It’s droughty and dark. That is a pool. One man is swimming in it. At the end of the advertisement, it shows us the title “In the future will we swim in this way? Please protect water resource .” We can find out the keyword about this advertis

It’s droughty and dark. That is a pool. One man is swimming in it. At the end of the advertisement, it shows us the title “In the future will we swim in this way? Please protect water resource .” We can find out the keyword about this advertis
It’s droughty and dark. That is a pool. One man is swimming in it. At the end of the advertisement, it shows us the title “In the future will we swim in this way? Please protect water resource .” We can find out the keyword about this advertisement: less water and protect water resource.
写了一个开头,看一下怎么样,修改一下,评价一下,谢谢

It’s droughty and dark. That is a pool. One man is swimming in it. At the end of the advertisement, it shows us the title “In the future will we swim in this way? Please protect water resource .” We can find out the keyword about this advertis
我觉得还好,不算perfect
或者你改为 It's a drought and dirty pool,there's a man swimming in it
最后那里改为疑问句比较好

perfect