托福作文修改修改一下新托福作文,看看凑合能的几分吧.In my opinion,parents are the best teachers in most situations.Because we grow up with parents ,they know exactly our shortcomings and advantages,their suggestions and instucti

托福作文修改修改一下新托福作文,看看凑合能的几分吧.In my opinion,parents are the best teachers in most situations.Because we grow up with parents ,they know exactly our shortcomings and advantages,their suggestions and instucti
托福作文修改
修改一下新托福作文,看看凑合能的几分吧.
In my opinion,parents are the best teachers in most situations.Because
we grow up with parents ,they know exactly our shortcomings and advantages,their suggestions and instuctions are the most pertinent for us.
Since the baby period of children,parents begin to teach us.Parents can show the kid how to speak ,walk and some basic human acts regardless how hard or boring it is.
When I was 2 or 3 years old,I cannot speak clearly.It means that no one can know what I mean except my mother ,while other same old kids can express themselves accurately.Some old neighbors told my mother I would never say something distinctly.Someone said that I needed a operation.But my mother kept teaching me until one day everyone can clearly learn my points.It is my mother’s effort that makes me donot have regrets in my spoken language.
To a child,what she or he can be taught from parents is not just basic actions,but also some valuable virtues of human,such as honesty,kind.Parents can teach children these goodness from they are little,which can make them remember these excellent characters all their lives.
Also,parents are the most intimate with children.As a result,they will teach children without reservations.They impart all their knoeledge,experience,shills to children.
However,sometimes parents are bad teachers.When the children learn that what their parents do is totally different from what they say ,a lot of the children will believe the actions rather than the words.And plus,some parents’ methods of educating are not proper,which could break the children’ s heart.
In summary ,I believe that parents are the best teachers.One suggestion is that parents should learn how to treat with children,and how to teach their children from books or other’s experience.
我已经写到差到看不懂了，欲哭无泪啊

托福作文修改修改一下新托福作文,看看凑合能的几分吧.In my opinion,parents are the best teachers in most situations.Because we grow up with parents ,they know exactly our shortcomings and advantages,their suggestions and instucti
i think this is great.and ,here i just wanna give you some advise.
first ,i wanna say that tofel is held by americans not chinese ,right so you are writting articles according to their locgical system or use more terms they often use ,that will make your words more vivid to them or more amiable to them .so you should read more and learn some common slangs.for example ,if you exchange the word "best friend" with "bestie",it you bring a closer relationship between you and the reader.you feel me

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我怎么看不懂？？晕死~~