本句语法不规范,帮我改一下some famous scientists who they take much times on their own experiments so as to cause their successful results, because some experiments need a lot of texts to point out their precision
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本句语法不规范,帮我改一下some famous scientists who they take much times on their own experiments so as to cause their successful results, because some experiments need a lot of texts to point out their precision
本句语法不规范,帮我改一下
some famous scientists who they take much times on their own experiments so as to cause their successful results, because some experiments need a lot of texts to point out their precision
本句语法不规范,帮我改一下some famous scientists who they take much times on their own experiments so as to cause their successful results, because some experiments need a lot of texts to point out their precision
1、who之后的they去掉,这是一个宾语从句,who在从句中作主语,they多余
2、take换成spend,take没有这样的用法,一般take用在“it takes 某人 时间 to do sth”
3、texts换成data,text是“文章”的意思,不明白你这里想表达什么,data是datum的复数,是“数据”的意思
4、cause这里从意思上说,没有错误,但是我觉得换成get"获得"会更好
我的英语水平不好,指出的错误不多,还请见谅.