英语句子纠错（四个句子80分!）1：March.5th,not only the day in honor of Lei Feng but also appeals everyone to offer your hands to those in need.（3月5日,不仅是纪念雷锋,更呼吁每个人向需要帮助的人伸出援手）2:Jim

英语句子纠错（四个句子80分!）1：March.5th,not only the day in honor of Lei Feng but also appeals everyone to offer your hands to those in need.（3月5日,不仅是纪念雷锋,更呼吁每个人向需要帮助的人伸出援手）2:Jim
英语句子纠错（四个句子80分!）
1：March.5th,not only the day in honor of Lei Feng but also appeals everyone to offer your hands to those in need.（3月5日,不仅是纪念雷锋,更呼吁每个人向需要帮助的人伸出援手）
2:Jim was asked for more than 1000 yuan for compensation.(Jim被索要1000元作为赔偿）
3：Some people believe that society without helping others will made people live in the darkness.(有些人认为如果社会没有乐于助人,人们将会生活在黑暗中）
4：Some people argue that those who help others will get themselves into trouble easily.(有些人认为乐于帮助他人的人很容易给自自己惹麻烦）
Jim,youngster in Beijng who helped a fall old woman on the ground in the bus station.(Jim,一位北京的年轻人曾在汽车站帮助了一位摔倒在地的老人）

英语句子纠错（四个句子80分!）1：March.5th,not only the day in honor of Lei Feng but also appeals everyone to offer your hands to those in need.（3月5日,不仅是纪念雷锋,更呼吁每个人向需要帮助的人伸出援手）2:Jim
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1.March.5th is not only the day in honor of Lei Feng but also the day that appeals everyone to offer their hands to those in need.
2.Jim was charged more than 1000 yuan for compensation.
3.Some people believe that a society without lending a helping hand will make people live in the darkness.
4.Some people argue that those who are ready to render help to others tend to get themselves into trouble easily.

1. March 5th, is not only a day to memorite Lei Feng, but a day to apeal to everyone of us to help those in need.
2. Jim was asked for more than 1000 yuan as compesation.
3. It is believed th...

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1. March 5th, is not only a day to memorite Lei Feng, but a day to apeal to everyone of us to help those in need.
2. Jim was asked for more than 1000 yuan as compesation.
3. It is believed that a society without helping each others will be a dark place to live in.
4. Some people believe that those who help others are likely to get themselves into trouble.

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4：Some people argue that those who help others will easily get themselves into trouble
3.Some people believe that society without helping others will make people live in the darkness
2: Jim w...

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4：Some people argue that those who help others will easily get themselves into trouble
3.Some people believe that society without helping others will make people live in the darkness
2: Jim was asked for more than 1000 yuan as compensation
1：March.5th is not only a day in honor of Lei Feng but also a day to appeal everyone to offer their hands to those in need

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is not the day ……the day appeals……lend your hand to the needy.
不要more than
a society without help will make
who are willing to help

March 5,, is not only the memorial lei feng, more is appealing to everyone to need help the needy people
Jim was asking for 1000 yuan RMB as compensation
Some people think that if society does not helpful, people will live in the darkness
Jim, a Beijing at the bus stop young man was helped a fell down old man