作业帮中考英语小作文便条
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篇一：2015年中考英语书面表达专题《应用文》便条 写作指导
2015年中考英语书面表达专题《应用文》便条
【写法指导】
◇【题型设置与意图】
便条可以说是简化了的书信。其特点是内容简短明了，格式简单。一般由称
呼、正文、签名、留言日期四部分组成。便条的种类包括请假条、留言条、通知
等。
请假条：包括事假条和病假条。注意要写清请假的原因及时间。
留言条：尽量要口语化，注意写清事由。
通知：写清通知事项，交代清楚参加人员、时间、地点、内容、注意事项等。
便条主要考查学生对一般现在时态陈述句的正确表达。
◇【写作角度与注意事项】
便条的写法和书信的写法差不多，一般由称呼、正文、签名和日期四部分组
成。
日期要写在右上角，通常写星期几或具体时间。
称呼写在第二行，要左起顶格写。
正文要另起一行，用词要通俗易懂。若有事请假或向别人借东西，语言要委
婉、客气。
署名位置一般在正文的左下角。
在书写便条时要求语言简练，内容完整。
写 作 演 示
◇【真题再现】
(2011·铜仁)假如你叫张强，在昨天下午的篮球比赛中不小心伤了左臂，医
生建议你在家休息两天，因此你要向班主任赵老师请假。请根据以上信息，写一
则40词左右的请假条。
注意：文中不能出现真实姓名、校名。
Asking for leave
May 10th Dear Miss Zhao，
I am sorry to tell you that I can＇t go to school today．Thank you!
Your student，
Zhang Qiang
【写作思路】
1．中心人称：第一人称
2．主体时态：一般过去时态，一般将来时态
3．要点梳理：请假条的格式和开头已给出，主要写出请假的原因和时问就
可以
【语句构建】
称呼→Dear Miss Zhao，
正文→I＇m sorry to tell that．．．
I hurt my left arm in the basketball match yesterday afternoon．
The doctor told me to have a rest at home for two days．
I want to ask for two days＇leave．
署名→Y0ur student，
Zhang Qiang
【写作模板】
日期：May 12th，2014
称呼：Dear Mr．Zhao，/ Dear friend，/ Dear Robot，
署名：Your student，
Zhang Qiang／Tom
【范文展示】
Asking for leave
May 10th
Dear Miss Zhao，
I am sorry to tell you that I can＇t go to school today．I hurt my left
arm in the basketball match yesterday afternoon．The doctor told me to
have a rest at home for two days，so 1 will／have to ask for two days＇
／a two-day leave．I hope I will get well and return to school soon．
Thank you!
Your student，
Zhang Qiang
【名师点评】
范文语言简洁精练，语气委婉，请假原因表达清楚，请假时间说明明确。整
篇范文思路清晰，行文流畅，是一则标准的请假条。
知 识 清 单
【实战演练】
(一)
请你用英语为校长和学生会写一个书面通知，时间是6月4日，内容是：
1．今天上午9：00在小会议室召开各班班长会议。
2．学生会组织全校师生在下午4：00去看电影，下午的课改在l：00开始。
Notice (二)
假如你的名字叫李雷，现在写一张英文留言条，内容如下：
1．你打算和同班同学李伟在周日下午去看望梅梅；
2．感冒发烧不能去了，在去医院前去了李伟家；
3．碰巧他不在家，给他留了一张条子，并再约了时间；
4．留言条的日期为2014年5月6日。
(三)
假定你是Mrs．Read，你在2015年5月2日上午接到Bill打给Tom的电话，
Tom正好不在，你接了电话，请根据通话内容，给Tom留一张电话留言条，词数
30左右。
Mrs．Read：Hello．8868 7878．
Bill：Oh，hello．Could I speak to Tom，please?
Mrs．Read：I＇m afraid not．He isn’t here at the moment．Can I take
a message?
Bill：Yes，please．This is Bill．Is that Mrs．Read?
Mrs．Read：Oh，hello，Bill．Yes，this is Tom’s mother．
Bill：Thanks a lot for asking me to Tom＇s party on Saturday．I'm sorry
I can＇t come．
Mrs．Read：I＇m sorry to hear that．
Bill：I'm afraid I'm going to be in Guangzhou that day．I hope you
all have a good time．
Mrs．Read：Thank you．I＇ll give him the message．
Bill：Thank you．Goodbye．
Mrs．Read：Goodbye．
Telephone message
(四)
根据要求写一篇短文。词数：30左右。
Tony明天和父母去度假，他给朋友李雷留言，请李雷帮助照看一下他的家。
内容包括：打扫房间，照看宠物，浇花等。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Lei， May
6th，2014
My parents and I are going on vacation tomorrow．I need your help．
Tony
参考答案
(一)
Notice
June,4th，2014
There will be a meeting for all the monitors of our school in the small
meeting-room at 9：00 this morning．
The teacher and the students of our school are going to see a movie at
4：00 this afternoon．The classes this afternoon will begin at 1：00．Be
sure not to be late for school please．
The Principal Office
The Student Union
(二)
May 6th，2014
Dear Li Wei，
I'm sorry I can’t go to see Meimei at half past two this afternoon，for I'm not feeling well．Maybe I have a high fever now．I'm going to see a doctor．Let’s go to see Meimei next Sunday afternoon，shall we? Since you are not in，I have to 1eave this note to you．My mother tells me! I’d better stay at home for a day or two．
See you!
Li Lei
(三)
Telephone message
From：Bill To：Tom
Date：May 2nd，2015 Time：10：12
Message：He can’t come to your party on Saturday because he is going to be in Guangzhou that day．
(四)
May 6th，2014
Dear Li Lei。
My parents and I are going on vacation tomorrow．I need your help．Could you please help me look after my house? Please clean the house and water the flowers．Oh，I have a dog．Will you please feed my dog? And don’t forget to give it some water and take it for a walk every day．Thanks． Tony
篇二：2014~2015学年度 最新 中考英语书面表达专题《应用文》便条 写作指导
2015年中考英语书面表达专题《应用文》便条
【写法指导】
◇【题型设置与意图】
便条可以说是简化了的书信。其特点是内容简短明了，格式简单。一般由称
呼、正文、签名、留言日期四部分组成。便条的种类包括请假条、留言条、通知
等。
请假条：包括事假条和病假条。注意要写清请假的原因及时间。
留言条：尽量要口语化，注意写清事由。
通知：写清通知事项，交代清楚参加人员、时间、地点、内容、注意事项等。
便条主要考查学生对一般现在时态陈述句的正确表达。
◇【写作角度与注意事项】
便条的写法和书信的写法差不多，一般由称呼、正文、签名和日期四部分组
成。
日期要写在右上角，通常写星期几或具体时间。
称呼写在第二行，要左起顶格写。
正文要另起一行，用词要通俗易懂。若有事请假或向别人借东西，语言要委
婉、客气。
署名位置一般在正文的左下角。
在书写便条时要求语言简练，内容完整。
写 作 演 示
◇【真题再现】
(2011〃铜仁)假如你叫张强，在昨天下午的篮球比赛中不小心伤了左臂，医
生建议你在家休息两天，因此你要向班主任赵老师请假。请根据以上信息，写一
则40词左右的请假条。
注意：文中不能出现真实姓名、校名。
Asking for leave
May 10th Dear Miss Zhao，
I am sorry to tell you that I can＇t go to school today．Thank you!
Your student，
Zhang Qiang
【写作思路】
1．中心人称：第一人称
2．主体时态：一般过去时态，一般将来时态
3．要点梳理：请假条的格式和开头已给出，主要写出请假的原因和时问就
可以
【语句构建】
称呼→Dear Miss Zhao，
正文→I＇m sorry to tell that．．．
I hurt my left arm in the basketball match yesterday afternoon．
The doctor told me to have a rest at home for two days．
I want to ask for two days＇leave．
署名→Y0ur student，
Zhang Qiang
【写作模板】
日期：May 12th，2014
称呼：Dear Mr．Zhao，/ Dear friend，/ Dear Robot，
署名：Your student，
Zhang Qiang／Tom
【范文展示】
Asking for leave
May 10th
Dear Miss Zhao，
I am sorry to tell you that I can＇t go to school today．I hurt my left
arm in the basketball match yesterday afternoon．The doctor told me to
have a rest at home for two days，so 1 will／have to ask for two days＇
／a two-day leave．I hope I will get well and return to school soon．
Thank you!
Your student，
Zhang Qiang
【名师点评】
范文语言简洁精练，语气委婉，请假原因表达清楚，请假时间说明明确。整
篇范文思路清晰，行文流畅，是一则标准的请假条。
知 识 清 单
【实战演练】
(一)
请你用英语为校长和学生会写一个书面通知，时间是6月4日，内容是：
1．今天上午9：00在小会议室召开各班班长会议。
2．学生会组织全校师生在下午4：00去看电影，下午的课改在l：00开始。
Notice (二)
假如你的名字叫李雷，现在写一张英文留言条，内容如下：
1．你打算和同班同学李伟在周日下午去看望梅梅；
2．感冒发烧不能去了，在去医院前去了李伟家；
3．碰巧他不在家，给他留了一张条子，并再约了时间；
4．留言条的日期为2014年5月6日。
(三)
假定你是Mrs．Read，你在2015年5月2日上午接到Bill打给Tom的电话，
Tom正好不在，你接了电话，请根据通话内容，给Tom留一张电话留言条，词数
30左右。
Mrs．Read：Hello．8868 7878．
Bill：Oh，hello．Could I speak to Tom，please?
Mrs．Read：I＇m afraid
a message?
Bill：Yes，please．This is Bill．Is that Mrs．Read?
Mrs．Read：Oh，hello，Bill．Yes，this is Tom’s mother．
Bill：Thanks a lot for asking me to Tom＇s party on Saturday．I'm sorry
I can＇t come．
Mrs．Read：I＇m sorry to hear that．
Bill：I'm afraid I'm going to be in Guangzhou that day．I hope you
all have a good time．
Mrs．Read：Thank you．I＇ll give him the message．
Bill：Thank you．Goodbye．
Mrs．Read：Goodbye．
Telephone message
(四)
根据要求写一篇短文。词数：30左右。
Tony明天和父母去度假，他给朋友李雷留言，请李雷帮助照看一下他的家。
内容包括：打扫房间，照看宠物，浇花等。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Lei， May
6th，2014
My parents and I are going on vacation tomorrow．I need your help．
Tony
参考答案
(一)
Notice
June,4th，2014
There will be a meeting for all the monitors of our school in the small
meeting-room at 9：00 this morning．
The teacher and the students of our school are going to see a movie at
4：00 this afternoon．The classes this afternoon will begin at 1：00．Be
sure not to be late for school please．
The Principal Office
The Student Union
(二)
May 6th，2014
Dear Li Wei，
I'm sorry I can’t go to see Meimei at half past two this afternoon，for I'm not feeling well．Maybe I have a high fever now．I'm going to see a doctor．Let’s go to see Meimei next Sunday afternoon，shall we? Since you are not in，I have to 1eave this note to you．My mother tells me! I’d better stay at home for a day or two．
See you!
Li Lei
(三)
Telephone message
From：Bill To：Tom
Date：May 2nd，2015 Time：10：12
Message：He can’t come to your party on Saturday because he is going to be in Guangzhou that day．
(四)
May 6th，2014
Dear Li Lei。
My parents and I are going on vacation tomorrow．I need your help．Could you please help me look after my house? Please clean the house and water the flowers．Oh，I have a dog．Will you please feed my dog? And don’t forget to give it some water and take it for a walk every day．Thanks． Tony
篇三：英语小作文的便条常用语
便条评分细则:
1. 格式(2分)
包括：日期（date）May 10, 2001
称呼（heading）Dear Professor Wang,
结尾（Ending）Yours sincerely
2. 内容（3分）拼写错误3个扣一分
3. 评分总体要求
语言无错误，格式对 内容齐，字数符合要求（40-60），不足40和超过80扣一分 用简洁非正规的书面语解决实际生活中的问题：
需要考虑：我是谁；收件人是谁；我希望收件人看到便条后了解什么、去做什么、怎样去做；
4． 标准：
格式正确，日期称呼落款
语言的题，作者与接受者之间的关系
内容完整不罗嗦语法正确
Invitation: Invite
常用表达：
Let’s go to…
This is to bring to you a kind notice that…
Shall we meet at… to talk about…?
Would you care to join our little party?
Is it possible for you to meet at…. To discuss…?
If it doesn’t trouble you much, shall we meet … at tonight
We are going to have a dance to celebrate … and would love to have you join us.
We’d like to invite you to a spring picnic with us.
If you have no other appointments or plans tomorrow, shall we have a talk over…
It would be a great pleasure to have you among the guests.
I would be delighted if you could spare some time from your busy schedule to attend
I am writing on behalf to all the memebers of our Literature Society to ask..
Professor Jiang, I want youu to give me some suggestion on… if it doesn’t touble you too much, shall we meet at your office at 9 o’clock?
I’m sure you would not disappoint us.
二. 应邀常用语（应有accept一词）
We are delighted to accept
We looke forward with pleasure to joining you.
It is with great pleasure…
We are sincerely happy to join you…
Nothing could give us greater pleasure than accepting your kind invitation…
三.婉拒
包括三部分（收到邀请，表示感谢，阐述不能赴邀请的原因；表示遗憾和良好祝愿）
I have much pleasure in accepting your invitation, but deeply regret having refused owing to a previous engagement.
I wouuld have been so much delighted to be with you but…
Nothing would please me more than to join you for dinner, but unfortunately…
I shall have to say no to our kind invitation…
Very regretfully…
Unfortunately, I am not well
Unfortunately, it will be impossible
Because of… we find we cannot…
How I wish I could reach there.
I do hope you would accept my sincere apologies for my absence.
It’s a pity I cannot join you for the occasion.
It is too bad that the date coincides with my grandfather’s birthday.
四、致谢（thank appreciate）
包括三部分：感谢之情；解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
再次表示诚挚感谢
I don’t know how to express my gratitude for you…
I’m wrting to tell you how much I enjoyed the weekend in your village.
The note is just to express my appreciateion for inviting me over.
I cannot tell you how much I owe you…
I’m writing to express my appreciation for all that you did for me during my visit in Beijin. It was thoughtfull of you….
I thank you from the core of my heart for your sending me the gift.
Thank you so much for the favor.
Many thanks for inviting me to the grand dance.
Thank you again for your generosity (hospitality, generous help)
I’m so lucky that I have such a generous and charming friend.’
I’m grateful for your kind letter of sympathy regarding my bereavevement.
the card you sent has touched me deeply
I hope I have the chance to reciprocate your kindness.
April 3, 2006
Dear Pro. Johnson,
Thanks to you, I’m now a post-graduate of the English Department of Hopkins University. Dr. Smith has read your letter over again, and he is very satisfied with me. I don’t have to tell you that I’m sincerely grateful for all your help in recommending me as a post-graduate. The mailman will bring you a package tomorrow, which is a small token of carload of appreciation.
Cordially
Robert
五、祝贺
内容： 得知喜讯的喜悦心情；对喜讯的评价和对对方的钦佩；祝贺和美好祝愿
I’m so happy to learn / know…
I’m so pleased / delighted to hear that…
My heart is filled with joy to learn about…
That’s great news about…
It’s such a pleasure to find your name on the pass list.
It gave me a great deal of pleasure to learn…
I am writing to express my heartiest congratulaitons on your…
Congratulations on your success.
Please accept my warmest / heartelt congratulations on…
Accept my sincere congratulations from the bottom of my heart on your…
I wish to congratulate you on you finishing high school and entering Qing Hua University.
It’s the kind of news I like to hear, because it proves once again a hard-working man always gets ahead. Let me offer my warmest congratulations. I know you are going to be a great success in… 表示评价和钦佩的用语：
You’re really deserve it because…
It is really a splendid achievement and we are all proud of you.
This has meant years of your hard work, and it’s an achievement you can well be proud of… 表示祝愿：
You will have a brilliant future.
I believe that your school life will be more colorful.
With every good wish.
I wish you still further success.
April 12
Dear SHElly,
I’m so excited to learn that you’ve been admitted by Beijing University as a gradate. Warm congratulations on the realization of your dream. This has meant years of your hard work, and you can really be proud of it. Your success is really encourage to me and I wish we could meet there next year. You will have a brilliant future.
Yours
Li Hua
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