请帮我检查一下语句和语法,非常急,Goodmorning/afternoon,(ladies and gentlemen/ladies/sirs).I’m glad to meet you .It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for this interview.I hope I can make a good performance today.First,pl

请帮我检查一下语句和语法,非常急,Goodmorning/afternoon,(ladies and gentlemen/ladies/sirs).I’m glad to meet you .It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for this interview.I hope I can make a good performance today.First,pl
请帮我检查一下语句和语法,非常急,
Good
morning/afternoon,(ladies and gentlemen/ladies/sirs).I’m glad to meet you .
It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for this interview.I hope I can make a good performance today.First,please let me introduce myself.My name is LiXiaoyin,You can call me Anna if you like.I’m an bright,confident girl from
Yantai.I’m 14 years old.studying in NO.2 middle school.I have many hobbies,such as singing songs,drawing pictures,traveling and so on.I like blue very much,because I think blue is classical andmysterious .My favourite animal is bird.I’ve kept a parrot at my house.Birds are great,they are cute and funny.
I really enjoy traveling,which I think is the best sport in the world.I have traveled many places,and I think Guilin is the most beautiful.It’s a good place to live.The environment there was clean and the rivers and mountains looked clear.The water in Guilin was so pure that you could drink it with out boiling.I had a good time there.This summer,I was told that I can go to the prairie with my mother.I was very excited when I heard the news.In my mind,the sights on the prairie are crazy.When the
weather in Yantai is hot,prairie still stays in spring.Can you imagine thousands of colorful flowers on the grassland?The clouds look like white sheep walking in the sky,and the lakes are just likesapphires.Proud horses run on the plain,the wind blows,and the grass vibrate.The sun blazes down on theprairie.What
a fairyland there!And it is said that the tea with milk is great tasty.I’d love to try
it.The people there are straightforward and friendly.They live in the houses with round roots called “yurt”.There isn’t any porke on the prairie,so the inhabitants
there only eat beef and mutton.Many tourists have to pack a lot of snacks because they don’t eat mutton or beef.Maybe I don’t need to worry about food,I like beef,and mutton is also OK.I’m dreaming about my vacation on the prairie these days.
That’s all,thank you.

请帮我检查一下语句和语法,非常急,Goodmorning/afternoon,(ladies and gentlemen/ladies/sirs).I’m glad to meet you .It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for this interview.I hope I can make a good performance today.First,pl
I hope I can 第一人称多用to do
一般来说blue 是calm and gentle
I’ve kept a parrot at my house用现在时即可
The environment there was clean 建议去there was
Birds are 伟大,巨大?
boiling换成 being boiled
What a fairyland there 加上 is
你已经写得很好了,作为一个初二的学生,我很佩服你,为自己的理想而努力

it is great honor to have this interview

不错的一篇文章，只是an和a的问题

. I’m an bright，an改为a
写得很不错

studying in NO.2 middle school.缺少主语:应该为I study in No.2 middle school
It’s a good place to live. 应该为 It’s a good place to live in
The environment there was clean and the rivers and mountains l...

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studying in NO.2 middle school.缺少主语:应该为I study in No.2 middle school
It’s a good place to live. 应该为 It’s a good place to live in
The environment there was clean and the rivers and mountains looked clear. The water in Guilin was so pure that you could drink it with out boiling. 此句应该用一般现在时,所以was,look,应用一般现在时
The clouds look like white sheep walking in the sky中的walking应用不定式to walk
很好的一篇文章

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it is great honor
I’m a bright
GUILIN was the most beautiful
a good place to live in
without boiling it
the tea with milk tastes great
they live in houses

文笔有些幼稚总体还行