英语短文改错 Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Lihua.When I am rea英语短文改错 Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Lihua.When I am reading the advertisement,I was great impressed by the job.I want to do something for the old.Therefore,I recommend me to you with he

英语短文改错 Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Lihua.When I am rea英语短文改错 Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Lihua.When I am reading the advertisement,I was great impressed by the job.I want to do something for the old.Therefore,I recommend me to you with he
英语短文改错 Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Lihua.When I am rea
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Lihua.When I am reading the advertisement,I was great impressed by the job.I want to do something for the old.Therefore,I recommend me to you with hesitation.I am now in the summer holidays and have enough time to work for you.However,I have some caring experiences because I onced looked after my grandma.The most important thing is I am patient and the old in our neighborhood likes chatting with me.If I am admitted,I will devote myself to take care of them.I can read newspapers to let them to learn about some latest affairs.I can do some washing,too.
Looking forward to your early reply.

英语短文改错 Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Lihua.When I am rea英语短文改错 Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Lihua.When I am reading the advertisement,I was great impressed by the job.I want to do something for the old.Therefore,I recommend me to you with he
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onced改成once
likes改成like
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Lihua.When I read the advertisement, I was deeply impressed by the job.I want to do something for the old.Therefore,I recommend myself to you without hesitation. I am now in...

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Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Lihua.When I read the advertisement, I was deeply impressed by the job.I want to do something for the old.Therefore,I recommend myself to you without hesitation. I am now in the summer holiday and have enough time to work for you.what's more ,I have some caring experience because I once looked after my grandma.The most important thing is I am patient and the old in our neighborhood like chatting with me.If I could be admitted, I will devote myself to taking care of them. I can read newspapers to let them learn about some latest affairs. I can do some washing,too.
Looking forward to your early reply.

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great改成greatly
want改成wanted
me改成myself
experience改成experiences
likes改成like
take改成taking
let them to 的to删除
希望能帮到你。

I'm Lihua.When I (am reading)read the advertisement, I was (great)greatly impressed by the job.I want to do something for the old.Therefore,I recommend (me)myself to you (with)without hesitation. I am...

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I'm Lihua.When I (am reading)read the advertisement, I was (great)greatly impressed by the job.I want to do something for the old.Therefore,I recommend (me)myself to you (with)without hesitation. I am now in the summer holidays and have enough time to work for you.(However)Moreover,I have some caring (experiences)experience because I (onced)once looked after my grandma.The most important thing is I am patient and the old in our neighborhood (likes)like chatting with me.If I am(were) admitted,I will(would) devote myself to (take)taking care of them. I can read (newspapers)newspaper to let them to(/) learn about some latest affairs. I can do some washing,too.
Looking forward to your early（/） reply SOON.

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1am --was 2experiences--experience

1. am-was, 2 . great-greatly, 3, me - myself 4, with-without, 5, however-and 6, onced-once 7, likes-like 8, am admitted- were admitted 9, let 不加to

用简单的词/句子，以避免错误:
Dear Sir/Madam,
APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF xxx(职位)
I beg to refer to the above application and your advertisement dated (XXX广告日期)
My name is Lihua. I am a student of X...

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用简单的词/句子，以避免错误:
Dear Sir/Madam,
APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF xxx(职位)
I beg to refer to the above application and your advertisement dated (XXX广告日期)
My name is Lihua. I am a student of XXX (学校名称). I am now on summer holidays.
I am very interested in the job because I have the time and experience to care for the elderly(长者/老年人). Previously I cared for my grandmother. I know how to look after the them with patience and love.
If I am offered the job, I will devote my time and heart to care for them. I will also read newspapers for them so that they will keep up with the current affairs. I can also do washing.
Thank you for your attention and consideration. I look forward to receiving a favorable reply.
Yours faithfully,
Lihua

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