为什么这句话有语病?Six years later,when I won the first prize in National English Contest for College Students,and had acted as the president of a speech club for a year,I felt that my efforts had paid off to some extent.WORD在year下划了

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为什么这句话有语病?Six years later,when I won the first prize in National English Contest for College Students,and had acted as the president of a speech club for a year,I felt that my efforts had paid off to some extent.WORD在year下划了
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为什么这句话有语病?Six years later,when I won the first prize in National English Contest for College Students,and had acted as the president of a speech club for a year,I felt that my efforts had paid off to some extent.WORD在year下划了
为什么这句话有语病?
Six years later,when I won the first prize in National English Contest for College Students,and had acted as the president of a speech club for a year,I felt that my efforts had paid off to some extent.WORD在year下划了绿色曲线,错哪了?该怎么说?

为什么这句话有语病?Six years later,when I won the first prize in National English Contest for College Students,and had acted as the president of a speech club for a year,I felt that my efforts had paid off to some extent.WORD在year下划了
改为:had been acting as .for a year.就对了.
因为这个是个持续的动作的.

是不是标点问题。。。

有绿色线的时候不一定是语法错误,有时是因为和Word默认的用法不一样
不用在意