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英语叙事作文范文写作技巧

篇一:英语叙事作文练习和范文

看图作文写作指导

一、高考看图作文技巧:

1.仔细审题:包括文体,人称,时态. // 理解到位:整体把握一组图的连贯性理解及题目要求。

2.归纳要点:保证文章内容的完整. // 基础到位:用简单句写出每幅图的主题句。

3.扩展成句:注意英语表达的习惯,根据提纲扩展句子. // 细节到位:注意每幅图的次要内容(时间,地点,方式,原因等)

4.连句成篇:利用一些表示转折,因果,选择等关系的关联词和过渡句,把句子连接起来. // 表达到位:按情节发展先后,承上启下整理成文。

5.全面检查:格式文体要点语法字数等. // 检查到位:对照各幅图,检查全文定稿。

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记叙文:要抓住记叙文的六要素:when, where, who, what, why, how. 要注意人物与空间的关系,画面与画面的关系,要点与发挥的关系。

三、常用句型:

1. One day / the other day / a couple of days ago / while he was…,he..

2. It was snowing /raining heavily on Monday /Sunday morning …when …

3. Seeing this, I ran over to him as soon as possible.

4. Without hesitation, I decided to give him a hand.

5. It turned out that he was a thief.

6. Tired as we were, we were very delighted because we made contributions to environmental protection.

7. The following day, we visited a lot of attractions in London.

8. I’ll forget the day when we visited on the farm.

四.范例

A. 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。

注意: 词数不少于60. 提示词: 游乐园amusement park 垃圾箱bin

Sample:

Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

We were tired but happy.

B. 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华为响应绿化祖国的号召, 你班四月十二日去郊区植树。请根据一下四幅图的先后顺序, 介绍植树活动的全过程, 给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。

注意: 字数不少于60。 提示词: 郊区

suburbs

Sample: Green Action in Our Class

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. (背景)

In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. (过程)

Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it's our duty to protect and beautify our environment.(感受)

C.下面4幅图片描述的是是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片把提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。

注意:字数不少于60。 参考词汇:货摊 stand(n);抢夺 snatch(v);逮捕 arrest(v)

参考范文:

One Sunday morning, there were some people in Zhongshan Park. At a stand, a woman was buying an ice-cream when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. Hearing the shouting“stop him”, a few people began to run after him. There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby and as the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatcher’s legs, so the young man fell down on the ground hard. Soon two policemen came in a police car and arrested him. At last, the woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness

篇二:初中英语写作范文集锦

初中英语写作范文集锦 [一]

围绕:学校让学生打扫厕所和学校不让学生打扫厕所两种情况。写一不少于80个词的主题为“孩子的独立教育”英语作文。

给出词:only child, moral education

nowadays in china, many students are the only child in their family. they are the apple of their parents’ eyes or even their granparents’, so they are free of any house work or menial labor. and moral education is no more than some bookish thing. studentsare largely dependent on their parents and teachers.

to educate them to be independent, the most effective way is to let them experience on their own. therefore,they are better to be given the opportunity to get some train at school-to clean the washing room,which can be regarded as part of the moral education.

范文:关于国庆节的英语作文 例1

National Day is coming,and we can have a seven-day.My family are going to Hainan.It’s a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week. We are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.We’re visiting Tianya Haijiao,Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think we’ll have a good time there.

国庆节来了,我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩,还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”,菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。 例2

National Day Holidays

I went to my cousin’s house on the first day of the holidays and got a piece of good news that his wife was pregnant;She said she’s worrying about getting fat,but on her face there was a unconcealable pleasure of conceiving a baby.My cousin told me that he’ll educate his child in a severe way,with a future father’s matureness.I’m happy for them.:)

Yesterday,our research school’s soccer team had a match with the graduate students from the department of international business.It was almost a close game in the first half,but we seemed lacking of vigor in the second half,so,we lost the gameHalf of the National Day holidays have passed by??life still goes with good and bad times.

范文:中学生该不该上网

最近你们学校要举行一次“中学生该不该上网”的讨论。你是赞成者之一,认为我们不应该因噎废食。请根据下表内容写一篇发言篇。 要求:字数100词左右注意:不要逐句翻译。 益处

1.看国内外新闻,获取信息。 2.发e-mail,打电话。

3.上网络学校,阅读各种书籍,自学外语。

4.欣赏音乐,观看体育比赛,玩棋牌等游戏,网上购物,丰富我们的生活。 5.提高我们操作电脑的能力 注意事项

1.不要沉湎于(be given to)上网以免影响生活和学习。 2.不要上不健康的网站。 参考范文:

In my opinion,the Internet is helpful rather than harmful as someone else thinks. As is known to all,the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. On the Internet,we can read news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can. We can send e - mails or make phone calls to our family as well as to our friends. We can also attend the net school,read many books and even teach ourselves English. We can also enjoy music,watch matches and play computer games on the Internet. We can even do shopping on line. Besides,we can improve our ability to operate the computer.

But we should not be given to the Internet,or we'll get our life and study destroyed. Besides,we should keep off the harmful websites. Anyhow,this doesn't prevent the Internet becoming our friend. We can't throw away the apple because of the core,can we?

范文:我的同学 My Classmate

请以“My Classmate”为标题写一篇记叙文要求:1、主题明确,语言流畅,思路清晰。 2、字数在100字以内。 思路点拨:

写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点

突出,主次分明,详略得当。

这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。 参考范文 My Classmate

Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others. One day on his way to school,he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived,and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom,the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.

初中英语写作范文集锦 [二]

范文:介绍学生学习情况

It is my honor to show you around,and now I will introduce something about our study. At present we learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses. We can study what we are interested in. In this way,we can develop ourselves in different aspects. And we can also study on the Internet.

范文:A piano player

What do I want to do when I’m older? Someone wants to be a doctor. Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport. Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing. Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.

I like playing the piano and I good at it. So I want to become a piano player. Play the piano is very interesting. And you can learn something of music. Piano can make you like music. A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.

I play the piano when I’m ten years old. Now I’m in grand five. I hope when I’m sixteen years old , I can become grand eight. I’ll be harder and harder to practise. Become a piano play is a hard job. But I believe I can do it.

范文:my dream place

The winter vacation passed quickly. In those days, I have done some things. Playing, doing homework and so on. Sometimes I helped my mother doing some housework. She thanked to me.

Though, I was proud of myself. I also went over my English learning. I think I have known more than before. In the new term, I will study hard.

范文:The thing that I'll never forget

How time flies!I’m fifteen years now.(来自:www.Zw2.cn 爱 作文 网)During the long time,there was one thing that I will never forget.

The Spring Festival is our traditional festival.During the Spring Festival,people usually visit their friends and relatives.When I was 9 years old,my family took the bus to my grandparents’ to say “Happy New Year” to them.

In the bus,I had a good seat.At 7:30,the bus came to a village.A woman got on with a baby in her arms.At that time,there was no seat.But she must look after her baby carefully.She had to stand next to me.I wanted to stand up and let her sit down,but I was afraid of hearing the other people say“That girl want to be praised.”I looked around.Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping.Suddenly,a little boy behind me,stood up and made room for the woman.She said “Thank you very much” with a big smile.The boy smiled,too.When I told my cousin about it after that,he said “The child is the father of a man.” I’m very ashamed.Why could’t I do the same thing as the little boy did? From that I learn that we should do our best to help people who need help.If everyone makes a contribution to helping others,the world will become much more beautiful!

范文:怎样学习英语 How to study English? 作文一:

Study English,You do need to use English with speakers who are not teachers of English. This isn't easy,since everyone feels constrained speaking English with friends with whom it would be natural to use a shared mother tongue. Joining an English Club is a good idea and joining a club with an international membership (where English is in use at least some of the time) is,for many people,even better. If nothing like this is accessible,you might consider what would be involved in getting something going.

你需要常常和英语教师以外的人士用英语交谈。这当然很不容易,因为与母语相同的人自由交谈时,彼此若用英语交谈总会觉得很不自在。亦可参加英语俱乐部或国际会员的俱乐部(至少有时使用英语沟通),这样对很多人而言更有益。如果没有合适的社团可加入,也不妨考虑任何足以提高英语能力的机会。 作文二:

There are four key points to study English:listening,speaking,reading and writing. Firstly,we should be brave to talk with others in English. By doing this,we can improve ore talking and listening skill.

Secondly,we should try to listen to all kinds of English programmes as much as possible. In this way,we can gradually improve our pronunciation.

Thirdly,we should often read English books. When we come across a new word. We should guess its meaning through the contest first. then look it up in the dictionary to have a check. I thin,it is a good way of reading.

Fourthly,we should practice our writing skills. Whenever we have any idea,we should get the pen and write it down at once. It is very important to avoid writing in Chinese way and using the Chinese grammar.

As long as we listen,speak,read and write more,we are sure to make remarkable progress! 初中英语写作范文集锦 [三]It is my honor to show you around,and now I will introduce something about our study. At present we learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses. We can study what we are interested in. In this way,we can develop ourselves in different aspects. And we can also study on the Internet.

范文:风 Wind

Each season has wind. The warm wind in spring,the hot wind in summer,the gold wind in autumn and cold wind in winter are all called wind,but their tempers are quite different. When spring comes,warm wind wakes up everything;many flowers come out .It can bring us joy.

In hot summer,the sweats roll down from our checks. Everything needs wind,but wind often hide and seek with us.

Autumn comes. Cool wind blows yellow leaves down. The corn is ripe and all the fields become yellow. The farmers are busy getting in crops. It can bring us the happiness of harvest.

In cold winter,cold wind blows so hard that everyone can hardly open his eyes Wind,we welcome you,need you,but sometimes hate you. Will you please obey us and do good things for us.

范文:找妈妈 Looking for Mum

One day Li Ming caught a little bird. He tied it with a piece of thread and played with it happily. At that time,he saw a little girl crying by the roadside. A policeman saw her,came over and asked her why she was crying and where her house is. When he learned that girl had got lost and she was then looking for her mother,he decided to lead the girl to be back home.

Seeing this Li Ming thought the little bird also had its mother and he should set the little bird free so that it could be with its mother again. Then Li Ming untied the thread and returned the little bird to the blue sky.

范文:介绍学生学习情况范文:能源 Energy

As we all know we need energy in our daily life. There are many kinds of energy. We can get our energy from food. The energy in food comes from sunlight which helps plants grow. Plants store up energy from the sun,much of our food comes from plants. Some of our food comes from animals,but animals depend on plants for food too.

范文:英语作文自我介绍 To introduce myself Hello,everyone!

My name is Winnie.I'm a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.

I'm an active,lovely and clever girl.In the school,my favourite subject is maths.Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well.But I like it.I belive that if you try your best,everything can be done well.

I also like sports very much.Such as,running,volleyball and so on. I'm kind-hearted. If you need help,please come to me . I hope we can be good friends! OK.This is me .A sunny girl.

初中英语写作范文集锦 [四]

范文:给父亲的信

Directions:you have decided to start jogging next month,but you haven't got any suitable shoes to wear. Now you are writing a letter to your father asking him to send you some extra money so that you can but the shoes. in you letter,you will include: * your hard work;

* How you read about jogging in your English textbook; * The advantages ofjogging; * THe need for a pair fo quality shoes; * The price of the shoes you plan to buy; * THe time

篇三:英语四级记叙文写作[1]

英语四级记叙文写作

第一部分 记叙文题型作文写作步骤:

要求考生写一篇记叙文,描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果,最后对事件进行简单分析,如:2003年6月四级作文、2003年9月四级作文

对这类题型,通常分为三个步骤来写:

第一段、总结描述:交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点:主题句

第二段、具体描述:具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果:起因+经过+结果

第三段、对事件的分析:分析句1+分析句2+分析3

第二部分、记叙文题型作文写作范文练习

directions:for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day my Classmate Fell Ill.

1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况;

2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的;

3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是....

第三部分、范文1

The Day My Classmate Fell Ill

I have a classmate named Angel, who is a lovely and bright girl. She is popular with all the classmates. One day, news came that Angel had got blood cancer. It really shocked everybody. When I saw her in the hospital, I could not help crying. She was so thin, so weak, and it seemed that only skin and bones were left. Her face was so pale. Even so, she gave us a big smile to comfort us.

We decided to help her save her life. Angel' s family was not very rich and could not afford the operation. All the classmates and teachers began to raise money in school. Some called the media for help. In the end, we succeeded in raising the money for the first operation. We will keep trying until Angel is cured.

Many people offered as much help as they could even though they did not know Angel. I am really touched by this. There is love everywhere as long as we seek for it.

分析点评:

叙述描写型文章是近几年来四级考试中的改革之一,它与书信作文、图表作文一起改变了多年来议论文“一统天下”的局面,促使大学英语写作朝着文体多样性、实用性方向发展。记人、记事是最基本的写作方式,它不要求有惊天动地的情节或出神入化的手笔,只求记叙一件与自己有关系又留下深刻印象的往事,写作时必须抓住事件发生的时间、地点、人物、原因、结果等关键要素,根据需要或按照自己的思维方式,采用不同的写作手法,如采用顺叙、倒叙或插叙等。描述How something happened 这类文章需要一定的英文水平,因为较细致的描述很难,而轻描淡写又不足以渲染气氛,更难凑字数。 该篇文章的特点是:

内容上:紧扣主题。第一、二段详细叙述生的什么病、病情严重性以及师生帮助她的方式。

结构上:思路清晰,主次分明,非常有条理(coherent)。记叙文中的五要素(Who, When, What, Why, How)都得到了详实的叙述。

语言上:逻辑性与连贯性强,句式结构丰富多样,闪光词语很多。

范文2

A Welcome Back Celebration

1.杨玲生病,情绪低落.

2.班上同学准备cheer her up, 举办一场欢迎party.

Yang Ling is my classmate and friend. Recently she had a terrible condition and has been hospitalized for over a month. She was depressed, sad and downhearted. She told us that so many things were working against her, and she didn’t know how to change and redirect herself.

The day before she was released from hospital, we, some of her friends decided to give her a surprise and cheer her up. The next day, she came back with shoulders bent and head fallen. She was so deep in her bad mood that she didn’t realize that the light in her dorm was not on. She turned the key in the lock and opened the door when the room was suddenly lit up. Her eyes sparkled with delight and surprise. She saw all her classmates crowded in this tiny room. Everyone was holding something in his hand, flowers, fruits, cards, cheering, “Welcome back!” She was so moved that she burst into tears. And smile returned to her pretty face. She said “Thank you all.” heartedly.

Ever since that day, happiness and delight have stayed with her. Life is so wonderful.

范文3

A Witness of a Theft Incident

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Witness of a Theft Incident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)描述你在公共场所目睹的一次扒窃事件

2)谴责这种不文明的现象并提出解决建议。

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求描述一次事件的经过,提纲第2点要求对事件进行评论,由此可判断本文应为记叙文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:交待事件背景;描述扒窃事件的经过和最后结果;谴责这种不文明的现象,提出解决建议。

【参考范文】

A Witness of a Theft Incident

Yesterday, I witnessed a theft incident on my way home. The thief was so rampant that it left me a deep impression。

It happened during the rush hour, when many people were buying tickets at the subway station. After a woman bought her ticket, she put her purse back into her bag and ready to leave, when a middle-aged man brushed past her muttering “Excuse me”. She didn’t feel anything unusual and went into the station. Indeed, her purse had been stolen by that man. To our surprise, the thief seemed not to be nervous at all and even began to look others up and down. Maybe he was searching for the next target. At that time some passers-by, including me, witnessed the process. But unfortunately, no one dared to warn that woman。

This incident makes me feel ashamed and leaves me in deep thought. The pickpockets have posed a great

threat to residents’ property. Undoubtedly, it is urgent to take actions to prevent such social evils. However, it cannot only depend on the police only. Instead, it needs our common efforts. We shouldn’t keep silent any more. We should be aware that our forces are far beyond those thieves。

范文4

An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident (2003年6月)

假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸,就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点:

1)车祸发生的时间及地点

2)你所见到的车祸情况

3)你对车祸原因的分析

模板

第一段:

My name is _____. I am _____. (自我介绍)

At noon, around _______o’clock, ________, I was _____, when I was shocked by _____. (事故的发生)

I saw _____.(第一眼所见场景)

第二段:

Soon _____. (事情的发展一)

I got there and found _____. (事情的发展二)

At the same time I saw_____. (同时发生的事)

It was obvious that _______.(作者的推断)

After a moment, _____. (事情的发展三)

_____while _____. (结局)

第三段:

The above is all I saw about the accident. (概述)

It is my opinion that _____s, especially _____. (事故原因一)

Besides, _____. (事故原因二)

Anyway, I believe accidents may be avoided or reduced if _____.(总结)

写作练习:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Food Poisoning Accident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

你的几个同学因食用了从某超市买回的食品而中毒,幸亏及时治疗而脱险。请描述他(们)中毒与脱险的过程,并呼吁要加强食品安全。

范文5

A Food Poisoning Accident

Last month, I [1]witnessed a food poisoning accident [2]happening to my classmates. At that time the situation was really very dangerous and urgent. Though finally they got out of danger, this accident [3]is still vivid in my mind.

It was one of my classmates Julie’s birthday that day. In order to celebrate it, her roommates bought a big birthday cake for her from a supermarket nearby. They shared the cake happily. [4]However, after a while, all of them felt abdominal pain, nausea and dizziness. Two of them even cannot stand up because of great pain. We [5]rushed to send them to the hospital. [6]It turned out that the cake they ate had expired its guarantee period. Fortunately, [7]due to timely treatment, they all recovered very soon.

[4]However, this accident [8]leaves me pondering. I think it is very urgent to take effective measures to improve food safety. [4]Firstly, the government should [9]strengthen supervision and administration on food safety. [4]More importantly, to those immoral businessmen, more strict punishment should be given.

[4]Besides, we consumers should be more careful in buying food. [10]Only in this way can we make sure that no such accident happens again.

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