作业帮英语的小事情大家帮我看看这篇文章写的哪里错了?为什么错?该怎么修改!摆脱大家了!我初一不要修改得我看不懂 DEAR betty would you like go to the cinema with me for watch film!the film"s name is black sepember
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英语的小事情大家帮我看看这篇文章写的哪里错了?为什么错?该怎么修改!摆脱大家了!我初一不要修改得我看不懂 DEAR betty would you like go to the cinema with me for watch film!the film"s name is black sepember
英语的小事情
大家帮我看看这篇文章写的哪里错了?为什么错?该怎么修改!摆脱大家了!我初一不要修改得我看不懂
DEAR betty
would you like go to the cinema with me for watch film!the film"s name is black sepember .black sepember is on in the afternoon and evenning on sunday! on sunday,you go to the chunming cinema
还有一篇
what do you want to go to the cinema on sunday! the film is black sepetnber !in the afternoon and evenning !at chunming cinema!I think of great idea !what do you think?
英语的小事情大家帮我看看这篇文章写的哪里错了?为什么错?该怎么修改!摆脱大家了!我初一不要修改得我看不懂 DEAR betty would you like go to the cinema with me for watch film!the film"s name is black sepember
would like的用法是would like to do,所以原句would you like go to 应改为would you like to go to.
for watch 应该为to watch,to表示目的.
the film"s name 改为called black september比较地道
电影上演应是:will show on
in the afternoon and evenning 去掉
you go to the chunming cinema 改为：you can go to the chunming cinema with me .
很明显 你单词错了
不是sepember ,应该是september 九月的意思
这篇文章是用机器翻译的吧···
你可以这样说：
dear betty：
would you like to go to the cinema with me to watch the film--"black september".the film will start on both sunday afternoon and evening in chunming cinema.
would you like to go to the cinema with me to see a film(see比较地道)
black setpember
chunming是什么?我高一都看不懂啊!!
首先上面一篇是你胡驺的吧?!
下面是要让你连词成句(难道题目要求是用英文写的,你看不懂?)
不要介意