六级作文字数要求

篇一：六级作文评分标准

六级作文评分标准

1、 评分依据：评分是从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。这种评分方法是就内容、篇章结构和语言运用

能力等方面对文章进行综合评判，从而考察学生表达思想的能力。内容方面要考虑文章是否切题，选材是否真实可信、有说服力，是否充分的表达思想；篇章结构方面要考虑文章结构是否合理，一般来说，记叙文按事情发生、发展的过程来布局，论说文按所议论问题的内在联系来布局，同时，文章还要前后连贯，上下衔接，首尾呼应；语言运用能力方面则要考虑词汇、语法、句法及修辞等应用语言的能力，以及遣词造句是否准确而又符合英语表达习惯，是否有因语言错误造成理解上的障碍。

2、 评分标准：

1） 5个等级：67，57，45，39，33，参照样卷评分，酌情加减分。

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3、 作文样例：

1） 有人做好事期望得到回报

2） 有人认为应该向雷锋那样做好事不图回报

3） 我的观点

Sample 1（67分作文）：

Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?

Different people hold different views about whether or not one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Some argue that people should be given a certain reward for their good deeds, because they believe the saying “No pains, no gains.”’s enthu(来自:WWw.zW2.CN 爱作文网)siasm to do good deeds.

While others insist doing a good deed should be based on people’s individual consciousness of responsibility, and hence little significance should be attached to monetary reward. In their mind’s eye, Leifeng is a perfect model, who they have done, which is the best return.

Personally, I prefer the latter opinion. It is imperative for us to be ready to help those in trouble. If all of us can help each other, our society will be more civilized and harmonious. It should be universally acknowledged that we do good deeds for enjoyment, self-fulfillment and spiritual enhancement, not for the rewards.

点评：内容切题，很好的完成规定的任务；篇章结构符合写作提纲要求，框架合理，主题突出；连接词使用恰当，文章连贯，逻辑严密；遣词造句正确得体，句式丰富多样，体现良好的语言功底。但文中有个小错误：in some sense应该为in a/ one sense（从某种意义上说）；另外，稳重两次使用in addition， 最好换一个同义的连接词，表示递进关系连接词很多，如Moreover, Besides, What’s more等。

短文第一段：引出主题，指出不同的人对此有不同的观点，陈述有些人的观点——做好事应该得到回报；引用俗语“不劳无获”；使用连接词in addition， 正确得体使用hold, argue, maintain和believe四个表达观点的动词。

短文第二段：While 承上启下，非常自然的过渡到相反的观点——另一些人坚持说我们应以雷锋为榜样，做好是不图回报；两次使用非限制性定语从句，两次使用被动语态，句式灵活多变；使用多个较高级的词汇时表达更严谨（in a sense）、更贴切（be based on people’s individual consciousness of responsibility）；使用and hence 表明因果关系，自然过渡，语义连贯。

短文第三段：Personally 自然引出作者个人的观点——希望人人互助友爱，让社会更文明、更和谐；使用抽象名词（enjoyment，self-fulfillment and spiritual enhancement）,使表达更贴切、更有深度，同时也运用了修辞中的韵尾手段。

Sample 2（57分作文）

Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?

Different people hold different views about whether one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Some think that people should be given a certain reward for their good deeds, which can encourage people to go on doing good deeds.

any reward. They assume that doing a good deed is everyone’s responsibility and should not be related to any reward. In Personally, I prefer the latter opinion. I think it is necessary for us not to expect any reward when doing good deeds. For one thing, the government should make laws and regulations to encourage people to do good deeds. For another, people should know that we do good deeds is very meaningful to them. People should know that we do good deeds not for the rewards, but for our spirit satisfaction.

点评：本文内容切题，较好的完成规定任务；篇章结构符合写作提纲的要求，框架合理，主题突出；连接词使用恰当，文章连贯，逻辑严密；句式丰富多样，语言功底不错，但是有些句子虽然语法正确，表达却不地道、不得体，文中有少量语言错误，注意划线部分及括号内的正确表达。

短文第一段：引出主题，指出不同的人对此有不同的观点，陈述有些人的观点——做好事应该得到回报；正确使用带宾语从句和状语从句的复合句；正确使用非限制性定语从句。

短文第二段：While承上启下，非常自然的过渡到相反的观点——另一些人坚持说我们应以雷锋为榜样，做好是不图回报；两次使用非限制性定语从句、宾语从句，句式灵活；使用in addition 连接词，过渡自然，语义连贯；但是本段有三处错误。

短文第三段：Personally 自然引出个人观点——赞成人们做好事不图回报，提出鼓励人人行善的建议。

Sample 3（45分作文） Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?

A lot of people think that people should get a reward when doing a good deed, but other people do not agree this opinion. Because(, because)they believe one should not expect a reward for doing a good deed. ，Therefore, we must understand (that) doing good

点评：本文内容基本切题，在一定程度上完成规定的任务；篇章结构虽然按照三段论格式，但是段落内容有点偏离写作提纲的要求，主题不够突出；有些地方思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误较多，其中有一些事严重的错误，请注意文中划线部分级括号内的正确表达。

短文第一段：指出不同的人对“行善是否该图回报”有不同的观点，陈述双方的观点；能够使用带宾语从句和状语从句的复合句，但有一处错误。

短文第二段：展开论述双方的观点，但基本内容与第一段重复，作者若能按照提纲展开，那么本文的条理会更清楚，主题会更突出；作者试图使用关联词，以便使文章连贯，但是连续出错，说明语言基本功不扎实。

短文第三段：In my opinion引出作者个人的观点：赞成人们做好事不图回报，并通过说理加以论证；但是语言错误较多，其中两处严重的语法错误只是读者不清楚该句子的真正的意思。

Sample 4（39分作文）Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?

we can not develop rapidly and well.

点评：本文内容基本切题，没能完整的弯成提纲规定的任务；篇章结构虽然按照三段论格式，但是框架不清晰，段落内容也比较混乱，主体不突出；句式过于简单、单调，不断重复使用某些词汇和句型，而且多处用词不当；文中有许多严重的语法错误，只是表达思想不清楚，逻辑性和连贯性都很差；整篇文章只有109词，词数不达标，按照扣分细则规定，该扣7分。

篇二：英语六级作文模板(字数多)

解决问题型作文模板：

Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that.... Nowadays, the phenomenon has arouse wide concern among the public.

Ample reasons can account for this phenomenon，and the followings might be the most critical ones: Firstly，… secondly,…. The problem mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. On the one hand, … on the other hand,…

Effective measures should be adopted before things get worse. First and foremost，What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent.It is high time that parents，educators，and the authorities make combined efforts to put an end to this situation. The public should enhance their consciousness of the significance of …We must press forward on deeper research，but research alone is inadequate, actually，any one of us has good reason to take actions to…A public education campaign should be launched to inform the public of the importance of

It is essential that the authorities should make and implement relevant laws and regulations to impose a heavy penalty on those who …..We should appeal to the relevant administration

departments to strengthen supervision over.

With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future. It is deeply-rooted in my mind that the world will be a more harmonious place for us to live in.

树立观点型作文模板：

The newly-coined word/phrase“ ”may by no means sound strange to most people in this day and age. Does anyone hold the same attitude towards this issue ？Definitely not，The controversial issue is often brought into public focus. People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue. actually，opinions vary from person to person.

Some maintain that the merits of sth. far outweigh its demerits. People who support ... give some or all of the following reasons. Firstly,…secondly,…last but not least,….

However，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that something is detrimental to sth. They think it is a dangerous signal and call for public awareness of the negative effects it has brought about. For one thing，… for another,…

Taking into consideration both sides of the issue, my opinion is that …..In the first place，… in the second place……, Given all the

factors I have outlined，I strongly commit to the notion that …..But all in all, I would say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. But its bright side should not keep us from examining its dark side. With the advance of society, if we encourage the merits and eliminate the drawbacks, all people will enjoy a better life.

篇三：六级作文

六级写作冲刺：快速搭建作文段落结构

现象描述段：In contemporary society, it has become a prevalent tendency for sb to do sth. Meanwhile, an increasing number of individuals deem it 修饰形容词 to do. A typical example can vividly illustrate the fact ? According to a recent survey, approximately 78.9% of the 人 did 事. Taking a look around, we can find a great many examples: A、B、and so forth. Accordingly, it requires close attention of the whole society.

?原因段：It is evident that the causes of this phenomenon are diverse. To begin with, the change of sth is the root cause. A typical example of this is that 例子. Furthermore, the incorrect sense of sth constitutes another major cause. Lastly, social prejudice/ ignorance/ concern plays a critical role in this matter/issue.

?危害段：主题句If we keep turning a blind eye, this trend is bound to generate(lead to) serious effects. 危害一：This trend is particularly worth concern for the background that ___ focus too much eyesight on ____, totally turning a blind eye to the significance of ___. 危害二it calls for time, energy and money to do某事.In addition, what worries 某人is that 发生什么事.

?建议段：As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for sb to do sth. It is urgent for the government to take measures to control this situation and make some laws or regulations about it. In addition, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates, and acquaintances to be alert when doing Sth. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of Sth. will be promising, hopeful and rosy. ?意义段：The idea of “中心名词” has gained wide popularity among Chinese people, and it is of great significance for 某人to do某事. Without it, it is impossible for them to... Furthermore, they argue that 中心名词can expand one’s view and eich one’s life and enhance one’s development.

利：Those who lend their support to the positive view have some reasons in varied forms. 弊：Even so, others hold a different view that 中心名词 carries some drawbacks.

?第四段 观点中立：To sum up, there is no doubt that the 中心名词has its merits

as well as demerits. As a popular saying goes, “Every sword has two edges”. The same is the case with this situation. We should appreciate the great contribution made by them\it, and meanwhile pay enough attention to the problems caused by them.

图表作文首句：Given is a chart which clearly illustrates the striking contrast/ relation between/among ___and ___.

?图画作文首句： Given is a cartoon which animatedly/ ironically illustrates a rather interesting scene:图画描述：人物的动作与状态：The_____ doing sth. with____ in one's ____ , does sth.（ask sb about sth）

人物的心理活动：想要??：with an expectation of doing sth.

让某人感到失望的是：however, to his disappointment,

?名言警句作文：Sb. utters (had uttered) a thought-provoking remark:

?（第二句）图画、图表、名言联系主题：This cartoon（chart/saying） can be naturally associated with?

四六级作文部分有相通之处，但就六级写作而言还是有诸多与四级写作不同之处，根据笔者的教学和阅卷经历，主要有三点不同：

1. 六级作文话题更抽象，考察一定的思辨能力。如2014年6月作文话题为“it is unwise to put all your eggs in one basket”，该文写作时考生切不可仅限于其表面含义“eggs”或“baskets”，而应联系现实生活中写“problems, diverse ability, overall preparation”等具体内容。

2. 六级作文阅卷要求更高：从评卷标准的要求来看，绝不限于六级字数的15—200和四级的12—180之间的差别。一般而言，从原始赋分15分的情况看，同样的话题的11分四级作文在六级的档次就只能拿到9分左右。

3. 六级的作文得高分比四级难很多，从上述第二点差异外。四级考生中，受试者水平有较大差异，四级写作中经常读到一些令人啼笑的幼稚表达和字数都写不够的文章，因此对于阅卷者而言，作文质量和分数高低有直观的判断。但大部分六级考生有一定写作基础，虽然不能说水平多高，但大部分字数都能写够，这种情况下高分作文更要胜在质量上。

以2013年12月六级考题为例：

2013年12月之“信息爆炸”

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the

impact of information explosion by referring to the saying"a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention". You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information? You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200words.

范文与思路（非模板，表达及其功能仅供参考）

首段：背景 话语评论

(背景)The past decades have seen the speedy development of information technology.（引入话语）However, there is a simple but thought-provoking saying “a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention”, and (话语联系主题)this saying can be naturally associated with the double impacts of IT on our life:（主题评论） if we do not intend to live in a life of “attention poverty”,it is advisable for us to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information.

（背景特征）The contemporary society is best characterized by “information explosion”, and（现象） it has become a common phenomenon for us to be affected/ influenced/ impacted by various information. （举例 相关人感受）A case in point is that an increasing number of students find it rather difficult to focus on reading books, studying in class time or listening to a lecture, just because of cellphone messages, rings and We chats.（危害：弊） It is these irrelevant information that does not enable youngsters to concentrate on studies. （总结）As a matter of fact,intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the negative influences of modern information technology.

（观点）As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. （建议1）Accordingly, it is essential for every one to power off cell phones before class time, meeting or other significant occasions.（建议2） Then, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends,classmates and acquaintances to cultivate this awareness.

2013年6月真题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting

on the remark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people.” You can cite some examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

首段：话题引出 评论

This is a simple but thought-provoking remark: A smile is the shortest distance between two people. Obviously, this saying can be naturally linked to the significance of smiling in human communication: if one intends to shorten his distance with others, it is advisable for him to keep smiling.

二段：现象 意义

(现象)In our daily life, it is a common phenomenon for us to regard smiling as a symbol of kindness, friendship or warmth. Meanwhile, a host of individuals find it rather comfortable to communicate with those with smiles. Our life has been filled with a variety of examples like this: (排比)smiling helps friends to enjoy close friendship; smiling helps family members to enjoy harmonious atmosphere; smiling even helps strangers to break embarrassment. (意义)Actually, it is one’s smile that enables him to build a closer relationship between others. Without smile, it is impossible for others to deem us as friends.

(建议)As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to face life with smiles. Accordingly, we can shorten the distance between friends, classmates and acquaintances. （展望）Sparing no efforts to keep smiling every day, we can witness a promising and hopeful life in future. （199 words）

图画作文

Part I Writing ( 30 minutes )

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the impacts of electronic products on interpersonal relationship. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

(图片来源：网络)

首段：图画描述

This is a thought-provoking and enlightening picture: all members of a family sit at a table, enjoying a family reunion with 按expectation of communicating with each other ; however, all kids and their young parents focus their attention on phones or laptops. The aged grandma and grandpa seem lonely.

二段：

（图画联系主题）Such a cartoon can be naturally associated with the impacts of electronic products on our daily life. (简单评论)If we intend to enjoy/ gain/ get a harmonious relationship in life, it is not advisable for us to ignore people around ourselves.（现象概述）In contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of youngsters to have/ possess/ buy/ various high-tech products for fun. （相关人+感受）Meanwhile, an increasing number of young people find it rather colorful to live a life with these products. (强调句式) However, it is these products that do not enable young people to care more about people around. (万能举例)Taking a look around, we can notice a great many examples like the scene in picture above. (万能总结)As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have not come to realize the negative impacts of electronic products on our life.

(观点)As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to refuse/ reject / resist the bad influences of electronic products on life.（建议）Thus/Accordingly/ Hence, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to cultivate this awareness.