求指出英语错误.The paper summarizes the background of a low carbon finance ,the influence and significance to the sustainable development in the world and in our China.The relationship between a low carbon economy and carbon financial.The syst

求指出英语错误.The paper summarizes the background of a low carbon finance ,the influence and significance to the sustainable development in the world and in our China.The relationship between a low carbon economy and carbon financial.The syst
求指出英语错误.
The paper summarizes the background of a low carbon finance ,the influence and significance to the sustainable development in the world and in our China.The relationship between a low carbon economy and carbon financial.The system consutitution and system development of the carbon financial markets.What we can learn from the new economic information for the development of our chinese carbon markets,espicially ,in the exchange of International carbon fiance.Facing the new age of low carbon economy,what’s the opportunities and challenges we will have as well as measures we can take.The propects for the developing carbon financial market.
原文：本文概述了低碳经济背景下的碳金融对世界、中国可持续发展的影响和意义；低碳经济和碳金融的关系；碳金融市场体系构成和发展情况；国际出台的碳金融交易中,可供我国碳金融市场发展所参考的新经济信息；面对新时代低碳经济号角的吹响,我国面的机遇、挑战以及解决措施；对碳金融市场的发展前景展望.

求指出英语错误.The paper summarizes the background of a low carbon finance ,the influence and significance to the sustainable development in the world and in our China.The relationship between a low carbon economy and carbon financial.The syst
有点小错误.中间有点句子根本就不成句子.因为这段话包含的独立并列语句太多,可以适当的添加一些连词,或自己组织的语言,可以让读者更清晰,而不是这样都被转晕了

The paper has summarized the influence and significance of carbon finance on the sustainable development of China and that of the world under circumstances of low-carbon economy, the relationship betw...

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The paper has summarized the influence and significance of carbon finance on the sustainable development of China and that of the world under circumstances of low-carbon economy, the relationship between low-carbon economy and carbon finance, the structure and development situation of the carbon financial markets, the information of the new economy for reference as our carbon financial market's development under the international agreement on finance transactions, the opportunities and challenges and solutions we faced with sound the clarion call to march towards a new era carbon finance, and the outlook of the development prospect of carbon financial markets.

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n你这个是essay 吧。请不要用任何和i we our这些主观的东西。还有你你第二句话就是错的无动词。financial是个形容词吧。 第三句无动词。觉得吧写起来我总觉得你的好词都是硬套上去的。你还是叫个人改吧。语法错的多。话说的还不通顺。我觉得吧就是从简单的开始用。你第一句其实用的到好还挺牛的。可是你不会用就是要扣分的啊。...

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n你这个是essay 吧。请不要用任何和i we our这些主观的东西。还有你你第二句话就是错的无动词。financial是个形容词吧。 第三句无动词。觉得吧写起来我总觉得你的好词都是硬套上去的。你还是叫个人改吧。语法错的多。话说的还不通顺。我觉得吧就是从简单的开始用。你第一句其实用的到好还挺牛的。可是你不会用就是要扣分的啊。

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