Jack’ parents hope that the businessman,Jack growing,will become his mere choice with which his dream,as an eminent historian,is absolutely the opposite.中文意思像表达jack 的父母希望jack长大后,成为一名商人,但是jack未来的

Jack’ parents hope that the businessman,Jack growing,will become his mere choice with which his dream,as an eminent historian,is absolutely the opposite.中文意思像表达jack 的父母希望jack长大后,成为一名商人,但是jack未来的
Jack’ parents hope that the businessman,Jack growing,will become his mere choice with which his dream,as an eminent historian,is absolutely the opposite.
中文意思像表达jack 的父母希望jack长大后,成为一名商人,但是jack未来的梦想事成为一名历史学家而而不是一名商人.

Jack’ parents hope that the businessman,Jack growing,will become his mere choice with which his dream,as an eminent historian,is absolutely the opposite.中文意思像表达jack 的父母希望jack长大后,成为一名商人,但是jack未来的
jack growing 在这里是什么成分,是想作伴随状语吗?with which中的with能和opposite搭配吗?应该是be opposite to 吧,as an eminent historian 能作定语从句中的主语从句吗?我觉得你不太会用名词性从句,考试时没把握的东西最好不要写,尽量化复杂句为简单句,我试着翻译下
Jack's longing to becoming a eminent historian when he grows up ,but not a business man which his parents hope him to be.

你的停顿好像有些不对，该添的主语最好补上去

完全不通顺
jack's parents hope that jack can be a businessman when he grows up ,but jack's dream is to be a historian instead

是复句，有that从句。很复杂的结构。
用while会不会好一些？

可以

Jack's longing to becoming a eminent historian when he grows up ,but not a business man which his parents hope him to be.