英语,请帮我修改一下!可以帮我看一下,我写的另外一封信吗?（nihao,it’s mean is hi ）I got your email,thanks a lot!it's awesome that you are double majoring about german and french at your age.And really thank you for your int

英语,请帮我修改一下!可以帮我看一下,我写的另外一封信吗?（nihao,it’s mean is hi ）I got your email,thanks a lot!it's awesome that you are double majoring about german and french at your age.And really thank you for your int
英语,请帮我修改一下!
可以帮我看一下,我写的另外一封信吗?
（nihao,it’s mean is hi ）
I got your email,thanks a lot!
it's awesome that you are double majoring about german and french at your age.And really thank you for your introduce.
Okay,Let me introduce myself..i'm studying interior design of architecture.And I'm really interested about journalism and media study.So I’m working for broadcasting editor in China.
I'm really happy to can study there soon.I’m really expected about that.
I think journalism and ** has a lot in common.
So,It’s a really good chance to broadening my view of study.
But,I can't speak English very well.But I can understand what you say.
If you are in thirth grade,I guess it's the last term for you(4 year here in China) .
It must be busy for you,but you want to help me.Thank you very much!I’m so lucky.
can't wait to see you.
Thanks for your e-mail
It's cold recently so take good care of yourself.
see you soon!
不过,我没有悬常分.TOT

英语,请帮我修改一下!可以帮我看一下,我写的另外一封信吗?（nihao,it’s mean is hi ）I got your email,thanks a lot!it's awesome that you are double majoring about german and french at your age.And really thank you for your int
你好!（nihao,it’s mean is hi ）
I got your email, thanks a lot!
It's awesome that you are a double major, learning german and french at your age. Thank you for your introduction.
Let me introduce myself. i'm studying interior design of architecture, and I'm really interested in journalism and media study. So I’m working as a broadcasting editor in China. I'm really looking forward to studying there. I think journalism and ** has a lot in common and it’s a really good chance to broaden my view of study. I can't speak English very well, but I can understand what you say.
If you are in third grade, I guess it's the last term for you(4 year here in China) .
You must be very busy, but you still want to help me. Thank you very much! I’m so lucky.
can't wait to see you.
It's cold recently so take good care of yourself.
see you soon!

我觉得还行，唯独就是句与句之间连起来吧，换太多行不好吧