看看这段话有没有语句错误The holidays started,but my little bit be not happy either,because I have too many homeworks.I looking at homework,start having a headache.这是我写的,有明显的语法错误吗many homeworks 错了我知道

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看看这段话有没有语句错误The holidays started,but my little bit be not happy either,because I have too many homeworks.I looking at homework,start having a headache.这是我写的,有明显的语法错误吗many homeworks 错了我知道
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看看这段话有没有语句错误The holidays started,but my little bit be not happy either,because I have too many homeworks.I looking at homework,start having a headache.这是我写的,有明显的语法错误吗many homeworks 错了我知道
看看这段话有没有语句错误
The holidays started,but my little bit be not happy either,because I have too many homeworks.I looking at homework,start having a headache.
这是我写的,有明显的语法错误吗
many homeworks 错了我知道
错了怎么改

看看这段话有没有语句错误The holidays started,but my little bit be not happy either,because I have too many homeworks.I looking at homework,start having a headache.这是我写的,有明显的语法错误吗many homeworks 错了我知道
错误确实比较多,比如第一句话可以用现在完成时比较好,改为:The winter holidays has started(come),第二句话的语序和句意都不是很对,你是要表达你不是很开心是吗?那就可以用一句很简单的句子:but I am not very happy,第三句话可以改成:because I have too much homework.第四句话中不能说looking at可以这样:I looked at the homework and had a headache
不过这样子的话就有点像中国式英语,我觉得上面几楼的都不错,我这个只是针对你的语法点作了一下修改
come-came-come

恩,有多处语法错误,修改了一下:
I am a little bit unhappy although I am taking my holidays,because I have lots of homework to do. I always have a headache when I am doing my homework.

The holidays started, but my little bit be not happy either, because I have too many homeworks.I looking at homework, start having a headache.
正确的:the holiday started, but I totally not happy wit...

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The holidays started, but my little bit be not happy either, because I have too many homeworks.I looking at homework, start having a headache.
正确的:the holiday started, but I totally not happy with it because the teachers assigned too many homeworks. I have a headache even when I look at all the homeworks I have.
"many homeworks"没有错。

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错误比较多