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短文改错 跪求…… This morning on my way to sch短文改错 跪求…… This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank An old man was counting his money in the front of the b
短文改错 跪求…… This morning on my way to sch
短文改错 跪求…… This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down To make things bad his money was lying in all direction At once the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood there not know what to do Surprisingly everyone gave back the money they had just picked The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed To my great joy there are now a lot of nice people in your life It,s true what honesty is mofe important than money
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短文改错 跪求…… This morning on my way to sch短文改错 跪求…… This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank An old man was counting his money in the front of the b
This morning on my way to school I was deep (改为deeply) moved by what I saw outside a bank An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank Suddenly a young man came running and knocked （knocking） him down To make things bad （badly） his money was lying in all direction （directions） At once the people around rush（rushed） to pick the money up while the old man stood there not know what to do Surprisingly everyone gave back the money they had just picked （加up） The old man counted the money again and found that not （改为no） a single bill was （删去was） missed To my great joy there are now a lot of nice people in your（改为our） life It,s true what honesty is mofe（more） important than money
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