下面的6句英文,帮我检查下有语法错误没,If I leave home,I will miss my violin most which was my mom given to me as my 7 years old birthday gift.That violin is not just represents a close relationship between mom and me,it also has a sig

下面的6句英文,帮我检查下有语法错误没,If I leave home,I will miss my violin most which was my mom given to me as my 7 years old birthday gift.That violin is not just represents a close relationship between mom and me,it also has a sig
下面的6句英文,帮我检查下有语法错误没,
If I leave home,I will miss my violin most which was my mom given to me as my 7 years old birthday gift.That violin is not just represents a close relationship between mom and me,it also has a significant influence on my mind.My mom gave me a lot of suggestions how to play violin professionally,and told me how to appreciate art sincerely as well.Her conception helped me overcome amounts of difficulties and then I put into my heart,finally I could catch the essence of beauty.Music has changed all my life thoroughly and I will dedicate all my spirit to the fascinating dream of music

下面的6句英文,帮我检查下有语法错误没,If I leave home,I will miss my violin most which was my mom given to me as my 7 years old birthday gift.That violin is not just represents a close relationship between mom and me,it also has a sig
If I leave home,I'll miss my violin the most because my mom gave it to me as a birthday gift when I was 7 years old.That violin isn't just a present for the close relationship I have with my mom,rather it has a significant influence on my mind.My mom not only gave me a lot of suggestions on how to play violin professionally,but also told me how to appreciate art sincerely.Her conception has helped me overcoming many difficulties and I finally could catch the essence of beauty after putting into my heart.Music has changed my life entirely and I will dedicate all my spirit to the fascinating dream of music.

If I leave home... ... birthday gift. That violin DOES not just represent a close relationship between MY mom and I, it also... ...on my mind. My mom gave me a lot of suggestions ABOUT how to play... ...

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If I leave home... ... birthday gift. That violin DOES not just represent a close relationship between MY mom and I, it also... ...on my mind. My mom gave me a lot of suggestions ABOUT how to play... ... sincerely as well. Her... ... amounts of difficulties and I put IT TO my heart, until I could... ... Music has changed my WHOLE life... ...
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If I leave home, I will miss most my violin which was my mom given to me as my 7 years old birthday gift. That violin do not just represents a close relationship between mom and me, it also has a sign...

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If I leave home, I will miss most my violin which was my mom given to me as my 7 years old birthday gift. That violin do not just represents a close relationship between mom and me, it also has a significant influence on my mind. My mom gave me a lot of suggestions on how to play violin professionally, and told me how to appreciate art sincerely as well. Her concept helped me overcome a lot of difficulties and when I play with my heart, I could finally catch the essence of beauty. Music has changed my life thoroughly and I will dedicate all my spirit to the fascinating dream of music.

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