请帮我修改一下 英文句子 文法等等的 in my opinion ,this text give me so many ideas to think about how to be a good educator,and how to communicate with children.To be a good educator ,the first impression is very important ,especially

请帮我修改一下 英文句子 文法等等的 in my opinion ,this text give me so many ideas to think about how to be a good educator,and how to communicate with children.To be a good educator ,the first impression is very important ,especially
请帮我修改一下 英文句子 文法等等的
in my opinion ,this text give me so many ideas to think about how to be a good educator,and how to communicate with children.
To be a good educator ,the first impression is very important ,especially for children ,as the text said ‘’ if teachers want to be respected as professionals ,they must look and act like professional.’’
To communicated with children ,also need to require positive attitude and language .the first important thing is to use positive language encourage children ,not just scold them ,as the text said ‘’ teachers should always have something nice to say about the child.This sentence is not just for teachers,also for parents.
The parent’s relationship with teacher is very closely ,especially in their life,in order to make child’s life better,they have to meet each other ,and understand with each other.
也可以帮我加些句子 让这篇小文章读起来更通顺 更好
写的东西 是有关於 parent communication

请帮我修改一下 英文句子 文法等等的 in my opinion ,this text give me so many ideas to think about how to be a good educator,and how to communicate with children.To be a good educator ,the first impression is very important ,especially
this text give me so many ideas to 改为 this text gives me a lot of ideas to
also need to require positive attitude and language 改为 the positive attitudes and languages will also be required.
the first important thing is to use positive language encourage children,not just scold them 改为 the first important thing is not just to scold children,but use positive languages to encourage children.
as the text said 这里改为as mentioned in the text 上面段落已经用过了,这样表达更佳丰富.
in order to make child’s life better 应该为children‘s 复数.,