新概念英语141 1课文Last week,my four-year-old daughter,Sally,was invited to a children's party.上周,我4岁的女儿萨莉被邀请去参加一个儿童聚会.我写的last week,my daughter sally,a four-year-old girl was invited to a chlider

新概念英语141 1课文Last week,my four-year-old daughter,Sally,was invited to a children's party.上周,我4岁的女儿萨莉被邀请去参加一个儿童聚会.我写的last week,my daughter sally,a four-year-old girl was invited to a chlider
新概念英语141
1课文Last week,my four-year-old daughter,Sally,was invited to a children's party.
上周,我4岁的女儿萨莉被邀请去参加一个儿童聚会.
我写的last week,my daughter sally,a four-year-old girl was invited to a chlidern's party可以吗?
2课文Sally was very excited because she had never travelled on a train before.
萨莉非常激动,因为她从未乘过火车.
我写的sally was excited because she had never left home by train.为什么要用on 不用by?
3课文She sat near the window and asked questions about everything she saw.
她靠车窗坐着,对她所看到的一切都要问个明白.
我写的she sat beside window,and she asked all questions she saw可以吗?可以用beside的吗?还有,课文为什么是everything she saw而不是 she saw everything?
4课文but looked at her curiously.副词为什么不放在look后面?不是要尽量靠近修饰词吗?

新概念英语141 1课文Last week,my four-year-old daughter,Sally,was invited to a children's party.上周,我4岁的女儿萨莉被邀请去参加一个儿童聚会.我写的last week,my daughter sally,a four-year-old girl was invited to a chlider
1.last week,my daughter sally,a four-year-old girl was invited to a chlidern's party
这句话加个逗号就可以了,在a four-year-old girl后面加.你要说的是sally,Sally是主语,不是a four-year-old girl.其实这句话可以这么写,last week,my daughter sally who is a four-year-old girl was invited to a children's party.但老美规定可以吧who省了,用两个逗号之间形容主语.这两种写法都对
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第二个明显不是left home by train,做火车离开家吗,从卧室到门口坐火车?他要旅行,不是离开.by 是通过什么方式,我觉得可以用by,但一定要有a,by a train.
3.beside也可以,但一定要加the,特指某个窗户.你写的话有歧义,原文是对他看到的事情都要问个明白,你这句话不是看见的,提出的问题跟看没关系.肯定是everything she saw,这里省略了个that,everything that she saw,这样就好理解了.
4.为什么副词要放在动词后面,副词放在动词后面只是一种用法,而且用的不多.副词一般都用在句首或句尾.举个例子,I watch throught her eyes carefully,这里carefully 副词.还有 hopefully,I can get a good grade on my finals.希望我期末得个好成绩,这里hopefully 副词放在句首.当然副词跟动词也可以搭配,run quickly.

1,2对 3错 all questions all修饰的是问题 她问所有问题 你觉得通吗？还有AND已经连接前面的句子 不需要再SHE了。beside没错 。句子建议改成and asked a greatn number of questions which she had saw. 然后about 介词， 要加名词或代词 后面的everything宾语前置了。 ABOUT SHE SAW ...

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1,2对 3错 all questions all修饰的是问题 她问所有问题 你觉得通吗？还有AND已经连接前面的句子 不需要再SHE了。beside没错 。句子建议改成and asked a greatn number of questions which she had saw. 然后about 介词， 要加名词或代词 后面的everything宾语前置了。 ABOUT SHE SAW EVERYTHING 不怎么通吧。这里的ABOUT....是后置定语 修饰的questions。 4，这里是为了句子平衡 PS：我也只是在读雅思的学生 可能有地方不对 我只是看了下 然后根据自己的所学回答一下 可看可不看

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第一句把LAST WEEK放句末就好 然后girl加逗号 做插入语 比较好 不加我觉得没错 因为有插入语 时间状语放句末 句子比较平衡 2 你可以写 left home to have a trip by train.3,4以说

第一个问题，应该在你写的girl后面加个逗号，第二个，要用by就不能加冠词a,第三个，你写的句子翻译过来是她看到的问题她都要问明白，与原意不符。还有，she saw 是everything的定语，而你要是改了就成了句子，是不对的，此句不能用句子