求大神短文改错!When i was a little child ,i loved doing things for others .Now i still remembered one afternoon ten years's ago when i made a card by hands .I just wanted to find someone in the nearby and hand them to him.Therefore,when i was

求大神短文改错!When i was a little child ,i loved doing things for others .Now i still remembered one afternoon ten years's ago when i made a card by hands .I just wanted to find someone in the nearby and hand them to him.Therefore,when i was
求大神短文改错!
When i was a little child ,i loved doing things for others .Now i still remembered one afternoon ten years's ago when i made a card by hands .I just wanted to find someone in the nearby and hand them to him.Therefore,when i was there,i didn't know who give the card to .After all ,i was too nervously.I was about to leave the shop while an old lady ran into me .It was an accident and she apologized a million at times We both smiled and walked away.Suddenly i realized she was the one and ran over to her and handed a card,wish her a happy life.

求大神短文改错!When i was a little child ,i loved doing things for others .Now i still remembered one afternoon ten years's ago when i made a card by hands .I just wanted to find someone in the nearby and hand them to him.Therefore,when i was
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When i was a little child ,i loved doing things for others .Now i still remembered( remembered - remember ) one afternoon ten years's( years's - years ) ago when i made a card by hands( hands- hand) .I just wanted to find someone in the nearby and hand them ( them - it )to him.Therefore(Therefore - However),when i was there,i didn't know who(加上to) give the card to .After all ,i was too nervously( nervously - nervous).I was about to leave the shop while (while - when )an old lady ran into me .It was an accident and she apologized a million at ( at去掉 )times !We both smiled and walked away.Suddenly i realized she was the one and ran over to her and handed a card,wish( wish - wishing) her a happy life

When i was a little child, i loved making things and giving them to strangers.
Now i still remember that i made a card by hand in one afternoon ten years ago. Then I wanted to find someone nearb...

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When i was a little child, i loved making things and giving them to strangers.
Now i still remember that i made a card by hand in one afternoon ten years ago. Then I wanted to find someone nearby and gave it to him.
However, when i was there, i didn't know who i should give the card to. Because i was too nervous.
I was about to leave while an old lady ran into me. It was an accident and she apologized several times!
We both smiled and walked away. Suddenly i realized that she was the one who i should give the card to. then i ran ofter to her and gave the card to her, wish her a happy life.
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