In a summer night in Taiwan,Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking.The trees were torn up and many buildings were leaned down to the ground.Even a car was destroyed by the fallen building

In a summer night in Taiwan,Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking.The trees were torn up and many buildings were leaned down to the ground.Even a car was destroyed by the fallen building
In a summer night in Taiwan,Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking.The trees were torn up and many buildings were leaned down to the ground.Even a car was destroyed by the fallen buildings.She was knocked down by a tree before she knew.Two doctors carried him to safety and she was settled down in a tent for treatment.After some time,she had got over.Seeing such many goods from the mainland of China and other countries,she believed all the destroyed houses would be built.In →On then →when strong →strongly leaned →leaning fallen →falling
knew →knew it him →her had got over →got over such →so built →rebuilt要的是解释,最好有翻译

In a summer night in Taiwan,Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking.The trees were torn up and many buildings were leaned down to the ground.Even a car was destroyed by the fallen building
解析：
1、In a summer night in Taiwan中,in 应该改为on,具体的某天晚上前用on二不用in,只有笼统的说“在晚上”时才用in,如 in the night 在夜间.
2、Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking.本句话的意思是：小红正高高兴兴地走在去学校的路上,突然她感觉到道路震动起来.此句前半句是过去进行时,后半句是一般过去时,所以连接词应为when.
3、she felt the street was strong shaking.此句中修饰动词shake的不能是形容词strong,而只能是副词strongly.
4、many buildings were leaned down to the ground.建筑物倒塌 lean down 不需用被动语态,用ing形式即可.
5、Even a car was destroyed by the fallen buildings.倒塌过的建筑物不一定能损坏汽车,相反从天而降正往下塌陷的建筑物则一定会损坏经过的汽车.应把fallen 改为falling.
6、She was knocked down by a tree before she knew.knew后面少了宾语it.
7、Two doctors carried him to safety 我们的主角是女性!
8、After some time,she had got over.从句子时间看,本句是过去时,过去完成时不对.
9、such many goods from the mainland of China 修饰形容词many用so,such修饰名词.
10、she believed all the destroyed houses would be built.建筑物在震前盖起,因为地震倒塌,再建起来时“重建”.所以用rebuilt.

in改为on是因为a summer night 是具体某一天
when引导到的时间状语从句的意思是 ：当她突然感到地在剧烈的摇动时，小红正高兴的走在去学校的路上。
因为修饰的是shaking 修饰动词用副词 所以用strongly
be动词后面加现在分词 即leaning lean down——弯腰、这里是倒下的意思
fallen→falling所处的句子的意...

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in改为on是因为a summer night 是具体某一天
when引导到的时间状语从句的意思是 ：当她突然感到地在剧烈的摇动时，小红正高兴的走在去学校的路上。
因为修饰的是shaking 修饰动词用副词 所以用strongly
be动词后面加现在分词 即leaning lean down——弯腰、这里是倒下的意思
fallen→falling所处的句子的意思是 车子甚至被倒下的建筑摧毁 falling表状态
在她知道这之前，她被树撞到了 so knew →knew it
小红是she 而且前后文都是用she的
一段时间后，她恢复了 全文都是用一般过去时
so many 这么多的
她相信所有被破坏的建筑都将会被重建

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台湾的一个夏夜，小红正高高兴兴地在她上学的路上突然她感觉街道在强烈地(此处要用副词strongly)震动。 then 然后，这时汉语的习惯。
树木被撕裂开，很多建筑物倾倒在地上（这是一个逐渐的持续的过程），甚至有一辆车被歪倒的建筑物砸毁。
她一颗倒下的树砸倒在地失去知觉，两个医生将她带到安全地带，她在一处帐篷中安顿下来接受治疗，一段时间后她便康复了。had got over 意为...

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台湾的一个夏夜，小红正高高兴兴地在她上学的路上突然她感觉街道在强烈地(此处要用副词strongly)震动。 then 然后，这时汉语的习惯。
树木被撕裂开，很多建筑物倾倒在地上（这是一个逐渐的持续的过程），甚至有一辆车被歪倒的建筑物砸毁。
她一颗倒下的树砸倒在地失去知觉，两个医生将她带到安全地带，她在一处帐篷中安顿下来接受治疗，一段时间后她便康复了。had got over 意为之前她就康复了。
看到来自中国大陆和其他国家的商品（救灾捐赠物资）她相信，所有被摧毁的房屋还会重建(rebuil---rebuilt)的。

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