Today is the last day of winter holiday. 求检查语法错误Today is the last day of winter holiday. I have had a very nice vacation for everything went on according to my holiday plan. I went to Vancouver for shopping. But in other days I staye

Today is the last day of winter holiday. 求检查语法错误Today is the last day of winter holiday. I have had a very nice vacation for everything went on according to my holiday plan. I went to Vancouver for shopping. But in other days I staye
Today is the last day of winter holiday. 求检查语法错误
Today is the last day of winter holiday. I have had a very nice vacation for everything went on according to my holiday plan. I went to Vancouver
for shopping. But in other days I stayed at home to stud English. Besides I also watched a lot of English movies. Such as Twilight, The Hobbit and so on.
They are all very good movies. Not only did I watch it but also I repeated the words in my mind. I believe it 's a way to improve my English.
The most interesting thing I did is shopping in Vancouver. Therefore in the rest of days I just prepared for the school open. It was so boring. Tomorrow is the
school opening day. I can't wait to go to school and meet my friends.
Next month will be the last month of my first semester. I will have my final exam in this month. These days I will go prepare for it.
These day I really want to eat Xiang He Meatloaf. I decide to cook with my friend Dean in his house. Hope I will success.

Today is the last day of winter holiday. 求检查语法错误Today is the last day of winter holiday. I have had a very nice vacation for everything went on according to my holiday plan. I went to Vancouver for shopping. But in other days I staye
Today is the last day of(the) winter holiday.I have had a very nice vacation for everything(has gone ) on according to my holiday plan.I went to Vancouver
for shopping.But in other days I stayed at home to stud English.Besides I also watched a lot of English movies.Such as Twilight,The Hobbit and so on.
They are all very good movies.Not only did I watch (them) but also I repeated the words in my mind.I believe (that) 's a way to improve my English.
The most interesting thing I did is shopping in Vancouver.Therefore in the rest of days I just prepared for the school (opening).It was so boring.Tomorrow is the
school opening day.I can't wait to go to school and meet my friends.
Next month will be the last month of my /semester.I will have my final exam / this month.These days I will / prepare for it.
These( days) I really want to eat Xiang He Meatloaf.I decide to cook ( it) with my friend Dean in his house.Hope I will( be successful).我来帮他解答