英语翻译Today is fine .Because I have a great time .I get up at 7 o'clock .I had breakfast at 9 am .I am reading books while my mother is cooking .I think her food is very bad .Then I had a lunch .At last I listened to pop music .Because I love i

英语翻译Today is fine .Because I have a great time .I get up at 7 o'clock .I had breakfast at 9 am .I am reading books while my mother is cooking .I think her food is very bad .Then I had a lunch .At last I listened to pop music .Because I love i
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Today is fine .Because I have a great time .I get up at 7 o'clock .I had breakfast at 9 am .I am reading books while my mother is cooking .I think her food is very bad .Then I had a lunch .At last I listened to pop music .Because I love it .My favorite singer is Nichkhun .His song is very good .I believe everything is interesting .Time goes by ,I will remember everyday .
Today is fine .Because I have a great time .I got up at 7 o'clock .I had breakfast at 9 am .I am reading books while my mother is cooking .I think her food is very bad .Then I had a lunch .At last I listened to pop music .Because I love it .My favorite singer is Nichkhun .His song is very good .I believe everything is interesting .Time goes by ,I will remember everyday .

英语翻译Today is fine .Because I have a great time .I get up at 7 o'clock .I had breakfast at 9 am .I am reading books while my mother is cooking .I think her food is very bad .Then I had a lunch .At last I listened to pop music .Because I love i
I get up at 7 o'clock改为I got up at 7 o'clock
I am reading books while my mother is cooking 改为I was reading.while my mother was cooking句子的时态要一致
今天天气很好,因为我玩得很开心.我7点起床,9点吃早餐.当我妈妈在煮饭时我看了会书,我认为妈妈煮的食物很糟糕.然后我吃了午饭.最后我听了流行歌曲,因为我喜欢流行歌曲,去哦最喜欢的歌手是尼坤,他的歌很好听.我相信所有的事物都是有趣的.随着时间的流逝,我将会记住每一天.

今天很（心情）很好，因为我玩的很愉快。我七点起床。九点吃早饭。妈妈在做饭时我在看书。我认为她做出的食物很糟糕。然后我吃了午饭。最后我听了（会儿），因为我喜欢它（流行音乐）。我最喜欢的歌手是Nichkhun。他的歌十分动听。我相信一切事情（都）很有趣。（无论）时间流逝，我将会记得每一天。
语病二楼已经说完了，我提一下改进意见（锦上添花）：1.记叙的事情不要少于五件；2.多种时态并用，以一般过...

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今天很（心情）很好，因为我玩的很愉快。我七点起床。九点吃早饭。妈妈在做饭时我在看书。我认为她做出的食物很糟糕。然后我吃了午饭。最后我听了（会儿），因为我喜欢它（流行音乐）。我最喜欢的歌手是Nichkhun。他的歌十分动听。我相信一切事情（都）很有趣。（无论）时间流逝，我将会记得每一天。
语病二楼已经说完了，我提一下改进意见（锦上添花）：1.记叙的事情不要少于五件；2.多种时态并用，以一般过去时为主，过去进行时、过去完成时为辅；3.紧扣文章中心。
以上均为一家之言，仅供参考

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