帮我看看有没有语法问题,有的话帮我改一下?Every morning I go to practice table tennis, I very seriously, to practicing until afternoon, then home to review your lessons, this is my holidays, I like it very much.
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帮我看看有没有语法问题,有的话帮我改一下?Every morning I go to practice table tennis, I very seriously, to practicing until afternoon, then home to review your lessons, this is my holidays, I like it very much.
帮我看看有没有语法问题,有的话帮我改一下?
Every morning I go to practice table tennis, I very seriously, to practicing until afternoon, then home to review your lessons, this is my holidays, I like it very much.
帮我看看有没有语法问题,有的话帮我改一下?Every morning I go to practice table tennis, I very seriously, to practicing until afternoon, then home to review your lessons, this is my holidays, I like it very much.
您想表达的是:
每天早上我坚持练习网球,直到中午才回家,然后复习我的功课.这就是我的暑假,我非常喜欢.
是不是?
每天早上我坚持练习网球
Every morning I practice playing table tennis,
我对此一丝不苟.
I take it very serious.
直到中午我才回家.
I won't come back home until noon
然后我开始复习我的功课.
Then I start reviewing my lessons.
这就是我的暑假,我很喜欢这个暑假.
It is my holiday and i like it very much.
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Every morning,I go to playing table tennis. I was hard-working. I didn't go home until afternoon. After going home, I would review my lesson.This is my holiday, I enjoy it very much.
Everyday I practice table tennis until afternoon, then go home to review lessons.That is my holiday that I like it very much.
I very seriously, to practicing until afternoon, then home to review your lessons,这句有问题
seriously是副词 需要修饰动词 并且意思是严肃的 与练习的认真搭配不当
home不可做动词
我帮你修改为:I practice attentively(专心地) until afternoo...
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I very seriously, to practicing until afternoon, then home to review your lessons,这句有问题
seriously是副词 需要修饰动词 并且意思是严肃的 与练习的认真搭配不当
home不可做动词
我帮你修改为:I practice attentively(专心地) until afternoon,then I go home to review my lessons.
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Every morning I go to practice table tennis, I very seriously, to practicing until afternoon, then home to review your lessons, this is my holidays, I like it very much.
根据你的原文,我理解你的意思是:
每天早上我...
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Every morning I go to practice table tennis, I very seriously, to practicing until afternoon, then home to review your lessons, this is my holidays, I like it very much.
根据你的原文,我理解你的意思是:
每天早上我去练习网球,非常认真,直到午后才回家,然后复习我的功课。这就是我的暑假,我非常喜欢。
错处如下:
1/ 你的这篇日记是暑假的日常活动,已经过去,应当考虑用过去时态;
2/ Every morning, I went to practise table tennis. 改为过去时态,原来的practice是名词,应当用动词practise;
3/ I very seriously. seriously 是副词,应当用形容词。 I am very serious. 。但是这一句取消,用seriously直接修饰前面的动名词practising;
4/ to practicing until afternoon:to 后面不能用分词。应当用 to practise;
5/ then home to review your lessons:应当then go home。your 改为 my;
6/ 最后是你的结束语,没有什么问题。
全文改动: Every morning, I went to practise table tennis very seriously, I played till afternoon. Then I went home to review my lessons. This is my holidays and I like it very much.
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Every morning I go to practice table tennis, I am very seriously it , i love to practicing until afternoon, then i go home to review my lessons, this is my holidays, I like it very much.
very seriously, to practicing until afternoon, then home to review your lessons,这句有问题
seriously是副词 需要修饰动词 并且意思是严肃的 与练习的认真搭配不当
home不可做动词