突发事件话题作文
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篇一:中考作文各话题
中考英语作文分类
一、突发事件问题(热点)
突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题,从非典到雪灾,从地震到甲型HINI流感病例(A/HINI flu cases),都频频出现在各地中考试卷中,因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度,掌握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要
典型例句
1.one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数
One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in WenChuan.
2. It's our duty to do sth
It's our duty to help them.
3.As….as possible
We shoud help them as much as possible.
4.here be…..
Here are lots of things we can do.
5.We shoud keep calm instead of being afraid.
6.make +sb+ 形容词
It makes many people homeless.
7. too …..to
They are too young to look after themselves
例文
1、 汶川大地震
(黑龙江鸡西)A.5月12日,四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震,那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城,抗震救灾。作为一名中学生,请你谈谈你的做法和感受。
要求:文章语言流畅,逻辑清晰,用词准确,80—100字左右;词汇参考:地震earthquake悲痛sorrow受到感动be deeply moved安慰comfort重建rebuild自愿做某事volunteer to do sth
参考范文:
On May 12th, a big earthquake happened in Wenchun, Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.
I’m deeply moved by these people. So I’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.
2、雪灾
去年春节期间,我国大部分地区遭受雪灾,特别是南方,室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭,电网瘫痪,数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难,在各级
政府的带领下,人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾,涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生,你有何感想?有何打算?能不能改变这种状态?
As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldn't go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.
3.甲型HINI流感
从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感(A/HINI flu),部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况,并给他提出防护建议。 要点:
一.询问
1.他的健康状况;
2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例(A/HINI flu cases);
3.他们是否还上学。
二.建议
1.尽量呆在家里,少去人多的地方;
2.勤洗手;讲卫生
3.多开窗,保持空气新鲜;
4.多吃水果蔬菜。
Dear Mike,
From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result. I’m so worried about you. Are you all right? Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school? Do you still have to school everyday?
To stay away from the disease, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetables to keep yourself fit and strong.
So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you’ll be OK.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
4、(四川南充)“5.12”汶川大地震后,某校将开展“人人为灾区孩子献爱心”的主题班会活动,现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书,内容要点如下:
1.许多孩子地震后不能上学 2.。没有足够的学习用品和衣物 3.每个孩子都应该有上学的权利
4.我们应该作一些力所能及的事情去帮助、他们,比如…… 5.希望他们能尽快重返校园……. 注意:1.可根据要点,适当发挥,(参考词汇:school things, have the right to do something, as possible as one can)
2.词数:70词左右
参考作文:
Dear students,
After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school. Some of them are even homeless.Their schools and houses have destroyed. They can just live in the open air. They don’t have enough school things or clothes .As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble. As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can. We can raise some money and things for them. And we can also write to them to encourage them. I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.
Students’ Union
二、健康问题(热点)
健康问题是中考常考的话题,出题形式多样,有必要下苦功掌握。
典型例句
1. It is very important to keep healthy。
2. How can we keep healthy?
3. We can't go to sleep too late. We can't get up too late。
4. We should eat the food healthily。
5. We should do more exercise。
6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。
7. I didn't feel like eating anything。
8. I decided to see the doctor。
9. In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully。
10. He said :"Nothing serious." And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。
11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful。
12. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。
13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。
1.卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。
保持健康的重要性
保持健康的方法1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物
2.多锻炼健身强体;
3.鄙弃不良习惯
保持健康的结论(你的看法?)
How to stay our health /fit?
范文1: Dear boys and grils :
I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle shool studentfirst you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子). Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Don’t eat too much meat and suger but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest . Nextkeep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank youbye!
范文2:Dear boys and girls:
I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit?Today many teenagers are unhealthybecause they do less exercise eat more junk foodisn’t enough time to sleep. If we keep fitwe must keep taking exercises every day .Eat lots of fruit and vegetables .Sleep for about 8 hours a night.Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品 .Early to bed early to rise/get up .Breathe (呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day. That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.
2、根据中英文提示,写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。(字数不少于60词,英文提示词供选用)
有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭,常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿,谈谈你的看法和建议。
参考词汇:not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer
范文:
We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.
In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.
三、关于环境保护问题(热点)
环境保护问题是中考热门话题,出现频率高,难度较大,必须掌握。
典型句子
1. It’s our duty to save water
2. As we know , water is very important to people
3.we can’t live without water.
4.The number of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.
5.But some people don’t care about it .
6.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.
Something must be done to stop the pollution.
7. It's our duty to protect our environment。
8. It is very important to take care of our environment
9. We should not throw litter here and there
10. We should not spit in public / cut down the trees
11. We should plant more flowers and trees。
12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the worl(来自:WWw.zW2.CN 爱作文网)d will become much more beautiful。
14.Trees are very helpful and important for us.
15.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. It’s our duty to love and protect the environment.
例文
1.假如你是新华中学的学生,名叫MIKE。去年6月1日,我国已经禁止使用塑料袋,你对此有何看法和什么好的建议?
I’m Mike. I am a student in Huaxing Middle School. Do you know the plastic bags? Do you often use the plastic bags? I don’t like them. I think they use the wasting valuable oil their production. And they can’t decompose(分解) in a short time. The plastic bags will make our world worse. I agree with the rule, which people can’t get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets. It encourages people to use their cloth bags and baskets. It’s good for our environment.
So I hope all the students in our class stop to use the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags. I hope we can take care of our environment.
Let’s make our world more and more beautiful.
2 、 6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日, 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕,污染越来越严重……。假如你是学生Jone.,你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛,要求:1、举例说明环境存在的问题1—3方面;2、如何保护好我们的环境,采取怎样的措施,举例1—3方面进行说明,字数80左右。
Dear headmasters,teachers,classmates and friends:
I’m very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I’m a bit nervous as I’ve never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.
As we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. .But what can we do? How to protect our environmemt ?For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better. “There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!
篇二:中考作文 突发事件
突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题,从非典到雪灾,从地震到甲型HINI流感病例(A/HINI flu cases),都频频出现在各地中考试卷中,因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度,掌握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要。
典型例句:
1. one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数
One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in WenChuan.
2. It’s our duty to do sth
It’s our duty to help them.
3. As….as possible
We should help them as much as possible.
4. Here be…..
Here are lots of things we can do.
5. We should keep calm instead of being afraid.我们要保持冷静而不能害怕。
6. make +sb+ 形容词
It makes many people homeless.
7. too … to= so … that
They are too young to look after themselves
例文:
1、汶川大地震
2008年5月12日,四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震,那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城,抗震救灾。作为一名中学生,请你谈谈你的做法和感受。 要求:文章语言流畅,逻辑清晰,用词准确,80—100字左右;
词汇参考:地震earthquake,悲痛sorrow,受到感动be deeply moved,安慰comfort,重建rebuild,自愿做某事volunteer to do sth.
参考范文:
On May 12th, a big earthquake happened in Wenchun, Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow. A lot of
people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign
friends also give them a hand.
I’m deeply moved by these people. So I’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.
2、雪灾
2008年春节期间,我国大部分地区遭受雪灾,特别是南方,室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭,电网瘫痪,数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难,在各级政府的带领下,人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾,涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生,你有何感想?有何打算?能不能改变这种状态?
As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldn’t go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food,
water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against
heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.
3.甲型HINI流感
从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感(A/HINI flu),部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况,并给他提出防护建议。
要点:
一.询问
1.他的健康状况;
2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例(A/HINI flu cases);
3.他们是否还上学。
二.建议
1.尽量呆在家里,少去人多的地方;
2.勤洗手;讲卫生
3.多开窗,保持空气新鲜;
4.多吃水果蔬菜。
Dear Mike,
From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result. I’m so worried about you. Are you alright? Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school? Do you still have to school everyday?
To stay away from the disease, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.
So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you’ll be OK.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
篇三:2011年情景作文及突发事件作文
Unit2 突发事件写作训练
突发事件写作结构:
Para1 : Setting the scene
Para2:Development of the story
Pare3:Conclusion
突发事件写作要求:
1. 主要事件的逻辑顺序清晰,要点完整
2. 关联词,过渡句,时间状语至关重要
3. 时态语态的准确使用
4. 所有要点的遣词造句要生动,准确。
5. 开头段背景概括或事件介绍不可忽视,要做到开宗明义,先声夺人的效果。
6. 结尾段的事件后果,影响及升华是画龙点睛的关键所在,行文上要水到渠成,达到虎头
豹尾的效果。
以一篇文章的部分片段为例分析突发事件写作的结构及要求
一.结构
Para1 : Setting the scene
One Friday evening I was walking home from school. It was raining and it was starting to get dark.
Para2:Development of the story
I was waiting at some traffic lights when, suddenly, I heard a scream from somewhere above me. I looked up and saw a woman at a window. She screamed “fire” and I knew I had to do
something quickly. I ran into the house. It was full of smoke, so first I covered my face, meanwhile, one of the neighbours phoned the…
Pare3:Conclusion
As they were taking me away in an ambulance, I could see them fighting the fire. In the end, a fireman came up to me and thanked me. A few weeks later I went to …
二.主要事件要点
1.was walking home
2.heard a scream
3.found a house on fire
4.ran into the house
5.Firefighter put out the fire
三.连接每个要点间的关联词
1.was walking home
2.heard a scream
4.ran into the house
5.Firefighter put out the fire
2011年北京卷
高考英语情景作文题目:
假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,下面四幅图描述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事,请根据图片的先后顺序,为校刊"英语园地"写一篇短文,词数不少于60.
本文审题要点:
第一人称,过去时,四个要点,事件的起承转合,三段式写作,升华主题:师生情 范文一:高考范文
Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell. We were all worried about her. One of the boys carried her on the back, with the help of some others, to the clinic immediately. It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hospital. The following day, we went to visit her with flower and fruit. Seeing her lying in bed with leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon. This Thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher.
范文二: 19分 高分范文
We believe in the philosophy that offering others help makes ourselves satisfied, and here is what happened recently in my class.
One day, when our math teacher was giving a class, she suddenly lost balance, and with her high heels broken by the edge, she felt down and hurt her legs! Everyone was astonished at that time. However, we quickly calmed ourselves down and swiftly carried her to the clinic. On the way, we asked anxiously whether it hurt a lot and told her not to move. Having been diagnosed as a severe bone hurt, she had to stay in hospital for weeks. In order to cease her feeling of loneliness, we planned a visit to her several days later. There we sent her flowers, wishing her a quick recovery. Some held her hands and delivered our care for her, while others promised to study hard. We chatted happily, and I saw her tears of satisfaction and pleasure. Yesterday was a big day---- our teacher returned “home” from the hospital! Seeing her smiling face, we clapped our hands as a warm welcome. She, though sitting a wheelchair, showed her pleasant smile like an angel, as if she was expressing her thanks. Again, I saw tears shinning in her eyes ---- they were the symbols of happiness rather than tiredness.
This was just a simple thing in our school life, but something meaningful. Our teachers never fail to offer us their meticulous care. So when they need help, it’s our duty as well as honor to lend a helping hand. In this way, we can create a harmonious teacher-student relationship!
点评:19分
覆盖所有内容要点,句式多样词汇丰富;用词方面有些许错误,但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致;有较强的语言运用能力,有效地连接了语句间的成分;内容连贯,结构紧凑。
范文三:16分 二类文
I’m LiHua, grade 2 class 1. Let me tell you a true story happened in my class recently . It was a normal Monday morning, our math teacher was giving us a vivid class attentively. Suddenly, she failed to notice the step and fell down. So badly hurt was her left leg that I took her on my back, rushing to the clinic. To everyone’s sadness, our teacher’s bone was broken so had to stay in hospital for a week. During the week without our teacher, we formed a group to visit her everyday. Bringing some flowers and fresh fruits. We told her daily news in our school, hoping to cheer her up. the teacher was also very moved by us, She said with our warm encouragement and caring, she had the confidence to get through any difficulty . On the morning our teacher appeared in our class. though bonds around her left leg and sitting in the rolling-chair, broad smiled on her face indicated that she had been much better. Everyone in class couldn’t help clapping hands to celebrate her coming back. The atmosphere was rather touching.
Through this accident our deep friendship with the teacher encouraged everybody in my class, including math teacher.
补充高考大纲要求掌握的关联词:
1. 表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容
另外,还有:what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition
2. 表示转折关系
但是, 然而, 相反:but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.
3. 表示因果关系
因为,因此,所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result;
4. 表示条件关系
如果,只要: if ;on condition ( that );as long as; 除非: unless否则: or else
5. 表示时间关系
当… 的时候 : when ; while;在…之后: after; 在…之前: before;直到: until;
一…就… : as soon as; 后来, 然后: later; afterwards;不久: soon;近来: lately; recently 自从… :since从那时起: from then on
6. 表示特定的顺序关系
首先, 最主要的: above all;其次: secondly 然后: then; next ;最后: finally; in the end
7. 换一种方法表述
换句话说: in other words; that is to say;
8. 进行举例说明
例如,比如: for instance; for example; like; such as
9. 用于陈述事实
实际上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact;跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth
10. 对一个话题进行总结
总而言之,总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word
11.其它常用到的副词
Therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ; thus ;namely即,就是,换句话说 ; although ; afterwards ; personally;
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