加帮忙答一到英语的改错题,最多改十个~when our six children were young,Suppertime is always being inrerrupted by neighborhood children .ring the bell ,They wanted one child or another to come out and played ,Finally we had a good idea

加帮忙答一到英语的改错题,最多改十个~when our six children were young,Suppertime is always being inrerrupted by neighborhood children .ring the bell ,They wanted one child or another to come out and played ,Finally we had a good idea
加帮忙答一到英语的改错题,最多改十个~
when our six children were young,Suppertime is always being inrerrupted by neighborhood children .ring the bell ,They wanted one child or another to come out and played ,Finally we had a good idea ,We huny a sign on the font door that reed :"We are having dinner ,Come later,''That night we sat down to what they bought ,it would be a pleasant uninterrupted meal ,And us soon as we began dinner ,the doorbell rang ,At the front door .Stood on einght -years-old boy.He looked up to us ,Saying''I just want to know how the sign says.'

加帮忙答一到英语的改错题,最多改十个~when our six children were young,Suppertime is always being inrerrupted by neighborhood children .ring the bell ,They wanted one child or another to come out and played ,Finally we had a good idea
when our six children were young,Suppertime is（is改为was) always being inrerrupted by neighborhood children (who)ring (rang)the bell ,They wanted (one child or another)(改为one or more children) to come out and played (with them)Finally we had a good idea ,We huny (pasted）a sign on the font door that（which) reed(read) :"We are having dinner ,Come later,''That night we sat down to (what they bought )(改为what will happen),（we thought)it would be a pleasant uninterrupted meal ,And(改为but) us soon as we began dinner ,the doorbell rang (加上again),At the front door .Stood on(on改为an） einght -years（years改为year)-old boy.He looked up to us ,Saying''I just want to know how the sign says.'
改好后的全文如下：when our six children were young,Suppertime (was) always being inrerrupted by neighborhood children( who ring the bell) ,They wanted (one or more children)to come out and played(with them) ,Finally we had a good idea ,We hury(pasted) a sign on the font door (that)(改为which) reed :"We are having dinner ,Come later,''That night we sat down to (what they bought)(改为see what will happen) ,(we thought)it would be a pleasant uninterrupted meal ,And us soon as we began dinner ,the doorbell rang ,At the front door .Stood on einght -(years)（year)-old boy.He looked up to us ,Saying''I just want to know how the sign says.'

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When our six children were young,suppertime is always inrerrupted by neighborhood children .Ringing the bell ,they wanted one child or another to come out and play .Finally we had a goo...

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When our six children were young,suppertime is always inrerrupted by neighborhood children .Ringing the bell ,they wanted one child or another to come out and play .Finally we had a good idea.We hung a sign on the font door that reads :"We are having dinner .Come later.''That night we sat down to what they bought .It would be a pleasant uninterrupted meal But as soon as we began dinner ,the doorbell rang .At the front door stood an einght -years-old boy.He looked up at us ,said:"I just want to know what the sign says."

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when our six children were young,Suppertime was always being inrerrupted by neighborhood children .rang the bell ,They wanted one child or another to come out and played ,Finally we had a good idea ,W...

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when our six children were young,Suppertime was always being inrerrupted by neighborhood children .rang the bell ,They wanted one child or another to come out and played ,Finally we had a good idea ,We made a sign on the font door with reed :"We are having dinner ,Come later,''That night they sat down to what they bought , which would be a pleasant uninterrupted meal ,And as soon as we began dinner ,the doorbell rang ,At the front door .Stood an eight -years-old boy.He looked up to us ,Saying''I just want to know how the sign says.'

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