请看一下我的英文作文有没有病句?快!Ted, Could you please feed my cat? My parents and I are going to beaches this weekends.I need some help.And could you do these things every day?Give her fish and feed her.Give her some water.Play wit

请看一下我的英文作文有没有病句?快!Ted, Could you please feed my cat? My parents and I are going to beaches this weekends.I need some help.And could you do these things every day?Give her fish and feed her.Give her some water.Play wit
请看一下我的英文作文有没有病句?快!
Ted,
Could you please feed my cat? My parents and I are going to beaches this weekends.I need some help.And could you do these things every day?Give her fish and feed her.Give her some water.Play with her.Wash her bowl.Don't forget to clean her bed.Must take a shower for her.Take her to go and take a walk together with your family.Have good time together with her.Thanks a lot.
Yours,
lin lin

请看一下我的英文作文有没有病句?快!Ted, Could you please feed my cat? My parents and I are going to beaches this weekends.I need some help.And could you do these things every day?Give her fish and feed her.Give her some water.Play wit
第三行weekends改成weekend就行了,其他地方没有语法错误.
ps:谁写的这个可怕的便条,一团糟.语法上没有错误,读起来非常别扭,可怕至极.

Ted,
Could you please feed my cat? My parents and I are going to beaches this weekends.I need some help.And could you do these things every day?Give her fish and feed her.Give her some water.Pla...

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Ted,
Could you please feed my cat? My parents and I are going to beaches this weekends.I need some help.And could you do these things every day?Give her fish and feed her.Give her some water.Play with her.Wash her bowl.Don't forget to clean her bed.Must take a shower for her.Take her to go and take a walk together with your family.Have good time together with her.Thanks a lot.
Yours,
lin lin

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有很多！！！加油学呀！！！

Ted,
Could you please feed my cat? Im going to the beaches on this weekend with my parents.I need to get some help.And could you do those things every day?Give her fish and feed her.Give her so...

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Ted,
Could you please feed my cat? Im going to the beaches on this weekend with my parents.I need to get some help.And could you do those things every day?Give her fish and feed her.Give her some water.Play with her.Wash her bowl.And one more thing Don't forget to clean her bed.Must take a shower for her every day.Take her to go with together with your family.Have a good time together with her.Thanks a lot.
Yours,
lin lin

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Ted,
Could you please feed my cat? My parents and I are going to the beaches this weekend.I need some help.And please do these staff every day：give her fish and feed her.Give her some water.Play...

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Ted,
Could you please feed my cat? My parents and I are going to the beaches this weekend.I need some help.And please do these staff every day：give her fish and feed her.Give her some water.Play with her.Wash her bowl.Don't forget to clean her bed.You must take a shower for her.Take her to go and take a walk together with your family.Have a good time together with her.Thanks a lot！！
Yours,
lin lin

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