谁能帮我修改一下英文简历~急用~I am an honest,trustworthy and a responsible girl.I graduated from Shanghai University and have successfully completed courses in each semester and scholarships.I am also independent and have a good communi

谁能帮我修改一下英文简历~急用~I am an honest,trustworthy and a responsible girl.I graduated from Shanghai University and have successfully completed courses in each semester and scholarships.I am also independent and have a good communi
谁能帮我修改一下英文简历~急用~
I am an honest,trustworthy and a responsible girl.I graduated from Shanghai University and have successfully completed courses in each semester and scholarships.I am also independent and have a good communication skill.In my daily time,I love singing,music and travelling,etc.I am willing to work under pressure with leardership quality.I will not be afraid of hard work that will make me more sedulous and involve into society.Like to use you identify the talents,explore my life journey!

谁能帮我修改一下英文简历~急用~I am an honest,trustworthy and a responsible girl.I graduated from Shanghai University and have successfully completed courses in each semester and scholarships.I am also independent and have a good communi
I am an honest,trustworthy and responsible person.I graduated from Shanghai University and received scholarship in each semester.I have a good personality,good social skills and some leadership qualities.In my spare time,I love to sing,listen to music and travel.I am good at working under pressure,I am not afraid of the challenges my work will bring me because they will only help me to work harder.I would like to have the opportunity to work for you and have the chance to experience a new journey in my life!
我改得非常口语化,只是在你写的基础上把意思表达方式改了一点,没有添加或去除什么,希望能帮上你一点忙

I am a girl of honest, reliable and responsible . I have graduated from Shanghai University and have successfully completed courses in each semester and scholarships. I am also independent and can ma...

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I am a girl of honest, reliable and responsible . I have graduated from Shanghai University and have successfully completed courses in each semester and scholarships. I am also independent and can make a good communication. In my spare time, I love singing, music and travelling, etc. I enjoy working under pressure up to leardership quality. I don't care about hard work and it will make me more sedulous and involve into society quickly. wish you identify my talents and explore my life journey!
简历来说，你写的太复杂了，把你的基本情况介绍好就行了，你的英语不太像简历，好像是写文章，建议去网上查下模版，本人拙见。

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你的住址。婚否？。户口。 联系电话。甚至连个油箱。都没有。？
你期望从事什么职业？。期望的薪水？
是否有工作经验？基本情况啥都没写。 这算是简历么？修改？怎么修改？。
全改了还行。
sister. you really interesting。

I am willing to work under pressure with leardership quality.
(i have great leadership skills and I perform best under presure.)
最后一句看不懂说的啥。skill和qualification要挪到上面去。把爱好和每天活动这方面放到下面来， 爱好再加一些这样...

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I am willing to work under pressure with leardership quality.
(i have great leadership skills and I perform best under presure.)
最后一句看不懂说的啥。skill和qualification要挪到上面去。把爱好和每天活动这方面放到下面来， 爱好再加一些这样会让employer看起来你的能管理自己，自而对你有兴趣。 一般像什么team sports，学要或者锻炼领导能力的运动，把它写上去。

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