写一篇题目为what i did in the summer holiday的英语作文.演讲用的,两分钟.基本内容就是和同学聚会,做兼职,去广西旅游了.

写一篇题目为what i did in the summer holiday的英语作文.演讲用的,两分钟.基本内容就是和同学聚会,做兼职,去广西旅游了.
写一篇题目为what i did in the summer holiday的英语作文.演讲用的,两分钟.
基本内容就是和同学聚会,做兼职,去广西旅游了.

写一篇题目为what i did in the summer holiday的英语作文.演讲用的,两分钟.基本内容就是和同学聚会,做兼职,去广西旅游了.
楼上的筒子写得很丰富,但细节有些语法错误,小小更正一下：
I was very busy in the summer holiday.At first I had a school reunion with the former classmates.As we hadn't seen each other for a long time,this reunion was a good chance for us to enjoy the time.And then I planned to take a part-time job.I thought it was the most effective way to earn more money because I wanted to go on a trip.Afterwards,I went to Guangxi Province to travel there.It is one of the most beautiful places I have ever been to.There are many places of interest like Guilin,Yangshuo.The scennery there is very elegant.We enjoyed the the fresh air and blue sky and had a good rest.I believe it is the most wonderful moment in my summer holiday.

i was very busy in the summer holiday. at first i had a school reunion . the former classmates we couldn't play together for a long time. so reunion is a good chance for us to enjoy the time. and the...

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i was very busy in the summer holiday. at first i had a school reunion . the former classmates we couldn't play together for a long time. so reunion is a good chance for us to enjoy the time. and then i planned to take the part time job. i thought it was the most effective way to earn more money because i wanted to go on a trip. afterwards, i went to Guangxi Province to travel there. it was the one of the beautiful place i had every been to. there are many places of interest just like Guilin Yangshuo. The scennery there is very elegant. we enjoyed the the fresh air and blue sky and have a good rest. i believed it was the wonderful time in my summer holiday

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