24小时内有答案送分,作文改错!（2）Why did so many audiences listen to Aristotle’s speeches?The reason is the ancient environment.Under this environment,People’s public communication tried to deal with the daily problem at that time.F

24小时内有答案送分,作文改错!（2）Why did so many audiences listen to Aristotle’s speeches?The reason is the ancient environment.Under this environment,People’s public communication tried to deal with the daily problem at that time.F
24小时内有答案送分,作文改错!（2）
Why did so many audiences listen to Aristotle’s speeches?The reason is the ancient environment.Under this environment,People’s public communication tried to deal with the daily problem at that time.For example,people were carious about the sharp of the earth.In Aristotle’s speeches,even though he just guessed the earth was a ball by watching the far mountain,his speaking was a way to solve people’s unknown.In fact,at Classical Period,people were beginning to use their poor knowledge to deal with the unknown things.
At last,when we evaluate the Aristotle’s speeches,we find that his persuasive speaking was effectively reminded in audience’s mind.After his speaking,many new orators and philosophers came out to do express their knowledge with their own styles.His speeches opened new communicated-windows for ancient people.Moreover,we also find that some of his speech sentences are still available for our daily lives.Aristotle’s still famous around the world.He not only contributed the development of science,he also improved the development of our communication.
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24小时内有答案送分,作文改错!（2）Why did so many audiences listen to Aristotle’s speeches?The reason is the ancient environment.Under this environment,People’s public communication tried to deal with the daily problem at that time.F
People’s public communication不要大写.
the sharp of the earth=〉the sharpness of the earth
was a ball =〉was a sphere
solve people’s unknown=>solve people’s unknown problem.
at Classical Period,=> during the Classical Period,
was effectively reminded in audience’s mind.=> effectively reminded the mind of the audience.
with their own styles => in their own styles
communicated-windows=>windows of communication
are still available => are still applicable
contributed the => contributed to the
he also improved=> but also improved