大家帮我看看有没有病句I am going to be a writer in 10 years.I is busy every day.I get up at 11:00a.m..Naturally,my eat lunch at the restaurant.I always write in front of the computer,but also a jug of coffe on the table.I usually go to bed

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大家帮我看看有没有病句I am going to be a writer in 10 years.I is busy every day.I get up at 11:00a.m..Naturally,my eat lunch at the restaurant.I always write in front of the computer,but also a jug of coffe on the table.I usually go to bed
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大家帮我看看有没有病句I am going to be a writer in 10 years.I is busy every day.I get up at 11:00a.m..Naturally,my eat lunch at the restaurant.I always write in front of the computer,but also a jug of coffe on the table.I usually go to bed
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I am going to be a writer in 10 years.
I is busy every day.
I get up at 11:00a.m..Naturally,my eat lunch at the restaurant.
I always write in front of the computer,but also a jug of coffe on the table.
I usually go to bed late everday 1a.m..
But i like the job very much,because it daesn't effect my study.And i likes writing ,too.Because it's creative .
I will become an excellent writer.
I will fight hard for it.
实在惭愧啊^^^这是我第一次自己写英语作文啊!望大家把问题多多的指出来.在下定当感激不禁!

大家帮我看看有没有病句I am going to be a writer in 10 years.I is busy every day.I get up at 11:00a.m..Naturally,my eat lunch at the restaurant.I always write in front of the computer,but also a jug of coffe on the table.I usually go to bed
I AM busy every day.
I get up at 11:00am...OF COURSE,I have lunch at the restaurant.
I always write in front of A compter,WITH a jug of coffee on the table.
I go to bed late every day,at about 1am
But I like the job very much,because it doesn't AFFECT my SCHOOL WORK.And I like writing,too,because it's creative work.
I will become an excellent writer.
I will fight for it.

第二行是I IS么? I AM吧
my eat lunch at the restaurant改为I have my lunch in restaurant
I always write in front of the computer,but also a jug of coffe on the table
这 句话中的连词错了不能用 but also这个和 not o...

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第二行是I IS么? I AM吧
my eat lunch at the restaurant改为I have my lunch in restaurant
I always write in front of the computer,but also a jug of coffe on the table
这 句话中的连词错了不能用 but also这个和 not only用的
I usually go to bed late everday 1a.m.. 改为I usually go to bed AT 1 AM.
daesn't effect my 应该是have effect on ````
And i likes改为AND I LIKE``把TOO去掉
I will fight hard for it.改为 I WILL TRY MY BEST!

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第二行应该是I am busy every day.I eat lunch in restaurant.
I always write in computer,with a jug of coffe on the table.
毛病太多,不知如何改了

I am going to be a writer in 10 years.
I am busy every day.
I get up at 11:00am...OF COURSE, I have lunch at the restaurant.
I always write in front of A compter, WITH a jug of coffee o...

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I am going to be a writer in 10 years.
I am busy every day.
I get up at 11:00am...OF COURSE, I have lunch at the restaurant.
I always write in front of A compter, WITH a jug of coffee on the table.
I go to bed late every day, at about 1am
But I like the job very much, because it doesn't AFFECT my SCHOOL WORK. And I like writing, too, because it's creative work.
I will become an excellent writer.
I will fight for it.
这就对了 (手痛)

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