracking no later today!
不用翻译成中文,只是检查我的语法错误并且修改,

Sorry,I have something go out yeterday,so My colleague Lily help me replied your email!Regarding the red dots,you are really do not worry about it,it is really very normal,we shipment to other client many times before,no client complain this!We check
Sorry,I have something go out yeterday（整一句改为I went out yesterday for some emergency.）,so My colleague Lily help me replied (用原型reply) your email!
Regarding the red dots,you are really do not（are really do not 变为need not） worry about it,（前面的逗号改为句号）it is really very normal,（这里添加一个and）we shipment to other client（client加复数） many times before,no client complain this（no client complain this换为who didn't complain at all）!
We checked with the factory again,（加and）they told me the ETA for UPS and DHL all is 10/23,（前面逗号改句号）but the ensuring of DHL is better than UPS,so at the final（at the final改为finally）,we choosed DHL.
I will give you the tracking no later（添加than） today!

已精心为你修改好,若有疑问及时追问,满意敬请采纳,O(∩_∩)O谢谢

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1.昨天的事应该是 went out （have something went out这个本事就是chinglish，直接就I was out of my office yesterday就行了）
2.同理，lily应该是helped,后面改reply
3.you are really do not worry about it语法上没错，一样是chinglish，直接用you d...

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1.昨天的事应该是 went out （have something went out这个本事就是chinglish，直接就I was out of my office yesterday就行了）
2.同理，lily应该是helped,后面改reply
3.you are really do not worry about it语法上没错，一样是chinglish，直接用you don't have to worry about it.
4.we shipment to other client many times before, no client complain this!这句shipment是名词，应该说we have shipped (the goods) to other client(s) many times, no one complained about this before.(其实也不是太通，你给的信息太少了。要注意的是第一个client要加复数，没有人抱怨过是以前的事情，所以是过去式。)
5. we (have) checked with...用现在完成时，因为是已完成的，对现在有影响的动作
6. at the final...没有这么说的，改in the end
7. choosed？choose的过去时是chose
8.最后一句也都不对， 改成I will give you the tracking number by the end of today好点。
基本上以上大部分建议都可以通过英文纠错软件易改看出来，鉴于楼主的英语水平，我也强烈建议你下一个易改的客户端，多看看软件提供的外贸函电模板。对了，是免费的。
祝好运。

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Sorry I was not in my office yesterday and it was my colleague Lily who helped me reply your email.
Regarding to the red dots you mentioned, please don't worry about it because it's quite normal. ...

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Sorry I was not in my office yesterday and it was my colleague Lily who helped me reply your email.
Regarding to the red dots you mentioned, please don't worry about it because it's quite normal. And as I know we've already shipped out the same products to many other customers for serveral times without any complaints so far.
And according to the information from the factory, ETA via UPS or DHL will just be the same date, Oct. 23. However, we prefer to use DHL so that the ETA could be safer. Hope you'll be OK with that. When the DHL tracking number is available, I'll keep you be posted, and that will be no later than today.
Thank you and wish you have a great day.

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Sorry,I have something go out yeterday（整一句改为I went out yesterday for some emergency.）,so My colleague Lily help me replied (用原型reply) your email!
Regarding the red dots,you are really do not（are ...

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Sorry,I have something go out yeterday（整一句改为I went out yesterday for some emergency.）,so My colleague Lily help me replied (用原型reply) your email!
Regarding the red dots,you are really do not（are really do not 变为need not） worry about it,（前面的逗号改为句号）it is really very normal,（这里添加一个and）we shipment to other client（client加复数） many times before,no client complain this（no client complain this换为who didn't complain at all）!
We checked with the factory again,（加and）they told me the ETA for UPS and DHL all is 10/23,（前面逗号改句号）but the ensuring of DHL is better than UPS,so at the final（at the final改为finally）,we choosed DHL.
I will give you the tracking no later（添加than） today!

已精心为你修改好，若有疑问及时追问，满意敬请采纳，O(∩_∩)O谢谢

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Sorry,I have something go out yeterday,so My colleague Lily help me replied your email!

Sorry I was out of my office yesterday, so my colleague Lily helped me reply your email.

Help 后面的宾语只能和动词原型连用。

Regarding the red dots,you are really do not worry about it,it is really very normal,we shipment to other client many times before,no client complain this!

With regard to the red dots, please don't worry about them. They are really very normal . We have done such shipments many times before to other client and got no complaints so far.

• 在句子开头应该用With regard to ；

• 前面提到dots，后面应该用them；

• shipment 是名词。不能当动词用；

We checked with the factory again,they told me the ETA for UPS and DHL all is 10/23,but the ensuring of DHL is better than UPS,so at the final,we choosed DHL.

We checked with the factory again, they told me the ETA was 10/23 for both UPS and DHL. 

As the service of DHL was better than UPS, therefore we choosed DHL.

• told 后面动词应该用过去时；

• 正式通信要用therefore代替so;
  

I will give you the tracking number later today!

• 正文要用number而不用no。