剑七小作文

篇一：剑7 test3 雅思小作文

剑7 test3

WRITING

Task 1

范文

The given diagrams offer a glimpse of the real estate market in five major cities around the world over two periods, from 1990 to 1995，and from 1996 to 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

Madrid is the only city which saw housing prices climb throughout the ten-year period. In the first five years, a 2% rise was recorded in Madrid. The increase accelerated in subsequent years, with a 3% gain seen. To great surprise, London and New York underwent similar trend, to be exact, compared with 1989, the latter had a fall of 7% in the first 5 years but enjoyed an astounding 12% increa

By contrast, the property market of Tokyo was continuously at recession, reflected in an average 6.5% drop. It is notable that the decrease in the housing price in Frankfurt was narrower, 2% of growth against 1998, but still disappointing, compared to its 3% increase in the first half of 1990s.

To recall, there were significant differences in the housing market in those five cities in the last decade of the last century. While some experienced a long period of growth, the rest were subject to price fluctuations.

名师点题剑桥雅思7作文：

文章布局分析

范文由4段组成：第一段为引言段，介绍这个图的基本情况；第二段点出极值信息，并比较走势相近的两个城市信息；第三段介绍最低迷的城市的信息；最后一段总结和归纳。

篇二：剑桥7小作文(完美)

雅思强化写作小作文补充讲义（剑桥7册范文解析）

☆ 剑桥7的表格图：（P30） This is table illustrates the consumption survey on different items in five countries, namely, Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002. Generally speaking, all the countries spend most heavily on the items of Food / drinks / Tobacco. While the item of leisure / education account for the least percentage.Consulting from the first category, Turkey constitutes the largest percentage, with 32.14%. This is followed by Ireland, at 28.91%. Spain is third high spender (18.80%). Italy and Sweden ranks the fourth and fifth respectively. As for the category of clothing / food-wear, Italy and Sweden takes up the largest and lowest share respectively (9% and 5.4%). Interestingly, the other three counties’ consumption is close to 6.5% on average. As far as the third category is concerned, turkey people spend most money on leisure / education, at 4.35%. What noteworthy is that Italy and Sweden has the similar percentage (3.20% and 3.22%). Still, there is no great difference between Ireland and Spain, which constitutes 2.21% and

1.98% respectively.

☆ 剑桥7的线图：（P53）

This is a line charts illustrates consumption survey of fish, lamb, beef and chicken in a European country in grams per person per week (G/P/W) from 1979 to 2004

Fish is 60 G/P/W in 1979, then, it drops to slightly below 50 G/P/W by 1982 and thereafter remains roughly constant between 40 G/P/W and 50 G/P/W.

Lamb is 150 G/P/W in 1979, falling to about 65 G/P/W in 2004. However, the fall in not continuous or even. For example, there is a minor rise from 1895 to 1987.

Beef follows a similar pattern to that of lamb. Overall, consumption drops from 220 G/P/W in 1979 to 110 in 2004. Notably， the fall in consumption is not even or continuous. Consumption falls significantly from 220 G/P/W in 1979 to 170 G/P/W in 1981, then rises dramatically to 240 G/P/W in 1982, remaining relatively steady for the next few years.

Chicken is the only one that has risen, from 140 G/P/W in 1979 to 250 G/P/W in 2004. The rise / increase is neither continuous nor even.

To summarize, beef and lamb consumption decrease significantly over time = with the addition of time, fish consumption almost remains constant, while chicken consumption rises.

☆ 剑桥7的柱子图：(P78)The given charts show how average house prices have changed in five cities. One shows the change from 1990 to 1995 compared with 1989, while the other shows the change from 1996 to 2002 in comparison with 1989.

It can seen from graph that houses prices in New York and London followed the similar pattern falling during the first period (by 5% and 7 % respectively) and rising during the second (by 5% and 12% respectively) period in comparison with 1989.

Houses prices in Madrid and Frankfurt rose during both period in comparison with 1989, though the increase in Frankfurt was greater during the first (2%) than Madrid (1.5%). On the other hand, the increase in Madrid was higher during the second period (4%) than Frankfurt (1.5%)

Tokyo was the only city where house prices fell in both periods compared with 1989. Between 1990 and 1995, they fell by 7.5% and between 1996 to 2002 they decreased by 5%.

To summarize, there was no consistent factor in house prices in the five cities. Though prices, compared to 1989, seemed to be higher in the period 1996—2002 than 1990—1995.

☆ 剑桥7的饼图：(P100)The charts illustrates how Australia and France produced electricity in 1980 and in 2000, by fuel force.

In Australia, electricity generation rose from 100 units (1980) to 170 units (2000). In 1980, coal accounted for half of production (50 units), but this had increased to 130 units in 2000. Hydro-electric power production almost doubled from 20 units to 36 units. Meanwhile, production of electricity from natural gas and oil declined from 20 units and 10 units respectively to 2 units each. Australia did not use unclear power for generating electricity.

In France, electricity generation doubled from 90 units (1980) to 180 units (2000). In 1980, no source was dominant, but this changed by 2000 when nuclear power generated three-quarters (126 units) of the country’s electricity, compared with 15 units in 1980. Coal use remained unchanged at 25 units. Oil use increased from 20 units to 25units. Again, the proportion of fell. Natural gas and hydro-electric power accounted for 25 units and 5 units in 1980, but both had fallen to 2 units in 2000.

In summary, over the period 1980 ---2000, Australia came to rely mainly on coal for electricity generation, while France came to rely mainly on nuclear power.

篇三：记叙文写作的“四大”“七小”

记叙文写作的“四大”“七小”

[摘 要] 高考语文记叙文写作要注意“四大”、“七小”。“四大”

就是：演绎一个故事；刻画一个人物；表达一种感情；揭示一个哲

理。“七小”就是：细节描写；设置悬念；创设误会；制造巧合；

虚实结合；抑扬并用；结尾点题。

[关键词] 高考 记叙文 写作

2011年参加广东高考语文作文评卷，我发现绝大多数考生继续演

绎“八股文式”的议论文，千篇一律，千人一面，几乎都是“中心

论点+几个分论点+几个事例”的议论文，很少写真情实感的记叙文。

这种现象不符合当代中学生的个性特点，也背离了素质教育的宗

旨。

那么，高考语文记叙文写作要注意什么？我认为要注意“四大”、

“七小”。所谓“四大”就是四个大方向，即：演绎一个故事；刻

画一个人物；表达一种感情；揭示一个哲理。所谓“七小”就是七

个小技巧，即：细节描写；设置悬念；创设误会；制造巧合；虚实

结合；抑扬并用；结尾点题。

一、把握四个大方向

1.演绎一个故事。记叙文就是要写人、叙事。看到标题或话题就

可以由此联想到与题目相关的故事，可以是自己亲身经历的，也可

以是耳闻目睹的事。

2.刻画一个人物。记叙文除了叙事以外，刻画人物也必不可少。

故事中的主人公形象的刻画可以通过以小见大的手法进行，从大处

着眼，小处着笔，重点突出人物的个性。

3.表达一种情感。演绎了故事，刻画了人物，第三个大方向就是

表达一种情感。我们在选材时，注意选取自己亲身经历的典型事例，

不一定要轰轰烈烈的大事，日常生活的小事也可以，可以通过以小

见大的手法抒写真切的感受，表达人生的感悟。

4.揭示一种思想。一篇记叙文如果只有故事没有思想，也就失去

了文章教育人的功能。要学会透过现象看本质，要揭示问题产生的

根本原因，要写出人生的感悟；要做到人无我有，人有我新，要有

真知灼见，有教育意义。这是写记叙文要把握好的第四个大方向。

二、演绎好七个小技巧

1.细节描写。所谓细节描写，简而言之就是情节中那些极富个性

特点的细枝末节的描写。细节描写对烘托人物、推动故事情节发展、

深化文章主题有着极其重要的作用。细节描写主要抓住人物的语

言、行动、心理活动、神态等方面进行描写，以达到刻画人物、表

现主题的目的。那么，如何进行细节描写呢？首先，要注意观察。

处处留心，时时在意，从不同角度进行观察。现实生活中，一个人

总会不自觉地表现出来某个习惯性动作或说的某句话，这些细节都

会反映出其个性品质或兴趣爱好等。只要我们善于发现，注意观察，

便能发现其中的道理。

2.设置悬念。设置悬念，也叫“卖关子”，即设疑团，不作解答，

借以激发读者的阅读兴趣。这样就可以使文章情节更加曲折，富于

变化美，而且还能使文章波澜起伏，有张有弛，吸引读者。

3.制造误会。制造误会就是借助人物之间的各种误会造成一定的

矛盾冲突，从而铺排情节，它能使叙事波澜起伏，使人物形象生动

丰满。如《驿路梨花》一文对小茅屋的主人误会多多，悬念重重，

曲折动人，波澜起伏，引人入胜。因此，我们写记叙文时，可以以

某件事为基础，通过艺术加工，让人与人之间产生一点美丽的误会，

推动故事情节发展，使文章在曲折中增加更多趣味，产生令人意想

不到的艺术效果。

4.创设巧合。创设巧合，是指让两个或两个以上的人物碰巧相遇，

使矛盾突显或突然得到解决，从而产生文势起伏曲折的小技法。我

们创设巧合时，对巧合的时间、地点、事件、人物等都要合情合理，

切不可胡编巧合，违背常理。否则，文章就会失去真实性，弄巧成

拙。

5.虚实结合。虚实结合是作文构思的技法之一，对刻画人物而言，

又可以称之为直接描写与间接描写。直接是实写，间接是虚写。一

般来说，实写是指真实地把正在发生的人和事写清楚，而虚写是写

与真实的正在发生的事件相关的回忆、联想、想象、心理活动等。

虚实结合的写法能使文章的感情表达更真实而富有层次感，更能打

动人心。

6.抑扬并用。抑扬并用可以使文章更为曲折多变。最常见的是欲

扬先抑，具体来说是文章为了更好地颂扬人物或事件，先对其进行

贬抑，最后才褒扬，构成一种由贬到褒的写作过程。这样使行文曲

折生动，波澜起伏，造成悬念，形成对比，使读者在阅读过程中获

得恍然大悟的快感，留下深刻的印象。

7.结尾点题。记叙文要防止就事论事，没有上升到理论的高度，

没有主旨，没有点明事件的意义，没有让人得到启迪或受到教育。

卒章显志，结尾点题，是记叙文最常见的技法之一。在充分叙述的

基础上，水到渠成，一语破的，既让读者充分地、准确地把握中心

思想，也让人受到启迪。

总之，高考记叙文写作要拿高分，要让评卷者有眼前一亮的感觉，

就要把握好四个大方向，演绎好七个小技巧；从大处着眼，小处着

笔，具体地叙事，细腻地刻画。让故事曲折多变，波澜起伏；让人

物形象丰满，个性鲜明；使文章主题深刻，哲理凸显；使读者心灵

净化，思想升华。

（作者单位：广东省罗定市素龙第一中学）