英语语法纠正Whenever I lose,I will be crying and ran to my mom ,saying she was bullying me.是ran,run 还是running.如果有其他错误,也请纠正= =

英语语法纠正Whenever I lose,I will be crying and ran to my mom ,saying she was bullying me.是ran,run 还是running.如果有其他错误,也请纠正= =
英语语法纠正
Whenever I lose,I will be crying and ran to my mom ,saying she was bullying me.
是ran,run 还是running.
如果有其他错误,也请纠正= =

英语语法纠正Whenever I lose,I will be crying and ran to my mom ,saying she was bullying me.是ran,run 还是running.如果有其他错误,也请纠正= =
Whenever I lose,I will cry and run to my mom,saying she was bullying me.
同一主语 I 一连做了三个行为动作CRY.RUN .SAY.几乎同时发生.CRY.RUN 并列做了句子的谓语.
say以SAYING 形式做了伴随状语.

Whenever I lose, I will ran to my mom , crying and saying she was bullying me.

Whenever I lose, I will cry and run to my mom, saying she was bullying me.

Whenever I lose, I will cry and run to my mom , saying she was bullying me.
这么写，语法上没有错误了。
但是，你想表达啥~？
每当我走丢了，我会哭着跑到妈妈那里，说她欺负我。
这个意思~？
我个人认为哦，你这句话是表示一种习惯性，主句用现在时比较好点...

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Whenever I lose, I will cry and run to my mom , saying she was bullying me.
这么写，语法上没有错误了。
但是，你想表达啥~？
每当我走丢了，我会哭着跑到妈妈那里，说她欺负我。
这个意思~？
我个人认为哦，你这句话是表示一种习惯性，主句用现在时比较好点

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无论什么时候我走丢了，我都会哭着去找我妈妈，说她欺负我。
这句话表示一种习惯性的假设，现在时会更好一些，另外还有一些用法不够地道，我觉得这样会更好：
Whenever I get lost,I run to my mom,crying,and say she is bullying me.