作业帮批改作文,这篇文章根据英文写作的要求来说,有哪些需要改进?Admittedly,the competitions in the campus are fierce enough,which has rendered the students tremendous pressure.But they should also be aware of the fact that they has t
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批改作文,这篇文章根据英文写作的要求来说,有哪些需要改进?Admittedly,the competitions in the campus are fierce enough,which has rendered the students tremendous pressure.But they should also be aware of the fact that they has t
批改作文,这篇文章根据英文写作的要求来说,有哪些需要改进?
Admittedly,the competitions in the campus are fierce enough,which has rendered the students tremendous pressure.But they should also be aware of the fact that they has to face more cut-throat/intense competitions after leaving the university one day.Without such experiences in university,the students will feel more difficult to integrate into society.What's more,as a matter of fact,competitions exist objectively everywhere,and it is through competition that students can be admitted to the best university to accept higher education.
批改作文,这篇文章根据英文写作的要求来说,有哪些需要改进?Admittedly,the competitions in the campus are fierce enough,which has rendered the students tremendous pressure.But they should also be aware of the fact that they has t
1.Admittedly,the competitions in the campus are fierce enough,which have rendered the students
2.But they should also be aware of the fact that they have to face more...
3.Without such experiences in university,the students will feel it more difficult to integrate into society.
4.As a matter of fact,competitions exist objectively everywhere
5.and it is through competition that students can be admitted to the best university to receive higher education.
第一行 has 改为have
第二行 has 改为have
第五行 objectively 改为objective
不用改，写的不错，还可以。你要认真读读，看看有没有词语重复，如果没有，那么就是一篇好文章。