听写作文

篇一：听写作文,作文教学的有效尝试

听写作文，作文教学的有效尝试

如何提高作文水平？从古至今，仁者见仁智者见智。有人认为，

“拳不离手，曲不离口”，多练勤练，方可铁杵磨成针；有人认为，

“读书破万卷，下笔如有神”，博览群书，必能出口成章。多读多

写，一直被认为是提高写作水平的最有效途径之一。然而这样的方

法毕竟历时过长，收效过慢，会令学生产生惧惧、厌烦的心理。难

道作文教学真的一定要如此痛苦吗？通过一段时间的摸索，我觉得

听写作文，是能比较快速提高学生写作水平的一种方法。

一、什么是听写作文

叶圣陶先生曾经说过：“阅读是吸收，写作是倾吐，倾吐能否合于

法度，显然与吸收有密切关系。”听写作文是将阅读吸收与写作表

达合二为一、同步完成的一种引练方法。听写作文的训练是从语段

训练向独立写完整作文过渡的方式之一。教师根据习作目标，选取

合适的文章，声情并茂地读1～2遍，学生认真听后尽力把文章记

录下来，可用自己的语言进行描述，也可复述文中的语言。

二、听写作文的作用

1.丰富了作文的形式，给学生耳目一新的感觉，活跃了写作气氛，

激发了写作的兴趣。

2.降低了习作的难度，为学生写好作文造桥铺路，消除了学生对

作文的神秘感和畏难心理，符合教育心理学原理。而且听写的作文

和书上的范文各有特色，开阔了学生的视野，不会令学生被范文拘

束，更利于创新能力的培养。

3.体现了训练的梯度，不同水平的孩子都能有所得。写作水平差

的同学学习到了如何用词，能把句子写通顺；写作能力中等的同学

能通过完整地叙述，学习到如何选择材料来表达；写作水平高的同

学能学习到如何谋篇布局，如何构思立意，由复述到仿写，由仿写

到创新。

4.把听、说、复述、模仿、创新有机结合，学生的注意力、听说

能力、理解能力、表达能力等多种能力都得到了有效的训练。

三、听写作文的具体实施

1.材料，精心挑选

听写作文所选择的材料要注意以下几点：（1）选取的作文以同

龄人的为宜，名家的文章固然优秀，但与学生们的距离较远，水

平太高，不容易使学生产生亲近感，容易令学生“望而生畏”。（2）

篇幅不宜过长，针对不同年段的学生篇幅要求不同，高年级控制在

500字以内，中年级的控制在300字左右。（3）选取的文章要有一

定的针对性。并不是随便什么好文章都可以拿来进行听力训练，要

根据近期作文教学的侧重点来选择，如侧重于对话训练，侧重于心

理描写等。（4）作文要有一定的趣味性。

2.朗读，声情并茂

要想把听力作文写好，教师的读很重要，要尽可能做到声情并茂，

使学生能在脑海中勾勒出文中的情节、形象，记住作文内容，这也

有利于学生在写作时进行个性化的表达。朗读的语速也不应过快，

要根据年段的不同，由慢到快，长文章可以在读完每个自然段后停

顿一下，让学生能适当地记忆、整理。

3.写作，各显其能

一般来说，刚开始写听写作文时，大多学生只能做到照本宣科。

写作水平差的同学可能300字的作文只能写出100字，写作能力强

的可以基本还原内容，这都没关系，能写多少是多少，教师可以逐

步提高要求。如有一次听作文《第一次吃苦瓜》，我对学生提出了

不同的要求，写作水平差的同学要把吃苦瓜的经历和感受尽可能地

写详细，水平一般的同学可以适当展开想象，进一步充实内容，哪

怕只添加两句话也是提高，水平高的同学可以直接跳出文章内容，

模仿着文章的写法来写自己的《第一次吃 》。这样的听力要求受到

了同学们的欢迎，大部分学生都完成得不

错。另外听写作文最好在课堂内完成，时间控制在30分钟左右。

4.指导，富针对性

可能有人会认为听写作文不需要指导，其实不然，听写作文如果

能恰当地指导，会产生相当好的效果。在写作教学中，每每在给学

生讲述文章的选材与立意、详写与略写、谋局与布篇等规则时，会

发现孩子很难明白。如果能用听写作文来指导写作技巧，将会起到

事半功倍的效果。由于听写的材料经过了细致的挑选，有针对性，

那么只要在听的时候能给予学生一些点拨，令学生感悟到本次指导

的关键，如排比句的气势磅礴、对话提示语的准确、谋局布篇的巧

妙等，让学生在写作的时候再体会体会，用自己的笔再现出来，就

能使学生愉快地接受写作知识和技巧。

5.评价，正面鼓励

由于听写作文的内容是老师提供的，文章的结构层次、中心内容

都已经设计好了，学生一般能凭借记忆把文章写得顺序合

理、中心明确。因此在批改时应以正面鼓励为主，根据不同学生

的写作水平，纵向评价学生的进步，尽可能地调动学生的积极性。

四、听写作文应注意的问题

听写作文毕竟只是提高写作水平的方法之一，在作文教学中应有

一席之地，但也要有度，一般每周1～2次即可，否则易使孩子产

生依赖心理。

著名的国画大师齐白石说过：“学我者生，仿我者死。”就是强调

仿中创新。听写作文不仅仅是一种习作教学的积累形式，同时也应

是学生写作从仿到创的桥梁。

当然，任何有效的方法都离不开持之以恒的行动。如果能将听写

作文坚持一段比较长的时间，我相信学生们的写作水平是能得到有

效的提高的。

（作者单位 江苏省常州市天宁区雕庄中心小学）

篇二：小学作文：听写

听写

晚饭后，我随意翻了一下书，就叫妈妈给我听写。

一个个词语从妈妈嘴里蹦出来，我的本子上也写的密密麻麻了。“借鉴。好啦，听完了!”妈妈说着走出了房间。咦?“借鉴”的“鉴”字是怎么写的?下面是一个“金”还是一个......我犹豫不决。写对了固然好，要是也错啦......要知道，我和妈妈订了“君子协议”：作业做完后妈妈不限制我玩的时间，但是，一旦发现了错误就罚我抄200遍生字! 怎么办?嘿，有啦。我拿出橡皮，心里祈祷着，正面是“金”反面是“ 我祈祷着，一扔，是正面，我立马写了上去，居然写对了!

今天真是太惊险了、太幸运了!要是听写前认真复习过就不会这样心惊胆战了。下次可不敢了，不可能次次走运嘛!

篇三：小作文补听写

Hello, Miss Li! I write this composition in order to offset the mistake of having a day off without telling you. To assure the reality of this composition, I am willing to share my standpoints on Business Administration, which is impossible to find relevant information on the Internet. This major, generally speaking, is most of us often hear about but do not hanker to acquaintance in a deeper level. From my perspective, Business Administration is an exceeding difficult curriculum when it is compared to other subjects. First and foremost, it contains a quantity of elusive and dazzling theories which are relevant to a wide range of realm. For instance, we are bound to have sufficient proficiency on using some mathematical formulas and then utilize them as the necessary implements to understand some opaque economic knowledge. Moreover, this major emphasis on putting these abstract theories into practice. It is another difficulty because the reality is flexible but the knowledge you have learned is fixed. Consequently, the prerequisite you are at home with mastering expertise of business administration is a great deal of work experience, or you will meet many

kinds of setbacks in the process of learning theories. But for us, it is almost ridiculous to have chances to govern a company which means we will not gain abundant experience before we graduate from campus. So, if you have ambitious goals, if you want to be a prominent bellwether in this field, there is not surplus time which permits you to continue current lifestyle. Instead, constant pressure should be on your shoulder to become an impetus which will promote you in many respects. Just say something about myself. As a freshman, I still have deficiency on persistence and as a result, I feel contented when I comprehend some superficial theories and choose giving up when suffering mental and physical fatigue in the process of working out some profound problems. This directly leads to my loss of competence against innumerable competitors. Having considered about the working conditions of this major, I reckon that cultivate the endurance of hardship and tension is also urgently needed. Only making enough preparation can we adapt staying up late for consecutive days and keep an intensive concentration in a high pressure environment in the future. Last but not least I want to say is, we should not ignore the magnitude of building up enormous confidence. This will be benefit us when we make discreet choice in a short time. Finally I want to quote a proverb that is “all roads lead to Roma”. What I said just now represents my own viewpoints and does not mean there are not any other paths to success. I always believe that as long as we can keep walking forward according to our rational scheme, all of us can be successful in the realm of business administration!

篇四：作文听写文档

Topic 1: Certificate Craze On Campus

1．近几年大学生们热衷于考取各种各样的证书，校园内出现“考证热” 2．产生这种现象的原因3．在我看来……

Nowadays there is a "certificate craze" on campus. Thousands of college

students are 1___ on working for various certificates, such as CET Band 4 and Band 6 certificates, Business English Certificate, and other different 2____certificates. But why is there such a craze? First, it has much to do with the 3____ competitive workforce market. It is widely believed that

4.____________________________. 5. ______________________. They have been interested in a certain field and have worked hard on it, so they want a certificate to 6. ___their efforts.

I think the certificate craze is good for both the society and students.

7.___________________________________their college life will be more fruitful than otherwise.

1.keen 2.professional 3. fierce

4.the more certificates a college student has on graduation , the better chance he has for a decent job.

5. Second, many students just want to prove themselves by working for a certificate.

6.justify

7.When students combine their work for some certificates with their academic efforts

Nowadays there is a "certificate craze" on campus. Thousands of college

students are keen on working for various certificates, such as CET Band 4 and Band 6 certificates, Business English Certificate, and other different professional certificates. But why is there such a craze? First, it has much to do with the fierce

competitive workforce market. It is widely believed that the more certificates a

college student has on graduation, the better chance he has for a decent job. Second, many students just want to prove themselves by working for a certificate. They have been interested in a certain field and have worked hard on it, so they want a certificate to justify their efforts.

I think the certificate craze is good for both the society and students. When

students combine their work for some certificates with their academic efforts, their college life will be more fruitful than otherwise.

Topic 2: On Food Safety

1．接连发生的食品安全问题引起大家的密切关注，比如牛奶问题

2．请分析一下食品安全的重要性

3．你认为相关部门应采取什么措施加强食品安全

The problem of food safety has 1.___ much attention recently. Everyone is 2. ___ at the news that thousands of babies 3. _____from serious health problems because they had been fed with some 4. _____ milk products.

The issue of food safety is so important that we cannot afford to 5. ___it. For one thing,6.________________________ For another, 7. ____________________ especially when such food is exported to other countries. Furthermore,

8._______________________________ which may cause disastrous effect to our economy.

Therefore, 9. _______________________________. The government must

10._________________________________________________________.

1. attracted 2. astonished 3. suffered 4. poisonous 5. ignore

6. food safety concerns the well-being of all the people in the country.

7. failure to ensure the safety of food causes damage to the image of our government,

8. unsafe food can undermine consumers' confidence in the food industry,

9. our government should take all measures to make sure that all the food in our country is safe to eat.

10. strictly carry out food safety standards, and impose severe punishment on those who violate them.

The problem of food safety has attracted much attention recently. Everyone is astonished at the news that thousands of babies suffered from serious health problems because they had been fed with some poisonous milk products.

The issue of food safety is so important that we cannot afford to ignore it. For one thing, food safety concerns the well-being of all the people in the country. For another, failure to ensure the safety of food causes damage to the image of our

government, especially when such food is exported to other countries. Furthermore, unsafe food can undermine consumers' confidence in the food industry, which may cause disastrous effect to our economy.

Therefore, our government should take all measures to make sure that all the food in our country is safe to eat. The government must strictly carry out food safety standards, and impose severe punishment on those who violate them.

Topic 3: Avoid Plagiarism

1．论文抄袭(Plagiarism)现象频频出现2．由此带来的问题3．如何杜绝这种状况

Plagiarism has been an increasingly serious problem on1. ______. Many college students use others' ideas without reasonably stating the2. ___. Even some professors are discovered to have 3. ____passages from the works of others.

Undoubtedly plagiarism has much bad effect. First, 4._____________________ Second, 5.______________________________________. Plagiarism may have brought them something they need for the moment, but

6._______________________ .Finally, plagiarism brings negative impact on the ordinary people.7. __________________________________________.

To avoid plagiarism,8. ________________________. For prevention, 9.

_________________________________ . For correction, 10.__________________.

1. campus 2.sources 3.borrowed

4. those whose works have been plagiarized suffer losses because their efforts were not duly recognized.

5. those who plagiarize also endure great mental pressures

6. they are always in a fear that someday their plagiarism may be disclosed, and then their career may be totally destroyed.

7. They may lose their faith in the academic field and no longer believe in the saying "Honesty is the best policy."

8. both prevention and correction are needed

9. all people should be taught lessons on the various forms of plagiarism

10. severe punishment is called for when plagiarism is discovered.

Plagiarism has been an increasingly serious problem on campus. Many college students use others' ideas without reasonably stating the sources. Even some professors are discovered to have borrowed passages from the works of others. Undoubtedly plagiarism has much bad effect. First, those whose works have been plagiarized suffer losses because their efforts were not duly recognized. Second, those who plagiarize also endure great mental pressures. Plagiarism may have brought them something they need for the moment, but they are always in a fear that someday their plagiarism may be disclosed, and then their career may be totally destroyed. Finally, plagiarism brings negative impact on the ordinary people. They may lose their faith in the academic field and no longer believe in the saying "Honesty is the best policy."

To avoid plagiarism, both prevention and correction are needed. For prevention, all people should be taught lessons on the various forms of plagiarism. For correction, severe punishment is called for when plagiarism is discovered.

Topic 4: My View on Writing a Blog

1．越来越多的大学生以写博客来记录生活，表达感情，发表意见2．有人支持，有人反对3．我的看法

More and more college students are becoming 1.____. They keep blogs to 2.___ down what happens to them, to describe their 3._____and feelings, and to express opinions on 4._____affairs.

There are different views regarding this 5.______. Some people think it's a good idea for college students to keep a blog. They say blogs do not only 6.

______________ , but also 7._________________________. Others think

differently. They are afraid that 8.___________________________.Therefore both

9.____________________________________may suffer.

In my opinion, both views are reasonable. 10. ______________________.

1.bloggers 2. note 3.emotions 4. current 5. phenomenon

6. provide an outlet for the students' inner feelings like traditional diaries

7. provide a channel through which young people can communicate with one another

8.some students have spent too much time on their blogs, trying hard to win clicks and replies.

9.their academic work and their everyday interpersonal relationships

10. While writing blogs are advisable, the students also need to be aware of its potential shortcomings

More and more college students are becoming bloggers. They keep blogs to note down what happens to them, to describe their emotions and feelings, and to express opinions on current affairs.

There are different views regarding this phenomenon. Some people think it's a good idea for college students to keep a blog. They say blogs do not only provide an outlet for the students' inner feelings like traditional diaries, but also provide a

channel through which young people can communicate with one another. Others think differently. They are afraid that some students have spent too much time on their blogs, trying hard to win clicks and replies. Therefore both their academic work and their everyday interpersonal relationships may suffer.

篇五：作文紧张的 听 写

紧张的听写

三门峡市一小

“叮铃铃”随着午读铃声的响起，我的心情也变得十分紧张。因为语文老师提前告知午读前要组织一次听写，内容是单元语文天地中的词语和句子。

虽然我对这一部分的知识掌握的比较牢固，但是心里还是七上八下的。为了能复习一会儿，我早早地来到了学校。可是，当我刚拿出语文书准备复习的时候，老师也随后进了教室。当天的值日班干部开始为我们进行听写了，我连忙手耳并用，生怕错过一个词语。

最初，听写进行的十分顺利，可是，我不小心写错了一个字。于是，我把它划掉重写，可是，值班干部已经开始念下一个词了，我只写了一个字就急急忙忙的去补前面那个写错的字，刚补完这个词，下一个新的词语已经念出来了??如此恶性循环，我越来越慌乱了，手心里也冒出了一丝丝冷汗。在慌乱中，我居然听漏了“昔日”这个词，还将另一个词多画了一捺。慌慌张张地听写完后，我翻开了语文书察看时，才意识到自己的两处错误。再看看周围的同学，他们有的十分沮丧，低着头说：“完了，完了。”有的同学脸上则露出欣喜的神色，还有的低头仔细盯着书本，正在和记忆中自己听写的词语对照??

放学前，听写纸发了下来。正(转 载 于:wWW.smHAida.cOM 海达范文网:听写作文)如我预料——96分，而出错的就是那两个词。通过这次听写，我意识到自己在学习上的漏洞，

自以为掌握扎实的知识在慌乱和紧张中还是会出现意想不到的错误，忙中出错也是技艺不精的表现啊！今后我可不能再自满了。

辅导教师 王翔祥

评语：作者以朴实的语言写出了紧张的学习生活。原本掌握扎实的语文基础知识，只因慌乱而出现意想不到的错误。那种顾头顾不了尾的紧张情绪在作者的寥寥几笔中引发很多同学的共鸣，给人留下深刻的印象。

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